Very vivid, though I think I prefer the Tom Bombadil poem, but this was still very good and I still read it more than once. Well done! :D
Author's Response: Thank you!
Wow, love it! Simply Amazing!
"My emotions are clouded, for though I do not love her, neither do I wish her to think ill of me." I think this really sums up how Legolas feels about Eowyn, and is brilliantly written. Well done!
So far, this is my favourite chapter!
I love the last paragraph in this chapter. It was beautifully written and is true in many ways. :)
I got so excited at the Eowyn and Legolas kiss! (although I do think that they wouldn't be a good couple in real life, I still ship them!!!) Very well written, well done!
Loving the longer chapters. :) Once again, I got excited at the end, because it means that there will be a battle in the next chapter! (I enjoy violence in stories...) :)
I loved the ending; it sent my heart racing with adreneline! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
My favourite bit was the bit in italics. It was emotional but not too over the top, a trap that a lot of authors fall into. Well done, and looking forward to the next chapter! :D
Loved this poem even more then the other one. Please keep on writing poetry, as well as your 'What's Not Meant To Be'!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! And don't worry, I'm not about to stop writing poetry, or "What's Not Meant To Be"- there's a lot more to come yet! :)
Loved this poem so much, that I read it at least four times in a row. You have a real knack for poetry. :D
Author's Response: Thank you, Gimli4Ever. I certainly do enjoy writing poetry, so I'm very glad you enjoyed it!