Reviews by LegolasxAnariel
A Test of Faith by AliDawne Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Haldir meets someone who will challenge him. How will he react?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Celeborn, Elrohir, Elrond, Faramir, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Glorfindel, Haldir, Legolas, Lindir, Lindir, Original Character, Orophin, Thranduil
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9210 Read Count: 15045
Published: 30/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Reviewer: LegolasxAnariel Signed
I like your story a lot, but i have some criticisms. Your character Amandra seems to be a bit of a marry-sue. In other words she seems way to perfect. I mean, she's related to a king, she's a skilled warrior, she can talk to animals, she's aquaimted with Legolas, so on. Also, when she told Legolas to kiss an Orc, she wasn't speaking in his native language, because in fotr, when there were orcs he said "yrch" or something like that and Tolkien said that he said it in his native tongue. But I like the story. This is the first fanfiction I've read about haldir, as he is not one of my favorite characters. Legolas, Aragorn, and Frodo are, in that order. Bit it is a good story so far.

Author's Response: I appreciate your honest input and appraisal. Obviously this story is quite old. I do defend the fact that she knows Legolas as a byproduct of her being related to Aragorn. I was drawing on a desire to remember that Aragorn had a life before he went to live with the Elves, though I confess that was very loosely interpreted by me, as I have not read anything about just how old Aragorn was when he was brought to Elrond. There is truly no way to win with original female characters. If they are too frail and dependent, they are MarySue. If they are too capable, they are MarySue. I like this story, and I confess to reading Robert Jordan's Wheel of time, almost non-stop since 1996 and the man loved to write incredibly strong, independent, beautiful, talented and strong women who were not at all MarySue. At any rate, I am still reading WoT and am considering going with the AU spin I was heading for on this one. If I can find the time to write again! Thanks for reading and for your input.
Date: 27/06/12
Alter-Egos by owlett Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 14]
Summary: What if all the main characters were women? Response to callerofcrows challenge.
Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Boromir, Elrond, Frodo, Gimli, Glóin, Legolas, Merry, Other Canon Character, Pippin, Sam, Sauron, The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Violence
Challenges: Alter-egos
Series: My Crossovers
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1535 Read Count: 4834
Published: 18/11/08 Updated: 23/11/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: They Leave Rivendell Reviewer: LegolasxAnariel Signed
Hahahahah this is hilarious! Inwas laughing so hard. Saruwomen. Hehehe. This is true about women to a certain degree, but a lot of it is over used stereotypes. But it made me laugh so hard.
Date: 28/06/12
Summary: Not trusting at all, then trusting completely. Lost, but not forever. Alone, but not forgotten. Loved, but not without loss.
This is a tale of friendship, family, adventure, and love.

Note: I have no clue what movie verse is, but I had to pick a category so... Enjoy!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Family, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9210 Read Count: 3218
Published: 27/06/12 Updated: 15/07/12 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: LegolasxAnariel Signed
Okay thank you :) Now I know.
Date: 05/07/12