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Down The River Anduin by ToriLee Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 36]
Summary: When Cory Blair is called into work in the middle of the night, she finds herself staring at the body of a man who looks like he bounced out of a Medieval Fair. And this time, he's alive.
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Boromir, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft, Graphic Sex, Rape, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36247 Read Count: 7388
[Report This] Published: 16/08/12 Updated: 02/05/13
Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: An Unwanted Call

The progression from the other story I read to this one is evident. Much more sophisticated writing style, very well done.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Wide Awake

Great piece. Cory has heart.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Nothing On This Guy

When Boromir tells his birthdate the second time, it should include 'of the Third Age' if he saw how bewildered cory was. Just a thought. But again. Dialog doesnt miss a beat.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Gotta Love Family

The story of her fiancee and its effect on her really hits home, very believable.
And the both of them with the children, the connection is felt, a very touching moment.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: TGIF, But It Ain't Friday

Beth is a great character, the depth you put in this chapter is a great addition to the repetiore.
And again, with the kids. so damn cute.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Why Cory Must Do Everything

The part about Cory's double personality is important. Cant say why.
But the Love Actually reference is deeply appreciated,
and i would /hate/ to be Boromir...

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Montpelier

Holy Shnike. The stimulation of the dream, ending in the rage, leaving Cory slick and SOL...
Well done.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: One Big Scary Spark

Choice of movies is immactulate. Watching the relationship grow is pleasant. Good piece.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Sick Form Of Foreplay

So romantic...

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Lost And Found, Then Lost Again

Heartwrenching.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Book

I was waiting for this moment.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Reconciliation Is An Understatement

Bout time.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Case Re-Opened

The plot with the Donnelly case is a welcome change of pace. And its nice to know Cory is smiling.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Let The Games Begin

Thriller vibe is really hitting.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: First Day At Beth's

The plot thickens.
Figures Boromir wouldnt know to wrap it up. And Cory was that desperate.

Thicker Than Water by ToriLee Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Selene would do anything to protect her little sister Raleigh who was painfully shy, and avoided confrontation. Gabriella was the spitfire who aided Selene in all of their crazy acts. But Alley, was the bully. What happens after the four girls get older and swear a blood pact? A pact, so pure and tight; that a little side trip couldn't even break it...right
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Crossovers, Off Topic
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Boromir, Celeborn, Denethor, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Glorfindel, Gríma, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Mouth of Sauron, Nazgûl, Original Character, Orophin, Pippin, Rúmil, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Théoden, Théodred, Treebeard, Witch King
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Parody, Romance, Suspense, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, First Draft, Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16979 Read Count: 3144
[Report This] Published: 20/08/12 Updated: 30/04/13
Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Impressive. The switch between Selene and Raleighs points of view is staccatto but manages not to be jarring. It flows. I imagine it as a movie.
And you capture the mind of a teenage girl quite well, I assume.
And they say boys think about sex more than girls. Pfft.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Again, fantastic.
Transition from previous chapter is a little, how do i put it... awkward, but followable.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Your detail of the Trollshaws was awesome in this chapter, really made me feel involved.
Gotta love Elrond.

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Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Characters captured quite well, especially merry and pippin. I can see a bit of you in this Selene, if heightened.
Good dialog though, really. Better than i could do.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Date: 06/03/13 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Saruman, darkly powerful and subtly frightening, voice and being like an earwig burrowing into your brain. Well done.