Hi :) Ah feels good to be back. I've been swamped with work and haven't had a chance to read. Thanks so much for the update. I enjoyed reading Ithilwen's internal monologue and she considered her growing relationship with Legolas. It felt very real. Its just like a woman lol. I also enjoyed this last chapter. I always get sad when I read about Gandalf's fall but am looking forward to peeing what Lorien has in store for our little Ithilwen. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm a chapter behind on this site than I am on the other, but I'm about to update it for everyone here so I can be up to date. Thank you again for the review. I greatly appreciate it. It makes me want to keep writing. :)
Thanks for the history lesson though I'm not sure if it was asked for. I'm speaking (or rather typing) under correction but I think that part of fanfiction is allowing the authors to take liberties with the "set in stone" facts of the novel/s that the fiction takes its ideas from. This is true for more then 90% of the fanfiction on this and other sites. It is my opinion that the twist of the half elf having powers was a good one and adds to the development of the story. I am enjoying reading this story and while I have no right to ask or tell you what to do, I humbly ask that you not put the author off as I would be highly frustrated if this story were to be abandoned. Please remember that you are not obliged to read this particular story if its contents offend you.
Please update soon. I can't wait to read on.
Author's Response: Thank for you that review. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I look forward to seeing what else you thought while reading. Thanks!!!
Thank you for updating. Please continue to update. I think I'd die if you abandoned this story and I was left wanting... Again thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying it. It is still very weird for me to see people saying stuff about my story and how they're enjoying it. I hope I can continue to give you good chapters. I just added chapter 10 for everyone to read. I hope it's something you enjoy. Thanks again!!
This was enjoyable to read. Thanks. Please, keep writing.
Please don't think that I meant it in a bad way. I read your bio and that's how I know that English is not your first language. You are clearly a very intelligent person and I actually admire the fact that you are able to write as well as you do in a language that is not native to you. I only suggested it because I see that your story has alot of potential and having a "beta" I think its called could really help. It does take more time but its worth it in the end. Maybe you could even approach someone on this site if they're not too busy with their own stuff that could be great. Hope my review was helpful :) keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks, Going to see if I can find one. I don't take that in the bad way. I like when people give me this knid of reviews, sens then i can know what i need to fix or do better.
I must admit in at the start I thought you OC seemed to be on the outside of the story just going along but now I see she'll be more central to the story. Thats good.
I've noticed your spelling and grammar needs some work. Since English is not your first language, why don't you get someone to proof read your stuff and correct mistakes. There are many capable people on this site alone. That should improve the reading experience :)
I don't enjoy reading about rape or slash so I'm going to give this story a skip but wel done and thanks for sharing your writing.
Author's Response: I know my grammar isn't the bets, and no English it not my first language. I can't find anyone that have the time to fix it. Thanks that you took your time to read this story.
I like how you started. The Wizard approaching the woman in the clearing, conversation and beginning of a quest that will likely turn to be harder and longer than imagined. It was a good introduction (reminiscant of the Shannara stories, to me anyway) . It really grabbed my attention so well done. Ok I'm gonna read your next chapters will review again.