Reviews by Elbereth
Summary: Aragorn thinks about his love for Arwen
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn
Genres: Romance, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39 Read Count: 4042
Published: Oct 20 2004 Updated: Oct 20 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: ...And I love you Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Beautiful. Please write some more!
Date: Feb 15 2012
Summary: When Pippin gets inquisitive during a rest break, Legolas finds himself answering many of the questions that have long plagued his own mind. For immortality is not only a blessing, but also a curse in many ways. One-shot.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Pippin
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1238 Read Count: 4538
Published: Nov 26 2004 Updated: Nov 26 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Blessing and a Curse Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
This shows Legolas' pain beautifully, and reflects the pain of all the Firstborn. Wonderful- excellent work. :)
Date: Apr 22 2012
Summary: A Poem about Gollum and the Ring and Sméagol and his guilt over murdering his friend. Short and sad.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Gollum
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97 Read Count: 1783
Published: Nov 26 2004 Updated: Nov 26 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Sinful Guilt Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
"Short and sad" is an excellent description for this, and it captures the Gollum/Smeagol/Ring triangle perfectly.
I cannot fault it in any way- it's absoloutly beautiful. You should be damn proud, and it's obvious that you have quite a talent when it comes to poetry, as I have read some of your other poems, and they are all beautiful. Well done.
Date: Apr 22 2012
Summary: After walking the paths of the dead, Legolas hears the cry of the gulls for the first time, fulfilling the prophecy of Galadriel.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli, Elrohir, Elladan
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2237 Read Count: 1797
Published: Nov 27 2004 Updated: Nov 27 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Alas For The Wailing Of The Gulls Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Wonderful, truly wonderful. It shows the longing of all of the Firstborn, and captures it brilliantly. Well done!
Date: Mar 13 2012
Summary: The title says it all. I need to give my cousin, Lisa credit. She helped me put this together.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Gimli, Legolas
Genres: Parody
Warnings: None
Series: The 10 songs/dances etc That Would Confuse/Scare etc the LOTR Characters
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 219 Read Count: 4585
Published: Feb 01 2006 Updated: Feb 01 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Funny List Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Hilarious! Please do more. XD
Date: Feb 15 2012
In Flux by GreenWoodElleth, Adora Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 46]
Summary: Yeah, sure. I'd thought about it. I'd totally considered it. Going to Middle Earth by some magical means...yada, yada, yada the whole nine yards(with sexy elves to boot.) It was something I considered much in the way somebody would consider a holiday they hoped to but knew hey would never have.
I hadn't thought about dying in a bus accident. I hadn't thought about my friends being there. I hadn't thought about waking up with a new body, a new name, and a new history.
And to make it all the more dramatic...I am soo dead if I don't get my Latin homework in on time.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Celeborn, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Haldir, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11188 Read Count: 26999
Published: Nov 29 2006 Updated: Sep 11 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Normal Day Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Loving every word. Please update soon!
Date: Feb 15 2012
8 by iggybaby Rated: G [Reviews - 22]
Summary: I wrote this poem for a 7 year old boy who's dying from cancer. His wish was to recieve the most birthday cards, so he could get into the guiness book of world records. He's turning eight at the end of may, thus the title being called 8.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59 Read Count: 5363
Published: May 09 2007 Updated: May 09 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
That was really, really beautiful. I hope the little boy does get into the Guiness Book of Records, as I'm sure he deserves it.
Date: Jan 01 2012
Summary: A poem of Arwen, Luthien, and Elbereth Githoniel.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: Three things were given to the Elves under the Sun: Poetry, Prose, and Song
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64 Read Count: 4643
Published: Nov 21 2007 Updated: Nov 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I like that a lot. :D It is, as others have said, very Elvish.
Date: Feb 15 2012
Summary: The misery of fate, for Níniel to discover that her brother is also her husband, and the father of her child.

