My dear Skip, this tale is truly a joy to read! I started it last night and I have hardly been able to stop (even reading during my downtime at work). Your writing style has truly developed into a fluid and enticing read, full of the good humour and colourful descriptions I love! I am thoroughly enjoying what you have done with the characters and your undoubtedly rich and intricate plotting... and I look forward to reading what happens next! I'm just glad there's more chapters here than the version you sent me a while ago... so there's more to read! :D
I love the depth of your grasp on not only the characters but the surrounding environments and world. It really adds depth when you can describe such variants in terrain and obstacles that they encounter... I can sense a well developed world abiding in your head! And as always, your gowns and outfits are so vivdly described (and so beautiful to picture in my mind), I swear you should become a fashion designer (I'm not kidding). Gorgeous ideas.
So to summarise this review: Praise, praise, praise, you're amazing, keep going, praise, praise,
Author's Response: Oh my dear Anairia thankyou for your wonderful words!! I'm so glad you're reading and enjoying it! There's plenty more to come, I'm just waiting on a laptop crisis to be fixed and then I can continue to post more and more and more. This is very high praise seeing as you've witnessed my writings and ramblings for years!! You should let me know if you post anything on this site, I'd be so keen to read it!! Much love xxx