Penname: Coffeecup [Contact] Real name: jorun
Member Since: 11/08/05
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I'm a Swedish 18 year-old girl and fantasyfreak. I like writing, reading, drawing, and arguing, and if I don't get my coffee I get... unstable.
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Summary: New movie, new students, new lustobjects, new mini-Balrogs and a whole new curriculum. That’s right, children. OFUM is back. But wait… It’s no longer the only University in town. MUSM? What the…?
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond, Treebeard, Sauron, Saruman, Rosie, Bilbo, Gollum, Boromir, Faramir, Elrohir, Celeborn, Galadriel, Thranduil, Elladan, Glorfindel, Haldir
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 84845 Read Count: 178493
[Report This] Published: 19/10/04 Updated: 21/01/05
Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Date: 20/08/05 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: Cunning Plans Revealed and the Nature of Canon and Krakens

Hello! I've only recently become a member, and since I'm lazy I don't feel like going back and revieweing every single chapter... This story is really great, Just as good as the first one (Which I reviewed on FanFiction.net, under a different name...) I especially like the crossover part, but every chapter is hillarious, and they all hold something new to laugh at. The OCs are marvellous, and I love the way you write the Canons. It's very satisfying to read about how they deal with all those things that annoy you so much in fanfics. So, keep op the good work, and update soon!

Summary: Arwen is fed up with fanfiction. But what lengths is she willing to go to in order to restore Middle Earth to normal? Crossover-mania!
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65399 Read Count: 25624
[Report This] Published: 03/12/04 Updated: 08/12/04
Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Date: 11/08/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Problem is Diagnosed

The idea for the story is intresting, and the beginning is great. Your approach is quite original, even if the concept in itself isn't. You write very well. There's just one tiny little thing - Greenleaf is not Legolas' surname, it's the translation of his first name. An easy mistake to make, and one that doesn't really affect the story - just thought I'd point it out.

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Date: 11/08/05 Title: Chapter 2: Finding a Solution

This is coming along wonderfully, in my opinion. You really do write very well, and not only spelling- and grammarwise. The narrative flows (for lack of a better description), the story is easy to read and very fun.

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Date: 11/08/05 Title: Chapter 3: A Strange Ritual and Laughing Trees

Very funny! A side of Arwen we don't really get to see in the books or movies, but a believable one nontheless, siblings being what they are. I rather liked the whole ritual thing.

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 4: The First Outsiders Arrive

Still going good... although we're not supposed to call lady elves "she-elves". It makes Elrond unhappy. Of course, I don't know if you've read Camilla Sandman's OFUM. If not, you should - I think you'd like it. Anyhow, another good chapter.

Author's Response: I LOVE Miss Cam's OFUM! When I first wrote this, however, I was unaware that the term 'she-elf' was decidedly disliked far and wide. I have since picked up the word 'elleth' from a ff.net author by the name of Elf Eye. But I just never bothered to go back and change this. Thanks for your review!

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 5: Even More Newcomers

This is getting very interesting. Can't wait to read on. So far, I really like your take on how OOC-ness, slash and 'Sues affect the Canon spouses. One little thing - author's notes in the middle of a chapter are not such a good idea. Better to use footnotes. But it's not like you do it all the time, like some authors you come across. Anyway, I like your light-hearted, entertaining yet semi-serious style. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 6: Legolas and Arwen Sittin' in a Tree.....

Oh, you really hit the head on the nail (or whatever the expression is) with the Aragorn-Legolas Arwen thing. Shudder. Yes, it was frighteningly accurate. Again with the "Greenleaf" thing, though... Ah, well, no matter. Brilliant chapter.

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 7: Getting Things Back to.......Normal?

Hehehe... Yay for songfics! especially funny ones. Actually, only for funny ones... This was hillarious! But do try to avoid superfluous author's notes.

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 8: The Singing Marchwarden

Ah, yet another great chapter. Made me giggle out loud. Um, I don't really know what else to write... It was funny.

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 9: Running into Major Trouble

Heh. You captored the very essence of Mary Sue. Charming names, too - "Laurewen"... Heh. Namegenerators are fun.

Author's Response: Name generators are a blast. And I know they're not exactly accurate. Probably like the Elvish you're going to see later on in the story. But I do the best I can with that. Still...name generators are fun!

Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 10: To Defeat a Sue

This chapter WAS funny! But you're quite right, 'Sues are a serious business indeed. What a novel - and, might I say, brilliant - way to get rid of Mary Sues! This story just keeps getting better.

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 11: Arriving in Rivendell

Wheee! Hobbits! Poor Glorfindel and Erestor, though. Another good chapter.

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 12: The Problems of the Hobbits

Poor, poor Rosie. Well, I think you manage admirably well to keep the canons in character, and it was nice to see more of Elizabeth.

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 12: The Problems of the Hobbits

Poor, poor Rosie. Well, I think you manage admirably well to keep the canons in character, and it was nice to see more of Elizabeth.

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 13: Narnia Visits Middle Earth

Yay for the Narnians! They should definately be taking precautions right about now, their world being in imminent danger... Will we see any Harry Potter characters, I wonder? Anyway, yet another great chapter. I haven't a single quibble.

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 14: Say What?

Hee! It was great! Oh, the horror of slang. So inappropriate in LotR, yet so often used. Hilarious as always.

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 15: A Dream and More Newcomers

Wheee, Stargate! But no HP, huh? Oh, well, can't exactly blame you. One can only mix so many fandoms before it gets a wee bit too confusing. The first part was rather touching, and I think you've got the SG-1 characters down pat. Very nicely done.

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 16: You Shot Me!

As good as always. And I agree - the actors in the TV series are better than the ones in the film.

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 17: The Return of the Mirkwood Elf

He does have great hair, doesn't he...So, we have finally reached the slash. Scary. I'm having trouble coming up with anything new to write, here. As always, this was a very good, very funny chapter. I really like the interactions between the characters from different continuums, and the dialogue in general is great. And I have no idea how "continuum" is spelled...

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Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 18: The Problem with Elven Hearing

Oh, how cruel to deprive anyone of their coffee! I just love those hobbits, by the way. And poor Legolas and Haldir. Or maybe it should be poor everyone else? Wonderfully hilarious.