Reviews by Elbereth
Summary: Girl Fans are found all over the world, a girl fan is a obviously a girl who is obsessed with a singer, actor, character, what ever! This is a short truth to all you girls out there, and men...well this is what they are like.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 440 Read Count: 498
Published: Mar 05 2012 Updated: Mar 05 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I know exactly why you're writing this, as I only recently got over the fact that I wasn't going to meet Viggo Mortensen, or Orlando Bloom, and neither of them were about to marry me. Sadly. Though I can dream... ;)

Author's Response: I know, that's all I do is dream...thanks for reading!
Date: Mar 07 2012
Summary:

Lane's story continues as she arrives in Edoras. Lane knew what it was to fight for the honor of her country, but she has never fought to help save innocent lives. And a closeness has grown between Legolas and Lane, but will their friendship survive it?

Protect and Serve: To Serve


Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Eomer, Eowyn, Erkenbrand, Gamling, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gríma, Háma, Legolas, Merry, Namo / Mandos, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Pippin, Saruman, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Violence
Series: Protect and Serve
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38053 Read Count: 5381
Published: Mar 14 2012 Updated: Jun 04 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: The Making of Men Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Wonderful. Your writing was very emotive, especially when you wrote about the boys turning into men with the coming of the dawn.
Love it! :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that part. I always thought it was very sad to think of how many childhoods were lost in that battle.

 

And I'm finally back with a new chapter, so check it out!

 

Lasarina

Date: Mar 31 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Try to Keep the Faith Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I was terrified that you'd abandoned this- I can't tell you how glad I was when I got an email saying that you'd updated!! Thank you!! :)

I'm so glad that Legolas and Lane have now "plighted their troth" and I only hope you don't do something to wreck their hapiness. If you do, I shall cry. Just a warning. ;)

Author's Response:

This story it all pretty well plotted out in my mind, so I won't abandon it. And hopefully I won't leave you hanging for so long again either!

Thanks for sticking with me!

 

Check out the new chapter!

 

Lasarina

Date: May 27 2012
Title: Chapter 5: The Parting Glass Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
'Twas a joy to read, as always.
I especially liked the inclusion of Lane's family history with the Irish parting toast and chapter title- it was a nice touch; and the twist too, sending Lane to Minas Tirith with Gandalf and Pippin. :)
Looking forward to Book Three!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!

Check out the first chapter of the final story!

Lasarina

Date: Jun 04 2012
Summary:

Prompted by Aragorn, the Fellowship goes on a roadtrip through the newly-transformed Middle-earth after the War of the Ring.


Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1791 Read Count: 905
Published: Mar 17 2012 Updated: Mar 18 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: What's Up With Aragorn? Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Love it. Please update soon! :D
Date: Mar 17 2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Axe and Bow Oil Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I can picture Legolas and Gimli setting up a business together. ;)
Love it.
Date: Mar 18 2012
Summary:

Once upon a time, there was an FBI agent who had given up on love; that is, until an expensive car showed up in front of her house. The next thing she knew, she was learning how to surf, meeting celebrities, and realizing that not everyone in the world needs to be put in handcuffs.


Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Dominic Monaghan
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25861 Read Count: 7582
Published: Mar 20 2012 Updated: Aug 22 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: What's a Jaguar Doing on My Street? Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Love it. :) I'm looking forward to reading more of this.
Date: Mar 23 2012
Title: Chapter 2: Dinner with Dom Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Again, love it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am in the process of working on chapter three! Have a great day :)
Date: Mar 27 2012
Title: Chapter 3: The Beach Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Yes! Breakthrough! Wonderful as always. And yet you say you're rusty...?!
Date: May 04 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Pot Roast and Potatoes Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
And here we go... ;)
Wonderful, as always. It's officially joined my favourites' list!

Author's Response:

Please do not think I have not appreciated your comments because I have not responded...they mean a lot!

Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it, and I really think you will like what is to come. Blessings.

Date: May 17 2012
Title: Chapter 5: 576-5437 Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Sod James- I hope she tells him to bog off...
Great! I especially love the serial killer joke. ;)

Author's Response:

I know! Whatever will she do about James?? ;)

lol Thank you! It randomly came to my head and I thought I'd add it to my story. Thanks again for the kind review! :)

Date: May 20 2012
Title: Chapter 6: A Broken Budget, Or Heart? Which Is Better? Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
YES!! He said it!!! You have made my day now. ;)
Good luck at your summer school. :)

Author's Response:

Yay, I am happy to have made your day! ;)

And thank you! Luckily, my next class does not start for a month and a half. I am now working on chapter seven =) Take care and thanks again!

Date: Jun 01 2012
Title: Chapter 7: An Asinine Decision Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I do feel so inclined!

Wow... You certainly know how to add a twist to a story- well done! :)
Date: Jun 09 2012
Title: Chapter 8: A Painful Phone Call Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Wow... What a bombshell to end on. Things better get better from here; no pressure...

Don't worry about the wait, it was certainly worth waiting for. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind review and for reading!

Ooooh don't worry, I have other things planned for Andrea and Dominic ;)

Date: Jul 11 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Yes, I'm mentally kicking Andrea right now. What is she doing?!

Nice twist, by the way, but Dominic better come back soon...

