CUTE CUTE ADORABLE!!! :3
Great story! The twin is kinda unnesessary though... is she important later?
This story is amazing- pray finish it!
LOL HAHA the punchline to that fic XD
This story is altogether great! Im pretty new as well and I havent had much time to upload my stuff...Some things I would suggest is to establish the setting a bit better in the beggining of the story. Like, where is this random path in the Shire? Id rather like to know. But otherwise it was a nice piece and i enjoyed reading it!
If this was maybe a friendship that blossomed into a love I would enjoy more... A bit marysueish but the writing is quality!