OMG! this is so depressing! I love horses, as you seem to too. This was a very creative story. I loved it because it brought tears to my eyes. Fan fic almost never does that to me. well done!
I think this story started with an overall good idea, but I think you could have elaborated a little more. But again, on the whole, I think this was a good bit of fan fic
um...interesting. For some reason I can't imagine Legolas baby-sitting. Unless of course you cound Gimli as a kid!