Reviews by legolasalicious
*COMPLETED* Exiled for murder, Autheil wanders middle earth, looking to her old ways to survive. The shadow of Mordor takes a hold of middle earth, and Autheil finds herself doubting herself and everyone around her. When all seems lost, the elves being to look to her, the traitor and outcast for aid. But a life of bloodshed cannot be undone. Autheil begins to embrace who she truly is and with it begins to loose all she holds dear.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Torture, Violence
Series: The Prophacy
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24634 Read Count: 7083
Published: Jan 31 2013 Updated: Feb 21 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: The Council Of Elrond Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Hahaha everyone's making oaths of epicness and Authiel's just like O.o I'm not that senseless

Author's Response: I guess i thought another 10th walker would be boring! Thank you for reviewing
Date: Feb 21 2013
Title: Chapter 8: The Sun Is Broken And The Night Calls Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
LAMEIA!! OMG is she like Lameia from Merlin? Because I would be blown away by that plot bunny,as if she was evil from the inside, like an inside agent in Rivendell! Do you watch Merlin? (By the way I know that was completely missing the point of this very well written chapter, but I freaked when I saw Lamiea)

Author's Response: Yes that was the idea...Lameia from Merlin... yes i watch merlin, i used to write fanfic for it too!!! Any way thank you for reviewing :D
Date: Feb 21 2013
Title: Chapter 10: Who Am I? Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Elrohir is starting to warm up to Authiel eh? Well, that's something I thought I'd never see. It was pretty awesome when he just read her like a book and compliments her. It made me laugh when he ends it with 'most of the time though, you're a bitch'.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, i think Elrohir is trying to accept Autheil for who she is and Autheil's trying to be nicer to people but failing slightly!!! One again thank you for reading
Date: Feb 21 2013
Title: Chapter 11: The Beginning Of An End Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed

Author's Response: Haha, thank you for reviewing :D
Date: Feb 21 2013
Title: Chapter 12: Bitter, Twisted, Anger Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Let him live! (Hey that's a Les Mis song...) I'm guessing that they will get to Rivendell and Elrond will be like MY SON! NO! Then he'll see Authiel carrying him and be like its your fault. Then Nendir will be an idiot and say yeah you're fault blah blah then she gets angry.


Author's Response: Hahaha, the Nendir bit made me laugh so much :D I would say wait and see but i've finished the story!!! Thanks again
Date: Feb 21 2013
Title: Chapter 13: To Accept Who I Am I Must Let Go Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
NICK FURY!! You got the dare you thing from the Avengers HISHE didn't you?! (Please say you did otherwise I'm going to feel like an idiot...)

Anyway! The chapter! Elrohir! You have to let him live! Lamiea! You have to kill her painfully! Elladen! You have to break his heart so that there can be a beautiful healing scene later! Nendir! Has to learn some manners! Mereer! Has to stop making random prophecies and giving bad advice!

Have I forgotten anyone?


Authiel! She has to fulfill the prophecy whilst being totally badass at the same time!

Author's Response: Ha ye i got it from Nick fury! Sorry,spoiler... Elrohir's death is going to start the prophecy!! Lameia is gonna get it hopefully! Ha Nendir does indeed need manners thanks for the review
Date: Feb 21 2013
Title: Chapter 16: You Owe Me Your Allegiance Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
I used that line in my story! In 'To Mend A Broken Soul' Tauriel says “I'm gonna pound you till your mouth and anus reverse their functions!”

Anyway! So much has happened. Woop! Lameia is dead! Authiel is queen! But what will happen now?

Author's Response: Oh hahaha It seems thay have a lot in common?!, Thank you for the review :D
Date: Feb 22 2013
Title: Chapter 17: The Time Is Near Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Oh my god! Nendir-but she didn't even get to say goodbye!

I really liked how you described her arrival. I also thought it was good you didn't make a big deal of the destruction of the ring because it didn't relate to what was going on.

Author's Response: It shows manners gets you a long way!!! Anyway thank you so much :D
Date: Feb 22 2013
Title: Chapter 18: The End... Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
That final little bit when they died was beautiful. That's all I need to say.

Author's Response: Thank you...I have a habit of killing people off in this one don't i?!
Date: Feb 22 2013
Title: Chapter 19: Epilouge Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Wait WHAT?! They LIVE?!

