this is by far one of my favorites you are a fantastic writer you had me crying a couple of times on this one powerful gift don't ever mis-use it
god you only make me cry every time i read that last chapter such a good (to say the least) ending but does it stop there is there a 2nd part?
Author's Response: No, sorry there is no more to this story. But I am glad you enjoyed it.
your back thats great i've been waiting so long for you to get back to your story now you finally have returned and with a brilliant story keep it comeing it's great to say the least
take the piss(your joking from 'one big mistake' one of the coolest actor fics') you can't stop writing i love this story you had me crying for gods sake please write more
awesome i am so glad u wrote again i smiled almost all through this chapter their baby girl seems so cute and i thought i was cute how orlando was getting a little uneasy thinking about how the boys would be all over his beautiful little girl much like he was on her mother those two seem perfect for each other but i guess they will have to take it step by step well the rate they're going baby step by baby step i hope or nothing happens to screw this up its great real lovely story
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'm glad it brought a smile to your face, that's what this chapter intended. :) I also think they are perfect for each other, so let's see what they do next... I hope they don't screw it up! LOL Thanks again!
wheres the rest check your actor fics reviews
Author's Response: I'm sorry there hasn't been more, but I have been at a real sticking point with this story. It will be finished, hopefully soon.
hey are you going to finish what you started did you get writers block you can't leave me at a clifhanger like this i'm sorry i could't review sooner but i wasn't a member please forgive me
wow finally they are together and everthing must feel so, right to them.only one person out therenis the person you love and when you find each other you don't let go that must be how they feel.but the questions are, will their love last ? what happens next ?will someone or somehting try to destroy their love? will alex be a hit ?how will she and orlando adapt to publicity?what?your story is great i love it
i'm glad u wrote but why did u have to stop at such a good spot i hope that bastard keeps his hands off her or orlando finds her or tony or someone anyone and to think that if she hadn't turned back for love and all those other things she'd be fine but still i'm glad she did otherwise she may never be right with orlando write soon i got to know what is going on
hey wheres the secound part of your fantastic story
hey take the piss you can't stop there i'm yearning to know what happens please write more please
wow you finally wrote more and i love it i hope theres more soon i can't wait to see what happens next. keep up the work it's really great
Author's Response: Actually, I've got about three chapters coming tonight so you won't have to wait long. Thanks for the comment! :)
finally the two are together and things seem right at the moment at least i'm most excited to so what is about to happen
Author's Response: Yeah, they're not out of the woods yet; consider this a bit of a calm before the storm if you will. (Insert evil, manical laugh here.)
aww come on thats no fun hehe but its deffently reasonalable who knew a 'christmas law' could do so much it's sweet that they think the same these to most deffently hit it off from day one but that doesn't mean they know that right? Hmm i wonder if they'll get there happily ever after if they do it has a long way to come i'm glad you've written more this story is good well what i'm i saying this story for all of your stories are.Keep writing
Author's Response: Ahhh, yes you DO know me too well; they are FAR from being out of the woods and though they may see NOW that they belong together, immaturity has a way a playing with people's heads so we'll just have to see what happens. I will be sure to keep writing too, and thanks for the comment.
damn it seems natalie has put ALOT of thinking into this and i suppose its for the best for both there carriers but you never no what you got till its there no more besides whose to say they won't get back together friends is good for the time but i doubt that they still just feel friends so its gonna hurt sure they'll see eachother but its gonna hurt good chapter i wonder how orli takes the news hmm...i don't know damnit i hate clifhangers o well write soon :)~
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments; I have a feeling Orlando may or may not be too terribly devestated. Who knows, maybe he's thinking the same thing...
so they broke up thats cool but even thoughthey think they will be happy but idk seems like orlando getting jealous abd i'm sure natalie might feel the same but they weren't happy dating so hmm idk seems like they r in a bind only going to be happy if together and friends can be together so thats cool i guess hmm confusing can't wait to see what happens
Author's Response: Yeah it's interesting... and it begs one to ask if it really WAS bad timing or just an excuse to yet again, not admit the blaringly obvious. Hmm...
poor natalie she probly feels like an orphan with no one to run too. Also i don't blame her for likeing heath but heath over Orlando hmmm i know who'd i'd choose it has to be hard trying to over come the "finalization" of their realationshipthey know they need to move on but idk if they will ever find someone they love as much as eachother glad you updated finally! : )~ and can't wait for you to update again
Author's Response: Yeah that's the funny thing about denial, you can convince yourself of just about anything if you REALLY try to. And true, I'd definitely go Orlando over Heath but, she doesn't have Orlando and if Orlando isn't available, Heath is the next best thing; or at least in my eyes anyway.
Ok so whats the deal with these 2!?!?!?!? they seem to be getting over eachother but every time they start to move on they hold back and think as if there was a feeling between them a more-than-friends feeling am i correct? well is there that feeling? Will they recongize it or is it strictly friends? I gotta know will they be together despite age or was that the end was it over said and done with? please wirte more its interesting how heath is put in there and the feeling of brothers and being one of the guys wiht orlandois coming into play i love it!
Author's Response: Thank you; yeah what's going on between them? Don't really know, they haven't been kind enough to enlighten me about that but I do know that Heath is going to play a part but that's all I'm saying about that. And knowing Natalie, she's more than likely overanalyzing Orlanod's intentions, actions, and words in order to drive herself crazy with curiosity and confusion. Masochistic tendencies? Maybe, but then that would mean that every single female in this situation gets a kick out of self-inflicted torment, even if it is only mental torment. More to come I promise; it ain't over yet.
Well i sure hope Orlando is over her to would hate to have him hurt but its good she moved on i can't help but feel myself that there will be a little tension between the three of them not a ton cause i mean they are all friends but still a little tension maybe heath and her will really hit it off and thats good for them post more soon
Author's Response: Will do! I'm not so sure there'll be tension now as much as there may be some if, say, there's a break up. But who knows, they're not telling me a whole lot yet so I'll be just as surprised as you I'm sure.
finish please i need to know are you even planing on finishing
Author's Response: Yes I am and I've actually written ahead a bit but I'm a bit stuck on this one chapter. But once I get through that, I'll have at least THREE more chapters for you!