Reviews by White Wolf
Mellyn by Tathrin Rated: G starstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary: We have heard tell that Legolas took Gimli Gloin's son with him because of their great friendship, greater than any that has been between Elf and Dwarf. If this is true, then it is strange indeed: that a Dwarf should be willing to leave Middle-earth for any love. And yet, where bonds this strong exist, all things are possible. Now at last, more can be said of this matter... Winner of 2005 Flame of Arnor Awards for Best Friendship!
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Arwen, Eldarion, Gimli, Legolas
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4883 Read Count: 1822
Published: Oct 08 2004 Updated: Oct 08 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Mellyn Reviewer: White Wolf Signed
You did a wonderful job with this story. Your descriptions of the sea longing, and Gimli dreading both Legolas leaving and his staying and suffering more were very nicely done. It was sad the way you talked about Arwen's inevitable fading after Aragorn died. Picturing her riding away from Minas Tirith gave me a shiver, especially when you talked about how she had already left, emotionally speaking. I had always believed that Legolas had asked Gimli to go with him to Valinor, but this is an alternate idea that is just as plausible. Very good and emotional story. Loved it.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I always get sad when I think of the fate of the Elves, and the Sea Longing, and I'm glad I could share some of those emotions. Thank you again.
Date: Jan 19 2005
Summary: Elrond laments the fading of the firstborn.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Arwen, Elrond
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 939 Read Count: 1385
Published: Oct 20 2004 Updated: Oct 20 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Dry Leaves Reviewer: White Wolf Signed
This is very good. I love the description of the dry leaves and the impending "death" of Imladris. Even though we all knows that Elrond will be happy in Valinor with his wife, his sadness here is very poignant.

Author's Response: I actually wrote this at a very dark time for me too, and so it was easy to see things the way he does in this story. Looking back on it, I'm very proud of it. Thank you for reading!
Date: Oct 21 2004
Summary: The Ring is destroyed, the quest has been fulfilled, but only two of the Fellowship have lived to tell about it.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond
Genres: Horror, Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5424 Read Count: 9093
Published: Oct 27 2004 Updated: Oct 31 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Three Reviewer: White Wolf Signed
A very interesting AU. I knew this was going to be very sad going in, and I was not wrong. You are dong a good job describing it. Legolas's grief is particularly sad. I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you! This is one of my favorite stories, and I'm glad you liked it! More to come soon, I promise!
Date: Oct 28 2004
Title: Chapter 6: Six Reviewer: White Wolf Signed
The last sentence was very sad, and of course, very true. I'm glad Arwen tried to make Legolas feel better instead of blaming him for not being able to keep his promise. to keep Estel safe I'm also happy that Pippin will be going to Valinor. Hopefully, he and Legolas will find peace there.
Date: Oct 31 2004
Ostad by Tathrin Rated: PG [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Kindapping. Secrets. Rescue Missions. Lies. Trouble in a mysterious city -- all ready to plague our heroes and generally make their lives more interesting, whether they like it or not!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Faramir, Elrohir, Elladan, Other, Beregond
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54390 Read Count: 15173
Published: Jan 29 2005 Updated: Jul 29 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Good Dunking Reviewer: White Wolf Signed
I really loved the interplay with Legolas and Gimli. Those two are so funny together. Gimli is good at the verbal exchange, but I have always felt Legolas could easily beat him at that. However, when Gimli resorts to physical tricks, like throwing Legolas into the water, the elf definitely has his hands full. I also like the opening with Éowyn. Great beginning to the story.

Author's Response: Everyone can use a good dunking now and then...prideful Elvish princes especially--or so Gimli tells me, anyway... Much appreciated review, thank you!
Date: Jan 30 2005
Summary: A game of hide and seek becomes an ongoing waging war between one little princeling and a pair of very frustrated twins. Must Glorfindel intervene?
*DEDICATED TO WHITE WOLF KASMI KASSIM SIVAN*
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Glorfindel, Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339 Read Count: 1795
Published: Sep 06 2006 Updated: Sep 06 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Acorns Reviewer: White Wolf Signed
I am truly honored that I am one of the authors you dedicated this story to. It was amusing, and I liked it. I can just picture Legolas in the tree taunting two very frustrated twins. I liked that they called him Greenleaf. Also I liked that you mentioned how close Legolas is to the trees, hiding him even when it looked like he would be discovered. Having Legolas keep saying, "Say it" over and over was a funny little touch. Again thank you so much, Yun, for the dedication. I'll see you at Naice a Nilme. :o)


Author's Response: I am the one who is honoured to have been able to dedicate my story to you sivan and kasmi. Althou kasmi hasn\'t seen it i think. But it\'s my way of saying thankyou and well done for your stories Yun
Date: Oct 24 2006