Reviews by Pammie
Wynter by Nadia Rated: NC-17 half-star [Reviews - 50]
Summary: Wynter is a young wardrobe designer; a silent, gloomy young woman no one noticed at the set. Some painful and unresolved issues of her past didn't allow her to open up to anyone, but Orlando won't take a no for an answer.
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Original Character, Orlando Bloom
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156913 Read Count: 88235
Published: Nov 09 2004 Updated: Jan 05 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
Hello, Nadia I am SO glad you decided to update this story. I read what was posted quite a few months back and was so impressed, not to mention hooked! I like the way you write your character Wynter, but I really love the way you write Orlando too. Hope you continue to update regularly! Thanks for a wonderful story. Pammie

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much! I know, it takes me AGES to update them, but you can't fight real life *rolls eyes* Wynter and Orlando and really special, so I hope to have more chapters in store soon! :)
Date: Sep 22 2005
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I am glad to see an update on this story! What a nice way to spend a "winter" evening! LOL! I guess Starr will stir things up a lot more than Wynter and Orlando plan. But I am glad that she gave Orlando the excuse to get close to Wynter again for innocent reasons. Or at least that's how they started out! Hope the next chapter is much sooner! I enjoyed this one very much.

Author's Response: You've got it right! Starr is just what they need right now, more than you imagine... :P Thank you for reading! :D
Date: Jan 20 2006
One Big Mistake by presnieboer Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 104]
Summary: Marissa Leitner meets the one and only Orlando Bloom in a pub one night and ends up having every fan's dream; a one night stand with Orlando himself. Though they agree there should be no emotional attachment, neither of them has an easy time with it. In fact, Orlando is the first to break their pact and tries to look Marissa up, only to find that she's not interested. But is she really not interested or is something else going on? Will Orlando be able to get her to open up and confess the real reason she's "not interested"? Can a one night stand lead to a relationship? A real relationship?
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Dominic Monaghan, Original Character, Orlando Bloom
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 138723 Read Count: 56401
Published: Mar 28 2005 Updated: Mar 09 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-Four: Meet The Parents From Hell Reviewer: Pammie Signed
Excellent chapter! I am glad that Marissa is thru with her family, and that she doesn't have to deal with them any more. I guess it's a blessing in disguise, cos now she has more headaches, literally. Here's hoping she can get past the rag photos and just lay low for awhile til the worst is past. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! Laying low is definitely going to be something they'll have to do for a while but not before getting to the bottom of the story... Should be interesting who's to blame for the photos and story. More to come shortly!
Date: Oct 26 2005
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Resolving Some Personal Issues Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I can't wait for the showdown! I am more curious than Marissa about why Orlando feels the need to meet with Kate. I sense there is more to the meeting than just getting over pettiness and jealousies. I hope that there is a good resolution for all 3 concerned (and kudos to Marissa for sticking to her guns about a neutral meeting place). Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I think what it comes down to it, Orlando has a very hard time letting go of the past AND since Kate was his girlfriend for about 2 or 3 years, there's definitely some emotional investment there on his part, even it is only a friendship thing. I think above all, he has a hard time admitting that maybe she hasn't changed for the better and the best way to that is to see her face to face. After all, if she really responsible for the article and pictures, that would the ultimate betrayal in anyone's eyes.
Date: Feb 28 2006
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter Thirty-Eight: New Friends And Learning The Truth Reviewer: Pammie Signed
Hmm...now you have me wondering if the nice Karen that Marissa met is the same "assisstant" Kate is rambling on about! The meeting with Karen and Marissa just seemed to...smooth...too bad Kate had her say, playing sweet at first then going for the jugular...right where it hurt...I can tell Marissa isn't going to let it go...I liked this very much!

Author's Response: I know, it just seems TOO convenient that Karen not only went to school with Kate, but REALLY doesn't like her either. Now whether she is the same "assistant", I'm not sure yet but I do think it would be interesting if Marissa saw what happens when you bond with someone over a common enemy.
Date: Feb 28 2006
Title: Chapter 42: Chapter Thirty-Nine: When The Truth Hurts Reviewer: Pammie Signed
Hope that this ominous phone call is not what I think it is! Please don't let it be Kate doing something rash like "attempting" suicide! Other than that I enjoyed this chapter, as it kind of is laying the groundwork for the eventual formal commitment between Orlando and Marissa (dare I say marriage!?)...more soon please!

