Members: Chiara Cadrich
It's a short introduction, but I'm curious to see as to where this is going :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. A lot of the story's i write have short introductions :D The chapters usually get longer throughout the story!!
There are some typos here and there. I feel that you are rushing the story. Maybe make your chapters longer..
Looking forward to where this is going
Author's Response: I will check the typos soon, i will make the next chapter longer the first too are just background information... Thank you for your review :D