Oh. Okay. Well in that case, I prefer the second ending. I liked the first but it was sad and I think she deserves happy.

So the end of the series huh?

Well its been a really great trilogy to follow. You've written it really well- there's only one thing. Before you post them, you should get someone else to just read through it. Just to point out stuff like grammar and spelling and spacing. I would offer but I'm too busy summoning the courage to submit a new chapter to my story -_-

Author's Response: yes they live!! That's because the entire three story's end up being a bedtime story for Autheil's daughter told by Autheil who changed the ending!!! As for the grammar and spelling and spacing, i'm going to look through it asap! I was hoping to write a mini story for Lameia and Autheil for those who will miss Autheil and well it will be the story of how their lives are intertwined up until Lameia's murder!! Anyway thank you so much for all your reviews :D
Date: Feb 22 2013
Angel In The Ashes by calatheil Rated: PG-13 starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]

Haldir is Lothlorien's pride, arrogant and stubborn.So When Mandos takes pity on a young woman in the 21st century and give her a second chance of life all seems well. Only there is a catch, the woman will not remember who she was, she will be a new person living a new life. Then Mandos's plan begins to go wrong and the woman he had plans for, ends up in Lorien with a dark secret, a hidden past even she is not aware of and life at stake. It will take more than Haldir's reputation to overcome the problems she face's and his feelings for her. If only he knew it was not simple.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Celeborn, Galadriel, Haldir, Orophin, Rúmil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, First Draft, Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5007 Read Count: 4698
Published: Feb 19 2013 Updated: Dec 30 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Secrets of a Dreamer Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Sounding really good so far..I like how you haven't revealed much about her past yet. Oh, I can't seem to find the next chapter button 0.0

Please update so I can click on I ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much... Once Earths angel is compete i promise i will concentrate on this :D
Date: Feb 21 2013
Contortion by calatheil Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 3]
Summary: COMPLETE. Autheil is Lameia's worst nightmare. Their lives bound together by exile and the deaths of Autheil's clan. Lameia is Autheil's sworn foe, and Autheil is hers, both want the other dead. As Auhteil hunts Lameia and her family across middle earth more and more of her friends surrender to torment by Lameia's hand, Autheil becomes stronger but could this cause her to loose those closest to her, or will it bring them closer together, as all folk in middle earth say time waits for no man, and time is running out.
Categories: Crossovers, Off Topic Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Glorfindel, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, First Draft, Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28260 Read Count: 9943
Published: Feb 22 2013 Updated: Jun 18 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Fighting, but not alone. Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Really good chapter! I thought the description in this one was especially good! So...things are getting going now? Great! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much...I was unsure about it but i'm glad you enjoyed it, Another chapter will be uploaded soon.
Date: Apr 01 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Lamiea's Birth Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
LAMEIA!! Oh my gondor! She's back! Yay! More Autheil!

Author's Response: Couldn't part with her!! any way this one covers the more dark side of Autheil's life! Hopefully it will be as successful as the others :D
Date: Feb 22 2013
Summary: Thorin never realised how troublesome his nephews could be...
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Dwarf Fluff!
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 807 Read Count: 979
Published: Jun 04 2013 Updated: Jun 04 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
This has just melted my heart. Write more of them

Author's Response: Aww I am thrilled you liked it! :D you've made me so happy even now I'm considering what else young Fili and Kili could get up too...!
Date: Jun 15 2013
Summary: A collection of potentially embarrassing and awkward situations between members of the Fellowship. For example, what happens when Gimli insults Legolas? Or when the hobbits decide play a practical joke? And what is Boromir's secret he doesn't want anyone to know?
Categories: Book-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9126 Read Count: 5652
Published: Jun 11 2013 Updated: Jun 11 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 10: Mistakes Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
I really enjoyed this story! You did really well to keep them all in character, despite the awkward/amusing situations you put them in. My favourite chapters were Eating Habits, Food and Hair! Great story-I hope there's one for The Two Towers!

Author's Response: Wow I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :D I am in the process of planning one for Two Towers and also for Return of the King, so you're in luck! :P unfortunately I don't expect Frodo and Sam to feature much, as there's nothing really funny about their situation! But I'm sure Merry and Pippin will get up to enough mischief for all of them! :P
Date: Jun 15 2013