Reviews by Saikobi
Summary: A young Dorwinion woman and her uncle travel north from the inland sea of Rhun to Esgaroth seeking employment at the Elfking Thranduil's new vineyard.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Thranduil
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177985 Read Count: 46006
Published: Oct 20 2004 Updated: Apr 15 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Departure Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
That was a very good first chapter ^^ good introduction! You learn something about one of the main charakters but not too much so that you stil will be interestet n them as the story continues. Very good I look forward to the next chappi ^^ Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 2: Arrival Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
Ahhh... now it's getting interesting *laughs* I only can imagen how they would feel... but to be truthful I would give everything to be in her place right now lucky *piep* ^^"" But that will never happen so I'm satisfied with what I have and in the moment that's your story so again I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 3: Picking Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
Ohhh I would love to do that! It must be a awsome feeling to stick your feed in some cool and crushed grapes... But for now I'm very curios as to what will happen next! So see ya in the next chappi Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 4: Pressing Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
That song was... uhm... a little stupid^^"" i would become mad if i would hear it more than twice a day or so... But otherwise the chappi was good, I only wonder what the king has planed for cella... but I think that will come out soon. So let's go to the next chapter then *gg* Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 5: The Visitor Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
Oh my God that song again @.@ by now I would be temted to use earplugs or something like that ^^"" But the part was funny *gg* the visit of the king and than the other woman *laughs* but until now nothing really happend so I wait ^^ Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 6: Moonlight Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
hm... interesting I must say. I wonder what the king did to her because I never heard of anything like it before or maybe only when someone talked about healers but I thought the king wasn't a healer? ahhh doesn't matter... he healed her and thats all what counts *gg* Till next chater... Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 8: Storm Clouds Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
Ahh... how sweet of him *gg* I hope she will change her mind about the feast I really would like to see her dance with the king that would be so romantik! Again till next chappi...Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 9: Cloudburst Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
That is so cute... he is really a sweetpie that one *gg* oh I would never ever give that cloak back no no no NEVER! Okey maybe I would but only because the smell will be fainting away and you have to renew it *laughs* But enough of my blubbering XD See ya in the next Chappi *gg* ... Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 9: Cloudburst Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
That is so cute... he is really a sweetpie that one *gg* oh I would never ever give that cloak back no no no NEVER! Okey maybe I would but only because the smell will be fainting away and you have to renew it *laughs* But enough of my blubbering XD See ya in the next Chappi *gg* ... Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 10: Preparations Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
Whaa somebody help the poor women for jesus christ! Oh my gog oh my god ;___; I hope somebody will come and help her or els it doesn't look all to good o_O She can't even bite him ~__~ how unfair of him but maybe she can kick him in the more needed places of the man spieces! *laughs* that would be good... but as allways I will have to wait and see in the next chapter so here we got see ya... Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 11: Abduction Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
Puhh that was close... a view minutes later and she could have been raped! She was lucky that the elvenhearing kicked in by the king or els it would have ended very much in a different way! But for now I'm fine with how it is *gg* Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 12: Visitors Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
I know where he will send them *gg* i bet with you he will send them to Mirkwood *gg* so he can have her with him all the time *laughs* how cutly sellfish of him ^___^ Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 13: Remorse Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
I knew it *gg* but *sigh'n* I miss some real interaction between the king and cella... I mean they must talk some time right? And than not only two or tree sentences... but maybe I'm to fast in my demands. Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 14: Anticipation Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
I think sometimes you explain too much about the work in the vineyard... okey it belongs to the FF but in all fairness it is a little bit boring to read. But allright you can easyly skipp that part ^^""" I look forward to the feast. And hope for the dance between cella and the king ^^... see ya Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 15: Wishes Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
*laughs* Oh yeah there are spiders and then there are the Mirkwood spiders about three feed tall *gg* I can only imagen what would happen to me if I would come across such a spider... I would proberly wee my panties ^^""" even with a elf for my protection. But ahh still I would do anything for just one day with an elf so even spiders woulnd't frighten me too much. Nice chapter! Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 16: Spiders Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
The hole chapter I thought about Nandirn what's his secret? Maybe he is legolas? Or even the real elvenking? I'm really lost here help please ^^""" but the chapter was again nice and informativ ^^ and i liked it that the king was a little bit more relaxed and talked more and even joked! That was really something new and I thought it was rather nice. Till the next chappi then... Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 17: Expectation Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
Waaahooo yeah now I had my dance *gg* oh how romantic... I love it more I want more of it *laughs* i would be in heaven by now if some elf would be dancing with me *sighn* the smell must be soo good ahhh, but I know that this will never happen ;_; that's so sad *bawling* See ya in the next chapter...Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 18: Dancing Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
A kiss... okey it wasn't a REAL kiss but it was a kiss sooo better than nothing i'd say *gg* But now will she look to deep in the winebowl? That could be fatal if you know what I mean *fg* bur allright get the party started! See ya...Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 19: Merrymaking Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
Ohhh myy GooOdd I think I'm going to die x_X THAT is Soo cute, sweet, sexy and utterly seductiv! I can't believe that this is happening! Oh what I would give to be in her place right now... anybody interested in a soul perhaps? *laughs* that would be a low price compared to THIS a KISS FROM AN ELF whaaa and not any Elf NOO the ELVENKIN himself Legolases father... oh the ugly head of joulesy is in me right now I'm telling you that. But allright she deserves it! GO GIRL *laughs* Bey bey Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 20: Desires Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
O____O is she CRAZyyY a freaking madwomen that one! I would never EVER have the courage to go up their... I would proberly feel like a slut that presents herself like a cheap thing to be picked up! Really the next time she should think twice before she does anything like that again! Bye bye Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 21: Nightmare Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
Okeyy... maybe she would even sleep through her own funeral or whatever o_O hm... when I think about it she came near too it didn't she? But the question now is if the king really knows where she is or if he is now griefing 0over her ^^"" that would be to some point really romantic aspecially when he would find out that she is okey *gg* So let's see what happens next ^^ Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 22: Recovery Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
And again I must say THAT IS Soo SWEET he's like the knight in a shining armor *laughs* ascaping with his love on the back of his faithful hores *gg* how utterly romantic of you! I only hope that they will make it safe to Mirkwood and maybe on the way there, there could be some more romantic situations between her and the king ^.~ See ya Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 23: Escape Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
This last scene was really cute... like he's pretending to sleep like a human *gg* but like she said she isn't a little girl or child anymore and he should know that such a missy trick wouldn't work with a woman o_O But alas men... I never will understand them and it doesn't metter witch rase it is... see ya soon... Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 24: Starlight Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
Okey my jaw is by now fare fare beneath any comprehansion O_O the guts of that woman unbelievble! Just mesmorizing... does she knows the emotion shame AT ALL? Doesn't look's like it by any means ^^""
Date: May 30 2005
Title: Chapter 25: Surrender Reviewer: Saikobi Signed
Clever little girl *gg* thats all I have to say for now... and that the king is a asshole >.< bla bla thats all what he's saying in my eyes... if he would be so wise he would know that no one can ascape love not even a Elvenking! Saikobi
Date: May 30 2005