A drabble based on the story in Unfinished Tales.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Other Canon Character
Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103 Read Count: 3093
Published: Jun 28 2008 Updated: Jun 28 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Beautiful. This really shows the agony of Níniel's discovery.
Date: Feb 15 2012
Summary: The king was not surprised as the dwarf told him about his lover.
Categories: Book Verse Slash Characters: Aragorn, Gimli, Legolas
Genres: General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318 Read Count: 3647
Published: Nov 17 2008 Updated: Nov 17 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1/1 Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I've always thought about Legolas/Gimli- and I've always considered it a bit strange...However, I like that a lot and have now changed my mind. :)
Date: Feb 15 2012
Summary: A response to the A Gollum-ish Challenge by Ethee.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Frodo, Gollum, Sam, Sméagol
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Challenges: A Gollum-ish Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318 Read Count: 3579
Published: Jul 20 2010 Updated: Jul 20 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Gollum's Monologue Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Amazing. I can see that. XD
Date: Apr 01 2012
You've Got Fanmail! by Melda Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 112]
Summary: The members of the Fellowship must learn to deal with one of the worst aspects of being famous...fanmail..written by the horror of horrors, fangirls.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn
Genres: None
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Challenges: Hilarious stories!!!
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35811 Read Count: 49829
Published: Apr 12 2011 Updated: Jul 24 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Fanmail and the chaos it causes Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
That was absoloutly hilarious! XD I loved every word. :D

Author's Response: I'm happy that you loved it so much. There's a sequel that I'm working on right now with even more hilarity to come. I hope that you'll read that as well. :D <3 Love and peanutbutter, Melda.
Date: Jan 09 2012
Summary: Edward Cullen and Bella Swan fall into Middle-Earth and become the most hated beings in Middle-Earth in about five seconds.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3695 Read Count: 7160
Published: Sep 25 2011 Updated: Feb 26 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six: STAY PUT! Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I am a fellow Twilight hater, and I LOVE this. XD It's hilarious and I can't see why you don't have more reviews...
So I'm proud to be your first reviewer. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I glad u think its funny i thought it sucked or something cuz no one was reviewing so thanks!
Date: Jan 22 2012
Summary: In the last year of the Third Age, the Nazgul spread out to search for "Shire..Baggins". Tempers run short, and they fight among themselves as much as they search for the Ring.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Adunaphel, Nazgûl, Witch King
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: The Khamul Stories
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16335 Read Count: 10440
Published: Jan 07 2012 Updated: Jun 02 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The River Isen Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I like the way you've described the Nazgul's fear of water. Very nice. :)

Author's Response: They all have it to some degree (except for Angmar). Tolkien himself observed their fear of water and ability to move around the landscape were inconsistant. I resolved it by saying that walking across over flat stones was the same as "walking dryshod over a bridge", which they can do.
Date: Jan 07 2012
Summary: Some funny (and slightly corney) jokes for all you LOTR fans!
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Extreme/taboo Fetish
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1031 Read Count: 2958
Published: Jan 27 2012 Updated: Feb 10 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Jokes! Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Yep, I loved that. Hilarious! XD
Date: Jan 27 2012
Summary: Lost and alone
Parents killed by orcs
Can the Elves save her?
Will she get a new family?
Will some old memories re surface?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Celeborn, Galadriel, Haldir, Original Character, Orophin, Rúmil
Genres: Family, Friendship, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Graphic Sex, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4802 Read Count: 6968
Published: Jan 28 2012 Updated: Apr 06 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9: A visit from Lorien, Valar of Dreams. Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I like how you portray Lorien. Very nice. :)
Date: Feb 17 2012
Summary: The wild is a mysterious thing. All life on earth will do whatever it must to survive. Cassandra Tassity is about to learn what the forests will do to survive. Brought into the time of darkness Cassandra must survive the war of the ring to fufil her duty. LegolasxOC
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66364 Read Count: 4515
Published: Feb 13 2012 Updated: Oct 10 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Depatures Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I do love OCs in the Fellowship...
Cassy's such a likeable character; I like this a lot. :)
Proud to be your first reviewer- and I'm adding this to my favourites now. :D
Date: Feb 17 2012
Title: Chapter 11: Cassandra of the White Willow Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
OMG! Please write more soon. :)
Date: Feb 17 2012
Summary: Erik, a village boy, gets caught up in the Great War when he assists Theodred before the battle at the Fords of Isen. We follow Erik from there to The Black Gates.

