Reviews by Gimli4Ever
The Road by Elbereth Rated: G [Reviews - 2]
Summary: This is supposed to be a sort of Hobbit walking song, but it's now more of a poem. Please read and comment- as it's part of a fan-fiction I'm writing; thank you in advance.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99 Read Count: 746
Published: 01/03/12 Updated: 01/03/12 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Road. Reviewer: Gimli4Ever Signed
Very vivid, though I think I prefer the Tom Bombadil poem, but this was still very good and I still read it more than once. Well done! :D

Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/18/12
Summary: Truly did the people of Rohan believe that hope had forsaken their lands, until four figures arrived in Edoras.
As Eowyn's friendship with Legolas begins to blossom, could this be the start of immortal love? Legolas/ Eowyn **NOW COMPLETE**
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gríma, Halbarad, Imrahil, Ioreth, Legolas, Merry, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Pippin, Théoden, Witch King
Genres: Friendship, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15504 Read Count: 5411
Published: 03/28/12 Updated: 08/02/12 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Meeting in Edoras Reviewer: Gimli4Ever Signed
Wow, love it! Simply Amazing!
Date: 07/18/12
Title: Chapter 2: Battle of Wills Reviewer: Gimli4Ever Signed
"My emotions are clouded, for though I do not love her, neither do I wish her to think ill of me." I think this really sums up how Legolas feels about Eowyn, and is brilliantly written. Well done!
Date: 07/18/12
Title: Chapter 3: Night Talk Reviewer: Gimli4Ever Signed
So far, this is my favourite chapter!
Date: 07/18/12
Title: Chapter 4: Debating the Meaning of Love Reviewer: Gimli4Ever Signed
I love the last paragraph in this chapter. It was beautifully written and is true in many ways. :)
Date: 07/18/12
Title: Chapter 5: Mortal Misfortunes Reviewer: Gimli4Ever Signed
I got so excited at the Eowyn and Legolas kiss! (although I do think that they wouldn't be a good couple in real life, I still ship them!!!) Very well written, well done!
Date: 07/18/12
Title: Chapter 6: Parting As Strangers Reviewer: Gimli4Ever Signed
Loving the longer chapters. :) Once again, I got excited at the end, because it means that there will be a battle in the next chapter! (I enjoy violence in stories...) :)
Date: 07/18/12
Title: Chapter 7: War: The Province of All Reviewer: Gimli4Ever Signed
I loved the ending; it sent my heart racing with adreneline! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Date: 07/18/12
Title: Chapter 8: The End Reviewer: Gimli4Ever Signed
My favourite bit was the bit in italics. It was emotional but not too over the top, a trap that a lot of authors fall into. Well done, and looking forward to the next chapter! :D
Date: 07/18/12
Summary: A short poem that tells of the most mysterious character in all of Tolkien's Middle-Earth: Tom Bombadil.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Tom Bombadil
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113 Read Count: 862
Published: 04/22/12 Updated: 04/22/12 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Tom Bombadil; I Am. Reviewer: Gimli4Ever Signed
Loved this poem even more then the other one. Please keep on writing poetry, as well as your 'What's Not Meant To Be'!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! And don't worry, I'm not about to stop writing poetry, or "What's Not Meant To Be"- there's a lot more to come yet! :)
Date: 07/18/12
Summary: A poem lamenting the loss of Gandalf.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Gandalf / Olorin
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 154 Read Count: 535
Published: 07/09/12 Updated: 07/09/12 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Lament for Mithrandir Reviewer: Gimli4Ever Signed
Loved this poem so much, that I read it at least four times in a row. You have a real knack for poetry. :D

Author's Response: Thank you, Gimli4Ever. I certainly do enjoy writing poetry, so I'm very glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/18/12