Reviews by presnieboer
Finding Home by oblotr Rated: R starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 30]
Summary: After a bad breakup Orlando finds comfort in the form of a stranger. But when he starts to fall for her, he realizes that there is still a lot he doesn't know about her, or himself.
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Orlando Bloom
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25001 Read Count: 23462
Published: Sep 07 2004 Updated: Sep 15 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 13: The Ride Home Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
Jen, Jen, Jen. An awesome chapter as usual. You seem to have a gift for making it passionate and graphic but not TOO kinky. I like and I LOVE the story! Keep going!

Author's Response: I am so happy that you like it. I am really liking how this is turning out. Promise more soon.
Date: Oct 10 2004
Title: Chapter 15: When You're Gone Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
Uh oh! Who's the guy? I'm glad Orlando came back to his senses! Can't wait for more!
Date: Nov 06 2004
Always Be Here by AliDawne Rated: NC-17 half-star [Reviews - 23]
Summary: "Baby" works as an assistant for Fiona, Orlando's agent. She has known him for a little over a year, and they have become friends. She is a person he can trust when he needs to unwind. They are attracted to each other but have no intention of acting on it, in order to protect their working relationship. Oh, and he's a pain in the ass. She has a past that she will not discuss with him, but it has colored her opinion about so many things. She is far too bitter for her age, but shades of an innocent girl lurk under her layers of protective armor. Orlando knows she works too hard. She doesn't take care of herself nearly as well as she takes care of him and it worries him. He makes a decision that will change their lives forever. Can she let go of the past and embrace the future?
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Orlando Bloom
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48432 Read Count: 26729
Published: Oct 09 2004 Updated: Jul 29 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
I'm really liking this one, I like how you tell the story from their points of view, makes it more interesting. I also like how the girl CONTINUALLY gives Orlando a hard time, he needs to be kept on his toes.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're liking it so far. I like that she gives him a hard time too. Wouldn't be much of a challenge if she was a swooning fan-girl, now would it? Ali
Date: Oct 09 2004
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
AHHH! The suspence! I can't take the suspence! PLEASE post more VERY soon! I LOVE this!
Date: Dec 03 2004
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
A dream? That's one hell of a dream! Nice twist! Can't wait for more!
Date: Apr 10 2005
Summary: Legolas gets laid! Peep through some tent flaps in Dunharrow and watch the Prince of Mirkwood lose his virginity (and then some!) Complete and utter smut! Het,OFC, oral, PWP, very NC17
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Erotica
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5851 Read Count: 24609
Published: Oct 10 2004 Updated: Oct 14 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Legolas Loses His Virginity Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
It draws you in and holds you there 'til you die! Well Done!

Author's Response: Please don't die! I would feel so guilty! ;-)
Date: Nov 10 2004
Kaitlyn by oblotr Rated: G starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Just a little something I wrote when I was depressed. But somehow, my daughter brings me out of it all the time.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52 Read Count: 1928
Published: Oct 11 2004 Updated: Oct 11 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A short poem Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
That is SO sweet, I think I'm gonna cry now. I can't wait until I have a child, that's just so beautiful.

Author's Response: She really is so precious. So I guess she is my preciousss.
Date: Oct 11 2004
Summary: A ficlet in which Merry and Pippin think about Frodo, and recall some memorable times with their friend.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Merry, Pippin
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 841 Read Count: 1492
Published: Oct 11 2004 Updated: Oct 11 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Rememberance Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
I loved that, it was SO sweet and SO sad. Touching, VERY touching.
Date: Oct 14 2004
Sea Shell by Cormak Rated: PG-13 starhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Finding love is like a sea shell you discover in the sand. You never know its worth unless you take it into your hand...
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Orlando Bloom, Elijah Wood, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Drama, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6505 Read Count: 1635
Published: Oct 16 2004 Updated: Oct 16 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
I LOVE this story, you've got a real knack for writing and creating really interesting characters. Please continue!
Date: Oct 18 2004
Summary: Legolas and his frisky female friend are at it again! This time celebrating the defeat of Sauron's army in the White City. More complete and utter smut. PWP, Het, OFC, Oral
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Erotica
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5616 Read Count: 37560
Published: Oct 17 2004 Updated: Oct 24 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Return to Minas Tirith Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
Whew! I'm impressed, that was truly awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate your feedback!
Date: Nov 10 2004
Orlando I Am by Nephthys Rated: PG starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary: A short poem I wrote for a friend about Orlando. Goes to Dr. Seuss' "Sam I Am". Completely goofy but hopefully entertaining.
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Orlando Bloom
Genres: Poetry, Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 182 Read Count: 1813
Published: Oct 17 2004 Updated: Oct 17 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Orlando I Am Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
It's so funny and so cute! I love it! Dr Seuss would be proud!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you!
Date: Nov 10 2004
Collide by Marie Dantes Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: One week. One actor. One reporter. One feature story. One look at the rest of their lives.
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Orlando Bloom, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8991 Read Count: 5726
Published: Oct 21 2004 Updated: Nov 14 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Wednesday, Part One Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
I'm loving this story! I love the premise, it definitely has a lot of promise! I can't wait for more!
Date: Oct 21 2004
Title: Chapter 5: Thursday Morning Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
I'm LOVING this! The chemistry between them is AWESOME! Can't wait for more!
Date: Nov 16 2004
Summary: The One Ring, so often ignored, is quite irate and speaks to his nemesis - Mary Sue - and makes her an offer she cannot refuse.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Other
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 886 Read Count: 1792
Published: Oct 29 2004 Updated: Oct 29 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Ring Speaks! Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
I LOVE! It was hilarious! From the ring's POV, what a concept? Nice work as usual.

