Bravo! That was absolutely wonderful, one of the best I have ever read. Please do continue.
Enjoying your plot immensely so far! Found one error however: As he (should be his) father continued, breaking the warriors into parties.. Minor adjustment. Off to read the next chapter!
Its chapters like these that make waiting so hard. Please update soon :)
Looking great so far, I loved how despcritive you were with Legolas' emotions, I felt like going in there myself to give him a big hug.
Author's Response: Thank you, and I\'m sure he\'d appreciate it.
Tolkien himself would be proud, it sounds like something that actually happened after the battle for Middle Earth.
Author's Response: eee, you make me so excited! Seriously, cue happy dance for me at such lovely praise. Thank you!
This story is just too cute, I love how you are developing the carachters. Can't wait until the next chapter. ^_^
Author's Response: I'm sure Legolas would have appreciated it very much, too. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: And, for that matter, for reviewing all three chapters that were up! I really appreciate that!
Author's Response: ...and I don't know why these all decided to show up here. The first one was supposed to be a response to the review of chapter one--it doesn't really make sense as a response to your review of chapter five...*sigh* I'm just incompetent, I guess...
Goodness, that was intense!
Very talented in erotica, I must say.
Author's Response: Thank you! Writing that much smut was a bit of a marathon for me, so I'm glad that the final product turned out well. :)
Very well done! Interestig concept, it seems as though thats exactly what ran through Isildur's mind. If only he knew...
Yes, that chapter was very moving, you captured the emotions and tone very well in this piece.
Oh my, what a beautiful analogy.
This gave me a great laugh, and your sarcasm is priceless.
Author's Response: My sarcasm is very flattered ;)