Well youve heard it before, so it wont come as a surprise when you hear it again from me: I cant believe this is your first fanfic attempt! Nicely done! And hot to boot! I love the pairing and the characterization that goes with it. I feel a need for more of these two and wish you would do more. You are very talented and you should see if you could launch more bunnies. Proof of your skill: I could feel Elronds eagerness and his surprise. You drew out the moments wonderfully, Rivergirl, and I felt myself gasping with anticipation just like the Imladris lord. My real hope, in the end, was that the distance Elrond put on Legolas at the start remedied itself with Legolas assertiveness in the end. Elronds position makes it hard for him to let loose, but I think if Legolas needs anything it is not more surety from Elrond but just signs of his affection. So what do you think? More? Ill look forward to your next brilliant stab at the fanfic world.