The tale is 12 chapters long, and the following is the first chapter.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Théodred
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1179 Read Count: 570
Published: Feb 18 2012 Updated: Feb 18 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I like this a lot. :)
Please post more!
Date: Feb 18 2012
A New Hope by nmd529 Rated: R [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Neisa has lost everything she has ever loved, and expects nothing more for her lonely life. But then she stumbles upon Lord Boromir on his quest to Rivendell, and is thrown into an adventure and love she could never have even dreamed of. Boromir/OC
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Boromir
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10218 Read Count: 2554
Published: Mar 03 2012 Updated: Mar 21 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I like this a lot. As GloryBeeDub said, many people picture and portray Boromir as evil, simply because he made a mistake. This shows another side to him, which I like. :)
Date: Mar 23 2012
Summary: Girl Fans are found all over the world, a girl fan is a obviously a girl who is obsessed with a singer, actor, character, what ever! This is a short truth to all you girls out there, and men...well this is what they are like.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 440 Read Count: 545
Published: Mar 05 2012 Updated: Mar 05 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I know exactly why you're writing this, as I only recently got over the fact that I wasn't going to meet Viggo Mortensen, or Orlando Bloom, and neither of them were about to marry me. Sadly. Though I can dream... ;)

Author's Response: I know, that's all I do is dream...thanks for reading!
Date: Mar 07 2012
Summary:

Lane's story continues as she arrives in Edoras. Lane knew what it was to fight for the honor of her country, but she has never fought to help save innocent lives. And a closeness has grown between Legolas and Lane, but will their friendship survive it?

Protect and Serve: To Serve


Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Eomer, Eowyn, Erkenbrand, Gamling, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gríma, Háma, Legolas, Merry, Namo / Mandos, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Pippin, Saruman, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Violence
Series: Protect and Serve
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38053 Read Count: 5521
Published: Mar 14 2012 Updated: Jun 04 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: The Making of Men Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Wonderful. Your writing was very emotive, especially when you wrote about the boys turning into men with the coming of the dawn.
Love it! :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that part. I always thought it was very sad to think of how many childhoods were lost in that battle.

 

And I'm finally back with a new chapter, so check it out!

 

Lasarina

Date: Mar 31 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Try to Keep the Faith Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I was terrified that you'd abandoned this- I can't tell you how glad I was when I got an email saying that you'd updated!! Thank you!! :)

I'm so glad that Legolas and Lane have now "plighted their troth" and I only hope you don't do something to wreck their hapiness. If you do, I shall cry. Just a warning. ;)

Author's Response:

This story it all pretty well plotted out in my mind, so I won't abandon it. And hopefully I won't leave you hanging for so long again either!

Thanks for sticking with me!

 

Check out the new chapter!

 

Lasarina

Date: May 27 2012
Title: Chapter 5: The Parting Glass Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
'Twas a joy to read, as always.
I especially liked the inclusion of Lane's family history with the Irish parting toast and chapter title- it was a nice touch; and the twist too, sending Lane to Minas Tirith with Gandalf and Pippin. :)
Looking forward to Book Three!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!

Check out the first chapter of the final story!

Lasarina

Date: Jun 04 2012
Summary:

Prompted by Aragorn, the Fellowship goes on a roadtrip through the newly-transformed Middle-earth after the War of the Ring.


Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1791 Read Count: 957
Published: Mar 17 2012 Updated: Mar 18 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: What's Up With Aragorn? Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Love it. Please update soon! :D
Date: Mar 17 2012