Beautiful. Please write some more!
This shows Legolas' pain beautifully, and reflects the pain of all the Firstborn. Wonderful- excellent work. :)
"Short and sad" is an excellent description for this, and it captures the Gollum/Smeagol/Ring triangle perfectly.
I cannot fault it in any way- it's absoloutly beautiful. You should be damn proud, and it's obvious that you have quite a talent when it comes to poetry, as I have read some of your other poems, and they are all beautiful. Well done.
Wonderful, truly wonderful. It shows the longing of all of the Firstborn, and captures it brilliantly. Well done!
Hilarious! Please do more. XD
Loving every word. Please update soon!
That was really, really beautiful. I hope the little boy does get into the Guiness Book of Records, as I'm sure he deserves it.
I like that a lot. :D It is, as others have said, very Elvish.
Beautiful. This really shows the agony of Níniel's discovery.
I've always thought about Legolas/Gimli- and I've always considered it a bit strange...However, I like that a lot and have now changed my mind. :)
Amazing. I can see that. XD
That was absoloutly hilarious! XD I loved every word. :D
Author's Response: I'm happy that you loved it so much. There's a sequel that I'm working on right now with even more hilarity to come. I hope that you'll read that as well. :D <3 Love and peanutbutter, Melda.
I am a fellow Twilight hater, and I LOVE this. XD It's hilarious and I can't see why you don't have more reviews...
So I'm proud to be your first reviewer. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I glad u think its funny i thought it sucked or something cuz no one was reviewing so thanks!
I like the way you've described the Nazgul's fear of water. Very nice. :)
Author's Response: They all have it to some degree (except for Angmar). Tolkien himself observed their fear of water and ability to move around the landscape were inconsistant. I resolved it by saying that walking across over flat stones was the same as "walking dryshod over a bridge", which they can do.
Yep, I loved that. Hilarious! XD
I like how you portray Lorien. Very nice. :)
I do love OCs in the Fellowship...
Cassy's such a likeable character; I like this a lot. :)
Proud to be your first reviewer- and I'm adding this to my favourites now. :D
OMG! Please write more soon. :)
I like this a lot. :)
Please post more!
I like this a lot. As GloryBeeDub said, many people picture and portray Boromir as evil, simply because he made a mistake. This shows another side to him, which I like. :)