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Summary: A young Dorwinion woman and her uncle travel north from the inland sea of Rhun to Esgaroth seeking employment at the Elfking Thranduil's new vineyard.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Thranduil
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177985 Read Count: 37660
[Report This] Published: 21/10/04 Updated: 15/04/05
Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 1: Departure

That was a very good first chapter ^^ good introduction! You learn something about one of the main charakters but not too much so that you stil will be interestet n them as the story continues. Very good I look forward to the next chappi ^^ Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 2: Arrival

Ahhh... now it's getting interesting *laughs* I only can imagen how they would feel... but to be truthful I would give everything to be in her place right now lucky *piep* ^^"" But that will never happen so I'm satisfied with what I have and in the moment that's your story so again I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 3: Picking

Ohhh I would love to do that! It must be a awsome feeling to stick your feed in some cool and crushed grapes... But for now I'm very curios as to what will happen next! So see ya in the next chappi Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 4: Pressing

That song was... uhm... a little stupid^^"" i would become mad if i would hear it more than twice a day or so... But otherwise the chappi was good, I only wonder what the king has planed for cella... but I think that will come out soon. So let's go to the next chapter then *gg* Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 5: The Visitor

Oh my God that song again @.@ by now I would be temted to use earplugs or something like that ^^"" But the part was funny *gg* the visit of the king and than the other woman *laughs* but until now nothing really happend so I wait ^^ Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 6: Moonlight

hm... interesting I must say. I wonder what the king did to her because I never heard of anything like it before or maybe only when someone talked about healers but I thought the king wasn't a healer? ahhh doesn't matter... he healed her and thats all what counts *gg* Till next chater... Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 8: Storm Clouds

Ahh... how sweet of him *gg* I hope she will change her mind about the feast I really would like to see her dance with the king that would be so romantik! Again till next chappi...Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 9: Cloudburst

That is so cute... he is really a sweetpie that one *gg* oh I would never ever give that cloak back no no no NEVER! Okey maybe I would but only because the smell will be fainting away and you have to renew it *laughs* But enough of my blubbering XD See ya in the next Chappi *gg* ... Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 9: Cloudburst

That is so cute... he is really a sweetpie that one *gg* oh I would never ever give that cloak back no no no NEVER! Okey maybe I would but only because the smell will be fainting away and you have to renew it *laughs* But enough of my blubbering XD See ya in the next Chappi *gg* ... Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 10: Preparations

Whaa somebody help the poor women for jesus christ! Oh my gog oh my god ;___; I hope somebody will come and help her or els it doesn't look all to good o_O She can't even bite him ~__~ how unfair of him but maybe she can kick him in the more needed places of the man spieces! *laughs* that would be good... but as allways I will have to wait and see in the next chapter so here we got see ya... Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 11: Abduction

Puhh that was close... a view minutes later and she could have been raped! She was lucky that the elvenhearing kicked in by the king or els it would have ended very much in a different way! But for now I'm fine with how it is *gg* Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 12: Visitors

I know where he will send them *gg* i bet with you he will send them to Mirkwood *gg* so he can have her with him all the time *laughs* how cutly sellfish of him ^___^ Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 13: Remorse

I knew it *gg* but *sigh'n* I miss some real interaction between the king and cella... I mean they must talk some time right? And than not only two or tree sentences... but maybe I'm to fast in my demands. Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 14: Anticipation

I think sometimes you explain too much about the work in the vineyard... okey it belongs to the FF but in all fairness it is a little bit boring to read. But allright you can easyly skipp that part ^^""" I look forward to the feast. And hope for the dance between cella and the king ^^... see ya Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 15: Wishes

*laughs* Oh yeah there are spiders and then there are the Mirkwood spiders about three feed tall *gg* I can only imagen what would happen to me if I would come across such a spider... I would proberly wee my panties ^^""" even with a elf for my protection. But ahh still I would do anything for just one day with an elf so even spiders woulnd't frighten me too much. Nice chapter! Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 16: Spiders

The hole chapter I thought about Nandirn what's his secret? Maybe he is legolas? Or even the real elvenking? I'm really lost here help please ^^""" but the chapter was again nice and informativ ^^ and i liked it that the king was a little bit more relaxed and talked more and even joked! That was really something new and I thought it was rather nice. Till the next chappi then... Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 17: Expectation

Waaahooo yeah now I had my dance *gg* oh how romantic... I love it more I want more of it *laughs* i would be in heaven by now if some elf would be dancing with me *sighn* the smell must be soo good ahhh, but I know that this will never happen ;_; that's so sad *bawling* See ya in the next chapter...Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 18: Dancing

A kiss... okey it wasn't a REAL kiss but it was a kiss sooo better than nothing i'd say *gg* But now will she look to deep in the winebowl? That could be fatal if you know what I mean *fg* bur allright get the party started! See ya...Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 19: Merrymaking

Ohhh myy GooOdd I think I'm going to die x_X THAT is Soo cute, sweet, sexy and utterly seductiv! I can't believe that this is happening! Oh what I would give to be in her place right now... anybody interested in a soul perhaps? *laughs* that would be a low price compared to THIS a KISS FROM AN ELF whaaa and not any Elf NOO the ELVENKIN himself Legolases father... oh the ugly head of joulesy is in me right now I'm telling you that. But allright she deserves it! GO GIRL *laughs* Bey bey Saikobi

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Date: 30/05/05 Title: Chapter 20: Desires

O____O is she CRAZyyY a freaking madwomen that one! I would never EVER have the courage to go up their... I would proberly feel like a slut that presents herself like a cheap thing to be picked up! Really the next time she should think twice before she does anything like that again! Bye bye Saikobi