What a very realistic, trilling, well-written story. Everything felt so real; Legolas' pain, Aragorn's worries and Elrond's skillfulness. I really enjoyed reading your story. It was brillant. :)
Author's Response: Wow. What wonderful compliments! You have said the very things that make my writer's heart sing. :o) I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my very, long tale!
Awww. I love the ending! Awesome imagery (as usual) I'm reading all your stories right now, actually, because they're so enjoyable to read. I love Legolas- Aragorn friendship stories and I love the loyalty and trust they continually show each other. You were able to capture that in this fanfic story, so well done. :)
Author's Response: Aww I'm glad! Thank you! :D
Amazing, unexpected twist at the end. :) Good job. Loved your story. ;)
Amazing imagery! Reading your fanfic story was like watching a movie in my head. The images are so vivid and the feelings are so strong. Everything felt real! It's very well-written. Good work! :D
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed them! I appreciate you taking the time to let me know. :D
First off, I'm enjoying your series of haikus. :) I love how you can fit so much in 17 syllables! You're really talented. I like this one in particular because it's so silly and it shows a different aspect of Legolas who's usually serious, or fierce or observant. GOOD JOB! :)
A silly little poem.
I love how this haiku captured Sam's protectiveness, loyalty and worries in that part of the story. :)
Rosie Cotton is quite taken with Samwise Gamgee, but is uncertain he returns her feelings. A light-hearted hobbit-shot.
Awww! That's so cute! I love the imagery. ;) I'm a huge fan of Sam and I'm really happy I finally found a story about him and Rosie. :) You deserve more reviews! :)
Awwww! The ending of this chapter is perfect. :) There were a few spelling mistakes though like "replyed" which should be "replied" but that's no biggie. :)
The storyline was nice. :) I think the whole idea of the story is great but your writing style didn't quite pull it off. Maybe next time you could make their dialogue/ lines more old english-y (just like in the books and in the movie) and you should describe the surroundings and setting more. Other than that, the story was great! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. :) Keep it up. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I do try and use the old eglish type stuff, but sometimes I forget. I will try and describe the settinggs more!
amazing imagery! you did a great job in describing the setting. it made your story rich and interesting. i'm excited to read the rest of your story. :) keep it up! :D
Author's Response: thank you :) this is just the start of a big adventure-this one is the fellow ship of the ring hope you enjoy the rest of it xx :)
I love this chapter! :) I like Eruanna because she's not needy and whiney like I expected female characters to be. Oh and good job on the romance, too. :) Good luck on your exams! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) hope you like the rest of it :) x
This is a good start! :) Keep up the good work. :) I'll be checking back from time to time. I'm really excited to know what will happen. :)
First of all, I think it's really sweet that you dedicated this to your grandma. She would have been proud of you. This is wonderful story and I'm honored to be your first reviewer. I'm a Legolas fan too! I love how this isn't like the other cliche Lego-mance fanfic stories and I love how you built your Original Character. :) I really enjoyed your first 5 chapters, please continue to write more and I hope you get more reviews because you certainly deserve them! :) Oh and don't worry about chapter 5, it's short but it's wonderful. I think it's good enough. :)
This is pretty good! :) I'm reading the first few chapters of your fanfic and I'm really enjoying. I just wanted to say that you're doing a great job :D I will be checking back soon and leaving more reviews. :D Keep it up! :)
Author's Response: Awwwww its always nice to get a review!!!!!!!!!! I plan on uploading another chapter soon!!!!!!!!!!!