Penname: Gwilwileth [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 15/05/12
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Heyy,, i'm 15,, live in england and am a loving fan of lotr and the hobbit :D x
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Summary:
*COMPLETED* Exiled for murder, Autheil wanders middle earth, looking to her old ways to survive. The shadow of Mordor takes a hold of middle earth, and Autheil finds herself doubting herself and everyone around her. When all seems lost, the elves being to look to her, the traitor and outcast for aid. But a life of bloodshed cannot be undone. Autheil begins to embrace who she truly is and with it begins to loose all she holds dear.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Off Topic
Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Torture, Violence
Series: The Prophacy
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24634 Read Count: 2409
[Report This] Published: 31/01/13 Updated: 21/02/13
Reviewer: Gwilwileth Signed
Date: 05/02/13 Title: Chapter 1: Exile

hey its really quite good... but the first bit needs tweaking because i dont like the fact it says "sunlight filtered dimly through the trees, dimly lighting up the world" you could use a different word the second time and you did it again "freshened the ground, leaving a refreshing smell" here.... :D pleaseeeeee look :D

Author's Response: I noticed that but have not got round to changing it yet!! Thank you for reviewing :D