Reviews by Coffeecup
Summary: New movie, new students, new lustobjects, new mini-Balrogs and a whole new curriculum. That’s right, children. OFUM is back. But wait… It’s no longer the only University in town. MUSM? What the…?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond, Treebeard, Sauron, Saruman, Rosie, Bilbo, Gollum, Boromir, Faramir, Elrohir, Celeborn, Galadriel, Thranduil, Elladan, Glorfindel, Haldir
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 84845 Read Count: 205418
Published: Oct 18 2004 Updated: Jan 21 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: Cunning Plans Revealed and the Nature of Canon and Krakens Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Hello! I've only recently become a member, and since I'm lazy I don't feel like going back and revieweing every single chapter... This story is really great, Just as good as the first one (Which I reviewed on FanFiction.net, under a different name...) I especially like the crossover part, but every chapter is hillarious, and they all hold something new to laugh at. The OCs are marvellous, and I love the way you write the Canons. It's very satisfying to read about how they deal with all those things that annoy you so much in fanfics. So, keep op the good work, and update soon!
Date: Aug 20 2005
Summary: Arwen is fed up with fanfiction. But what lengths is she willing to go to in order to restore Middle Earth to normal? Crossover-mania!
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65399 Read Count: 30650
Published: Dec 03 2004 Updated: Dec 08 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Problem is Diagnosed Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
The idea for the story is intresting, and the beginning is great. Your approach is quite original, even if the concept in itself isn't. You write very well. There's just one tiny little thing - Greenleaf is not Legolas' surname, it's the translation of his first name. An easy mistake to make, and one that doesn't really affect the story - just thought I'd point it out.
Date: Aug 11 2005
Title: Chapter 2: Finding a Solution Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
This is coming along wonderfully, in my opinion. You really do write very well, and not only spelling- and grammarwise. The narrative flows (for lack of a better description), the story is easy to read and very fun.
Date: Aug 11 2005
Title: Chapter 3: A Strange Ritual and Laughing Trees Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Very funny! A side of Arwen we don't really get to see in the books or movies, but a believable one nontheless, siblings being what they are. I rather liked the whole ritual thing.
Date: Aug 11 2005
Title: Chapter 4: The First Outsiders Arrive Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Still going good... although we're not supposed to call lady elves "she-elves". It makes Elrond unhappy. Of course, I don't know if you've read Camilla Sandman's OFUM. If not, you should - I think you'd like it. Anyhow, another good chapter.

Author's Response: I LOVE Miss Cam's OFUM! When I first wrote this, however, I was unaware that the term 'she-elf' was decidedly disliked far and wide. I have since picked up the word 'elleth' from a ff.net author by the name of Elf Eye. But I just never bothered to go back and change this. Thanks for your review!
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 5: Even More Newcomers Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
This is getting very interesting. Can't wait to read on. So far, I really like your take on how OOC-ness, slash and 'Sues affect the Canon spouses. One little thing - author's notes in the middle of a chapter are not such a good idea. Better to use footnotes. But it's not like you do it all the time, like some authors you come across. Anyway, I like your light-hearted, entertaining yet semi-serious style. Keep up the good work.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 6: Legolas and Arwen Sittin' in a Tree..... Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Oh, you really hit the head on the nail (or whatever the expression is) with the Aragorn-Legolas Arwen thing. Shudder. Yes, it was frighteningly accurate. Again with the "Greenleaf" thing, though... Ah, well, no matter. Brilliant chapter.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 7: Getting Things Back to.......Normal? Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Hehehe... Yay for songfics! especially funny ones. Actually, only for funny ones... This was hillarious! But do try to avoid superfluous author's notes.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 8: The Singing Marchwarden Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Ah, yet another great chapter. Made me giggle out loud. Um, I don't really know what else to write... It was funny.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 9: Running into Major Trouble Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Heh. You captored the very essence of Mary Sue. Charming names, too - "Laurewen"... Heh. Namegenerators are fun.

Author's Response: Name generators are a blast. And I know they're not exactly accurate. Probably like the Elvish you're going to see later on in the story. But I do the best I can with that. Still...name generators are fun!
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 10: To Defeat a Sue Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
This chapter WAS funny! But you're quite right, 'Sues are a serious business indeed. What a novel - and, might I say, brilliant - way to get rid of Mary Sues! This story just keeps getting better.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 11: Arriving in Rivendell Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Wheee! Hobbits! Poor Glorfindel and Erestor, though. Another good chapter.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 12: The Problems of the Hobbits Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Poor, poor Rosie. Well, I think you manage admirably well to keep the canons in character, and it was nice to see more of Elizabeth.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 12: The Problems of the Hobbits Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Poor, poor Rosie. Well, I think you manage admirably well to keep the canons in character, and it was nice to see more of Elizabeth.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 13: Narnia Visits Middle Earth Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Yay for the Narnians! They should definately be taking precautions right about now, their world being in imminent danger... Will we see any Harry Potter characters, I wonder? Anyway, yet another great chapter. I haven't a single quibble.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 14: Say What? Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Hee! It was great! Oh, the horror of slang. So inappropriate in LotR, yet so often used. Hilarious as always.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 15: A Dream and More Newcomers Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Wheee, Stargate! But no HP, huh? Oh, well, can't exactly blame you. One can only mix so many fandoms before it gets a wee bit too confusing. The first part was rather touching, and I think you've got the SG-1 characters down pat. Very nicely done.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 16: You Shot Me! Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
As good as always. And I agree - the actors in the TV series are better than the ones in the film.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 17: The Return of the Mirkwood Elf Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
He does have great hair, doesn't he...So, we have finally reached the slash. Scary. I'm having trouble coming up with anything new to write, here. As always, this was a very good, very funny chapter. I really like the interactions between the characters from different continuums, and the dialogue in general is great. And I have no idea how "continuum" is spelled...
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 18: The Problem with Elven Hearing Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Oh, how cruel to deprive anyone of their coffee! I just love those hobbits, by the way. And poor Legolas and Haldir. Or maybe it should be poor everyone else? Wonderfully hilarious.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 19: AFB's Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Ah, so now our heroes finally have some protection! But will the helmets be of any use against Mary Sues? Nice, I think, that you included Denethor and Thranduil there. They get so maligned. Still progressing wonderfully.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 20: A Brief Interlude Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Yaay! X-men! Star Wars! Harry! Buffy! and Xena! I am looking forward to the imminent, chaotic meeting.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 21: A Brawl in Rivendell Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Just as chaotic as I thought! And just as fun. Having all those people working together will be... interesting. And very entertaining.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 22: Visiting Authors Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Still so good... Although, I it's bookverse Canon where the Iliad is concerned, Helen did NOT love Paris. She had kids. She wanted to go home. But thats just a tiny little quibble, nothing you need to pay attention to - the story is still going great, and I'm very intrested in seeing how this will develop.
Date: Aug 12 2005
Title: Chapter 23: A Meeting of Fanfiction Authors Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Ah, quite devious. I admit that I don't really know where this is going, although I long to find out. Not tonight, though. I need my sleep. And being the Author does give you a frightening advantage, doesn't it?
Date: Aug 12 2005