Lane's story culminates as she and the remaining Fellowship follow their own paths to Gondor. Lane finally thinks she has a shot at the happiness she's never before experienced, but choices are yet to be made if she ever wants a taste of it. Will she be allowed to stay in Middle-earth, or will she even be given a choice?
Lovely explanation of Legolas' name- I like that story a lot. Very creative, and certainly makes sense. Well done!
As to the chapter itself, I read the chapter title and could just tell that there'd be a bomb-shell at the end, and you didn't disappoint. It was certainly a nice touch, and true to Lane's character in the fact that she's not about to bow down to anyone's will- even if it's the will of the love of her life.
As to your horse-riding quam, I'm not a rider, so I make a point of not going into details about horse related stuff in stories and fan-fictions, but I will bear it in mind none-the-less.
Thanks so much for the reivew. I'm glad you liked my own idea for how Legolas was named. Since we don't know, it was fun to come up with something.
Thanks again for reading, and check out the new chapter!
A true, realistic ending if you ask me, though I'm certainly glad that you wrote a second "happily ever after ending" too, to make us all happy. ;)
Still, though that certainly wasn't the way I wanted it to end, I'm glad you finished it like that. An ace ending to an amazing story- I simply can't praise you enough.
Good luck with your future original works and I sincerely hope that they're as successful as this fanfiction has been.
Very clever, as always. I especially like how you slotted the narrator into the story this time. :)
Looking forward to your next update!
Though this is short, it is beautifully well written, and you have certainly succeeded in your aims to capture the Lady Galadriel's loneliness, and her husband's distance from her. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I think this is the shortest piece I have written yet! I like to explore more deeply the emotions of characters. It pleases me to know I have achieved this with my shortest piece.
Despite this piece's length, it certainly captures Arwen's sadness and longing for Aragorn now that she has been instructed to travel to the Grey Havens. Well done. :)
I can also empathise with you here. I'm sorry. :(
However, it was beautifully written and really touched me- now officially added to my favourites.
Author's Response: It's nice to know that someone outside of the "circle" can relate to this. It's kinda hard to bring up sometimes. But thank you for reviewing, and I'm happy that you took the time to favorite.
SEQUEL TO 'AND ONE MORE THING': Andrea has adjusted to her new job as a personal trainer. She has even accepted the fact that she will be unable to have her dream home built. But the loss of Dominic's love is something that hurts too deeply to let go. Six months after the the break-off of their engagement, Andrea finds herself having to deal with a piece of news that will put a permanent breach between her and the hope of a rekindled relationship with Mr. Monaghan. Will the two never be able to give love another shot? Or should Andrea never say never?
I've literally just discovered this, having loved your previous story- I'm so glad you managed to get the sequel up! It honestly doesn't matter that it took so long- it was worth the wait!
I can't wait to see the next chapter; as always you've come up with a killer cliff-hanger. Keep it up. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review, Elbereth! You have been a faithful reader from the beginning, and I truly appreciate it and will try to not disappoint with this story! Chapter three should be up today if I can crank a little more out ^__^
I seriously need to stick this on watch or something- I hadn't realised you'd added more chapters!
Anyway, here I am again. :)
I can't believe you let the baby die! I understand you had to do it, but it was still horrible... God, it really left my spine tingling.
Moving on- superb! And I'm certainly glad to see Billy and Dominic back on the scene again- good old Billy. That awkward conversation between the two of them was great, as was the seriously awkward conversation with the Chief- "this is a highly irregular situation"- cracked me up so much. xD
Hopefully I'll be reviewing a little faster from now on. ;)
No worries! The site was down fot a while and that made everything confusing. But anyway, I am so glad you have been enjoying the story so far. Letting the baby die was a difficult decision to make, but it also is a critical part of the story. Don't hate me too much! lol ;)
Gotta love Billy! I always worry that I am not portraying him properly (he seems like so much fun in real life!) haha. Glad you found that bit funny! I figured it wouldn't hurt to put a little humor in there. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, and I hope you enjoy what's to come! Cheers ^__^
You did get Billy spot on- you're right that he always seems so fun-loving and hilarious, but I reckon there's a soft, serious side there somewhere, so in my humble opinion your interpretation of his character is a good one. ;)
I have absolutely no idea how you intend to get Dominic and Andy back together- you better, otherwise you will probably ruin my week- but I wish you luck. ;) However you decide to do it- if you do at all; I wouldn't be surprised if you break our hearts by having one of them die or something- I'm sure it'll be great. :)
Another wonderful chapter, and the letter at the end was a nice touch.
I enjoy spending time in Angela's head- more chapters like that one would be lovely from time to time. As for the content of the chapter- the last few sentences had MY stomach churning; sod Evangeline...
You better have a good plan to get them back together: I'll be interested to see how you do it!
I'm glad to hear you lied. ;)And especially glad to see Dominic and Andrea back together!! Of course he couldn't marry Evangeline...
When I started reading, I actually thought that you'd have Giorgio and Andy getting together, but then when I read the bit about the guy in the street, I knew it was him! Still feel kind of bad for Giorgio, though...
Anyhow, I await the next chapter with baited breath!!