Wow... this one is very sensual. I love it so much!
I never really shipped Eowyn and Aragorn... even in the films or books, but this really gives her longing for him somethng tangible. I could see her writing this in her bed chamber with tears running down her cheeks.
Your writing style is so interesting! I have never been able to grasp stream of consciousness but you capture it effortlessly. I also like the bit of humor you bring to this post. It is the perfect balance between a modern human of our age and the lore of the Silmarillion. Well done!
Oh boy have I been there... beautifully written.
"It's the losing that's easy. The finding is what's difficult."
OMG... can this happen in real life please? Now these are the kind of elves I want Santa to have ;)
I love it so much! I love the angst between them and I also love how Kili is the instigator. A quick comment though on the rating... I would up it, just to be safe because of the language. Also keep in mind that the rating applies to the overall story, not individual chapters, so if you are going to have something later that will qualify as a more explicit rating, you should have that on there now. But that aside, I cannot wait for the next chapter!!