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for always taking the time to read and review my story. It really means a lot, and I hope to never disappoint!

I know...whatever will we do with Andrea? ;) And don't worry about Dominic! His part in this story is not even close to being done. :D

Date: Jul 13 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Lunch Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
You've managed to make me both hate and love Andy at exactly the same time, which is quite an achievement, so I congratulate you on that, and on yet another excellent chapter! (Though I may not have liked what happened...) >.<

Good luck in your classes!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Elbereth, for this comment and all of your other wonderful comments you have left for my story! Hm, Andy is certainly going through some rough times. Hopefully she will be able to redeem herself before the end of the story ;)

Thanks so much!

~Blessings

Date: Aug 09 2012
Title: Chapter 11: Not Quite Alright Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
You are so good at making me both hate and love Andy at the same time...

Anyway, great chapter, and nice twist having Billy arrive at the door to see whether Andy was alright. I can't help hoping that Dominic will arrive early and sort things out... And yes, I am one for happy-endings. ;)
Date: Aug 15 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Caught Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
YES!! Bye-bye James, hello Dominic! You have made me feel so much happier- thank you! :D
Date: Aug 17 2012
Title: Chapter 13: And One More Thing Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
How dare you ruin my day like that?! I was convinced that everything was going to be all nice and happy, and then you stick THAT right at the end. I have to hand it to you, that was one hell of a bombshell- and an unpleasant one at that.

Other than that, I have no criticism whatsoever (if you can call the above criticism- it was kindly meant) but you better be quick with the sequel...

That's all from me, but thank you so much for making this such an enjoyable story to read right from the start- with so many twists and turns in the plot. Amazing.

No galu govad gen.
Date: Aug 22 2012
Summary: It's April 1st, and Mordor's Official Website tells of Sauron's overthrow by his most trusted lieutenants. Aragorn and Gandalf try to figure out what it means.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Gandalf / Olorin
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 324 Read Count: 980
Published: Apr 01 2012 Updated: Apr 01 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Mordor Under New Management Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Love that... XD Specially for April Fool's Day.
Date: Apr 01 2012
A Porcelain Doll by Sivan Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 3]
Summary: There is a murderer around Mirkwood, who is looking to complete his collection…
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Angst, Family, General, Horror, Suspense, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 765 Read Count: 1209
Published: Apr 13 2012 Updated: Apr 13 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1/1 Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Very creppy, but I guess that's the idea. ;)
Nice.
Date: Apr 14 2012
Summary: Braedia, a woman of Gondor, is banished. She wanders the Wilds, only to be discovered by a certain Third Marshal of the Riddermark. With war closing in, how long can Braedia keep her past a secret?

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Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Boromir, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Legolas, Original Character, Théoden
Genres: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61071 Read Count: 10789
Published: May 14 2012 Updated: Jun 01 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Have only just discovered this- which is shocking- so I have been catching up. ;)
It is wonderfully gripping, and very well written. Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Date: May 19 2012
Summary:

Lane's story culminates as she and the remaining Fellowship follow their own paths to Gondor. Lane finally thinks she has a shot at the happiness she's never before experienced, but choices are yet to be made if she ever wants a taste of it. Will she be allowed to stay in Middle-earth, or will she even be given a choice?

To Honor


Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Beregond, Bergil, Denethor, Elladan, Elrohir, Eomer, Eowyn, Erkenbrand, Eru / Iluvatar, Faramir, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Halbarad, Imrahil, Ioreth, Legolas, Merry, Namo / Mandos, Nazgûl, Original Character, Pippin, Sauron, The Fellowship, Théoden, Vaire
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Graphic Sex, Rape, Torture, Violence
Series: Protect and Serve
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100730 Read Count: 16836
Published: Jun 26 2012 Updated: Oct 20 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12: Beyond This Land of Parting Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
Oh. My. Eru. Wow... As you say, I certainly wasn't expecting that, but in many ways I'm glad you ended the trilogy in that way- it's true to real-life, and makes everything seem so much more realistic, though I hate to say it.

Absolutely amazing, Lasarina, and thank you so much for sharing your talent here by posting this.

I await the epilogue with baited breath.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you've liked it so much so far. I hope you like one or both of the different endings.

But enough with delays. Check out the endings!

 

Lasarina

Date: Oct 07 2012
Title: Chapter 11: A Promise for Passion Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
You've almost finished?! Eru, now you've got me nervous... I have a hunch that it's not all going to end happily...

I enjoyed, as always, the appearance of the Valar, and particularly liked Lane's description of Mandos' voice- I can actually picture Mandos sounding like Darth Vader... Anyway, I digress.

I found Lane's thoughts interesting to read too, particularly the stuff about her connection with Legolas. All in all, an excellent chapter. :)

Author's Response:

Well, I've posted the final chapter! So go check it out.

 

Thanks so much for reading! I'm so thankful for you sticking with this story!

 

Lasarina

Date: Sep 22 2012
Title: Chapter 1: The Story of Who I Am Reviewer: Elbereth Signed
I'm so glad you've begun the third book! A superb start, and I'm looking forward to the rest.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

I'm getting on a roll again, I've got the next chapter up!

 

Thanks so much, 

 

Lasarina

Date: Jun 27 2012