Reviews by AlexisBluerose
A Little Night Music by Ariel Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 23]
Summary: Sam and his Rosie in a rare moment to themselves.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Rosie, Sam
Genres: Romance, Erotica
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4519 Read Count: 6041
Published: Oct 09 2004 Updated: Oct 09 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Little Night Music Reviewer: AlexisBluerose Signed
I loved this story, it moved me and also got my kinda hot, great combination.
Date: Jan 25 2012
An Arranged Affair by luthien85 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Legolas had just returned from Minas Tirith with the battle scars evident in his heart. His father Thranduil, is very worried at the state of his only son. With the help of his advisor, Lyean, the found a way to help heal his son and make his heart whole again.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Gimli, Legolas, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Erotica, Family, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3243 Read Count: 5673
Published: May 15 2010 Updated: May 15 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: An Arranged Affair Reviewer: AlexisBluerose Signed
Well the story was a little cheesy, like the fact that the girl is so pretty she radiates a light that makes him look away. Also your use of verbs is very off. You go from past to present in one sentence, like when you wrote "Legolas moaned with pleasure...he feels the throbbing" that's not the right use of verbs, instead it should have been he felt the throbbing or he moans. That threw me off a bit, the story was alright. It did have a good plot.
Date: Jan 27 2012