The greek was a nice touch.
The 'violent' romance as well, the teasing. Very fitting.
The elves are delightfully aloof, and Raleighs differences from her sister are apparent, as are her similarities.
Gabrielles pov is great. I can only imagine the mischief the two best friends got into.
Rage red and steamy.
I can feel it, the pain.
Author's Response: Deep. Very deep, babe. I can see it, the cheese. XD
Good lord. So much sense. o.o