Author's Response: That one just came to me. I dunno from where, tho. And maybe I don't want to know!
Date: Nov 10 2004
Summary: Legolas and a childhood friend are paired on a scouting mission for Elrond before The Ring heads south. Will they ever admit to their mutual desire or drive each other crazy trying to deny their attraction? Het, OFC, solo, oral, NC17
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38401 Read Count: 82806
Published: Oct 31 2004 Updated: Jan 08 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Mad, Bad and Dangerous to Know Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
I love the tension! I love stories where Legolas can't admit his feelings to his "old friends"! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! But he's not alone in his unwillingness to admit how he feels! ;-)
Date: Nov 01 2004
Title: Chapter 8: A Kiss Between Friends Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
Ahh! The tension! The suspence! I can't take it! Please! Add more soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you find the tension believeable and not too trite! Thank you!
Date: Nov 10 2004
Title: Chapter 9: A Wish Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
Woah! Now THAT'S a twist! Just when I thought you weren't going to, you went and did it. Talk about relieving the tension.

Author's Response: I couldn't keep torturing the poor guy - er - elf, now could I? ;-) Poor thing!
Date: Nov 11 2004
Title: Chapter 10: For Want of Wings Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
Auugh! I LOVE! MORE! MORE! PLEASE post more SOON!

Author's Response: *salutes* Yes, ma'am! So glad you are enjoying this! There are a few more twisties to come! *evil chuckle*
Date: Nov 11 2004
Title: Chapter 1: Mad, Bad and Dangerous to Know Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
YES! They FINALLY were honest with themselves and each other! It's about time! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: But the course of love never did run smoothly - or something along those lines! ;-)
Date: Dec 03 2004
Title: Chapter 18: Return to Rivendell Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
ooh! Don't leave me in suspence! PLEASE post more SOON! I NEED more!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so cruel! ;-) Haldir is up to no good but he's so damned sexy! rrr!
Date: Dec 08 2004
Title: Chapter 1: Mad, Bad and Dangerous to Know Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
ARGH! I hope she sets Legolas straight! She HAS to! Haldir's being an ass and she CAN'T let him get away with it! PLEASE post more VERY soon!

Author's Response: Yes, but that Haldir is something else, isn't he? Smokin'!
Date: Dec 15 2004
Title: Chapter 21: Showtime! Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
WOAH! Boy did Haldir get an eye full! Serves him right the horney little bastard! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: LOL! "Horney little bastard" is right! LOL! Don't worry - he gets his!
Date: Dec 22 2004
Title: Chapter 25: Legolas' Destiny Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
Oooh, what happens next? I can't wait to see!

Author's Response: Hmmm - a secret? You know Legolas leaves for Mordor with the Fellowship but there's a part two to this underway! Haldir must have his say!
Date: Jan 04 2005
Title: Chapter 27: The End or Another Beginning? Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
ooh, she HAS to go with Haldir. Oh what a wicked little coniving trickster he is. VERY tricksy preciousss. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: He is so deliciously wicked, isn't he? Makes you wanna choke him or molest him by turns!
Date: Jan 08 2005
Fantasy by Shanastay Rated: NC-17 starstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Ever wonder what it would be like to wake up next to Legolas?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Erotica, Other
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Kink, AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23840 Read Count: 25136
Published: Nov 09 2004 Updated: Nov 09 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Pillow Fight Reviewer: presnieboer Signed
Got to admit this is the LONGEST and MOST descriptive love scene I've ever read. Nice work! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I actually wrote this from a dream I had with the intention that the reader (female type) could place herself in the OCs place and "live" the story. This is what I would call the ultimate seduction. More? Check out my other fics. The Crux of the Problem and The Forsaken and it's companion piece The Ties that Bind Us in particular have more erotic material plus an actual plot. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: Nov 20 2004