Brittany, one of my dear friends, is a true writer. In all my months of knowin her I did not realize the true scope of her literary talents. "Realization" is a wonderful story of romance between friends - a theme that plays a part in most of our young (and old) lives. This was a fantastic story, filled with great description, plot, and characters. I give this masterful work a thumbs-up TEN!
Author's Response: Thank you so much ...it came to me in a dream(lol) But the story is not done yet I have been unable to put more chapters on because I do not have a good computer...yet. But thank you again.
Very good. A wonderful way to "snatch" the reader's attention. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Very good, Courtney. Great use of emotion and excitement. It could have been a little longer, and a tad bit more structured (don't hate me for saying it), but overall I can't wait to hear what's going to happen next! So far you're keeping me on the edge of my seat. Keep up the good work!
Interesting story, but may I ask what this has to do with The Lord of the Rings?
Author's Response: It is off topic, therefore, it pertains to other things than LOTR, meaning LOTR is not the only thing in the world.\r\nREAD THE CATEGORIES