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i really liked this story... i hope your exams go well :D x
Author's Response: Thank you :) x
i think the characters in this story sound loving,, the imagery put forward is cool/ amazing but you really need to finish the story ;D xx
Author's Response: Thank you :) I will finish the story asap,still got 7 chapters to go though x
heyy this is Amazingg ,, just a question in the first part who is 'the elf' thankss xxxx
Author's Response: Legolas :) xx

hey its really quite good... but the first bit needs tweaking because i dont like the fact it says "sunlight filtered dimly through the trees, dimly lighting up the world" you could use a different word the second time and you did it again "freshened the ground, leaving a refreshing smell" here.... :D pleaseeeeee look :D
Author's Response: I noticed that but have not got round to changing it yet!! Thank you for reviewing :D