who's the new guy? where's alex? what's orlando thinking now? why am i asking questions with three question marks? keep up the good work!
**EXTREME TEARS** **RUNNING MASCARA** **MORE TEARS** THEYRE TOGETHER!
such a sad story.. i wanna cry too.. *tear, tear* great story ^_^ keep up the good work ^_^
i cant wait to read the next chapter
i like it.. i've been waiting for a long time to read the next part...
Author's Response: Oh, wow, I'm sorry, I didn't realize someone was waiting, I've been busy, but I'll get the next chapter up right away!
i havent been on in a while.. but i love this story the most probably.. um.. wow.. this is short.. but realli good.. so what is arwen going to do?
Author's Response: Hmmm, I don't know you'll just have to read to find out, won't you?
wow, such an awesome story... gawd, i feel like i'm about to cry (.~_~.) such a sad story... with such a sad cliffhanger
Author's Response: Thank you, it's great to hear from new readers, please keep the comments coming and I promise I'll have more shortly; hopefully tonight.
whoa. i wonder what's gonna happen.. oh man im fired up lol. i've been in this situation before.. just not with a famous actor thats so hott and has a uh, nvm.. anywho.. i cant wait to read the next chapters
Author's Response: Thanks for your comment! I know EXACTLY what you mean and I hope I'm never in this situation, at least, not with HER.
whoa! whats kate up to? did she, dom or brie hear orli n marissa? hah.. i surely do hope that kate heard them. cant wait to read the next one
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment; I think even if she DID hear them, she'd just act like she didn't. Who'd want to admit that they heard their ex having sex someone else? Anyway, yeah that's a good question, what is she up to? We'll just have to wait and see.
aw man i'd strangled kate if i were the girls. you aint gonna mess with my friends and get away with it.. what's kate doing? what's gotten into marissa's mind? why did she let him leave? kate needs to back off.. orlando better not be stupid enough to fall for her tricks.. man im fired up again.. cant wait til the next chapter.. keep writing ^_^
Author's Response: Ahh that's the spirit, call it a trust issue, which is a big step for Marissa to say the least; she knows that Orlando loves her and she's just trusting that if she lets him go, he'll come back. And what IS Kate up to? Well, we'll just have to see. More on the way!
i wish i could see that look lol
Author's Response: Oh yeah, I'd like to see it myself but... Oh well, only in our dreams I'd imagine
omg! what happened?!?!
Author's Response: Ahh, you will see, you will see; no fun in me telling you what happens now is there? Will have more very shortly.
aww! what a perfect scene! i wish me and my ex bf were together again... we still love each other... but we're with someone else... but my bf just broke up with me to go out with a blockhead... hah, blockhead... go to my xanga site to find out more... anywho, good story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate the positive comments. I'll be sure to have more soon.
it's been a while since you've updated on this fan fic. it's a really good story that i enjoy as well as looking forward to reading it. i hope that it's just the writer's block that's keeping you. please update very soon!
oooh, what happens next? thats sad =(
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, something will happened... Sivan Shemesh