Author's Response: Oh you may dare, I mean that's usually why couples get engaged, right? And as far as the phone call, I'm not ENTIRELY sure what's going on with Kate or why she needs to get therapist involved but somehow that seems a bit extreme, but then she hasn't exactly been poster child for normalcy to date has she? Hmm, what IS that call about? Guess we'll just have to wait and see.
Date: Feb 28 2006
Title: Chapter 43: Chapter Forty: Putting Out Another Fire Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I don't know why but break-up/make-up chapters make me smile...not the break-up part, the make-up part...Orlando was well on the way to breaking up with Missy, yet I felt the desire for him to want to be talked out of it...Dom to the rescue! I hope this episode in their relationship only strengthens them. Marissa didn't know Orlando back then, I think he may have overreacted somewhat to her confession. And Marissa learned something too, I believe she sort of grew up in the time between the fight and the reconciliation. I am glad "everything was alright" as you said.

Author's Response: You're quite insightful, I must say; yes, I think they both learned something from this but that's going to be nothing compared to what they'll learn soon.
Date: Mar 10 2006
Achilles by Nevasaiel Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 42]
Summary: What if Achilles' reputation wasn't just because of incredible skill, but finding such talent... in a woman!
Categories: Other Movies Characters: Paris, Achilles
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure, Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39322 Read Count: 31226
Published: Aug 10 2005 Updated: Oct 15 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I am loving the perspective of this story with Achilles as a woman...I just saw "Troy" again last nite on TV, so I was elated there were a couple more chapters to read today. I think you are very skillful in your storytelling, that you use the dialogue from the movie and tweak it for this tale. I, for one, can't think of a thing to tell you to improve. This is good as is! Thanks for a great read!
Date: Oct 09 2005
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
Happy to have you back AND 2 chapters to read! I really really really! like Achilles as a woman, it's just rich how your perspective changes when the character you watched on the screen is now a female. But you capture the essence of the film version very well, and I am anxiously awaiting the next couple of chapters, I am assuming the reunion of Achilles and Paris in her tent on the beach! (YAY!) More please!
Date: Nov 10 2005
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I don't know what advice I'd give you, cos you seem to be doing fine on your own. All of this is of course leading up to the Achilles/Paris encounter, so I hope you don't leave us hanging now! :-O You have lots of room to do your own thing at this point, cos it's the part of the story that you will create. I am looking for maybe a big conflict between Achilles and Agamemnon regarding the treatment of Paris, leading up to the part where she rescues him from the soldier's having sport with him, and takes him to her tent. Other than that, I think you are doing super on your story, I for one am enjoying it immensely. Pam
Date: Nov 15 2005
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
ahh...I had no doubt your Paris was going to be as skilled in his "department" as Achilles is in hers! Now we all have to wait breathlessly for chapter 19! Hurry! :-)
Date: Feb 03 2006
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
This was so very descriptive and made me feel the tension, anger and desire acutely! (cold shower time!) I like that each of these characters fight for domination of the situation, Paris wants to forget certain aspects of what happened (or almost did) to him and Achilles for trying to right the wrong done to him. They both are used to getting their way, and being in complete control of their destiny. (Paris is more of a let-the-chips-fall kind of guy) But being royalty Paris had been indulged, and I imagine he's in shock at this point to the extremes he's seeing in Achilles. Also how she stirs him! I liked this chapter a lot!

Author's Response: OMG! Thanks so much. I love it when reviews like this are actually detailed. Although I like it too when people just tell me whether they do or don't like what I'm doing, it's great to actually know what it is that people are getting from what I do. Thanks a whole lot!
Date: Feb 03 2006
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I am glad that Achilles continues to take an interest in Paris, I just wonder if all her intentions are noble (lol!)...thanks for continuing a great story!
Date: Feb 03 2006
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
Excellent imagery! I look forward to the tent at last!
Date: Feb 03 2006
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
This was very vivid in the movie and it was no less so in this chapter. When Achilles seems content with the status quo, choosing not to deal for the moment with what goes on outside the confines of the tent, it's as if she feels for the first time what it's like to have a normal life. Eudoras' interruption was just a jogging reminder to what lay beyond the tent flaps, and as tempting as Paris was, she still had the sense of duty to her country and men. But I liked this particular distraction very much! Glad you are going to update more often!
Date: May 21 2006
Dragonfire by White Wolf Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Legolas and Aragorn discover an injured young dragon and offer their help. What happens as a result ends up in an adventure none of them could have imagined. This story won first place in the MC Awards 2006 for Best Action Story.

Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69116 Read Count: 24542
Published: Aug 22 2005 Updated: Jul 20 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I like this story a lot...but I have one question...the dragon hasn't been around in a LONG time! Is he shadowing this group? *wink* Keep up the good work, I am enjoying the journey!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. No shadowing, but don't worry, Treco will return in a most unexpected fashion.
Date: Oct 09 2005
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I was happy to see an update, as I am really enjoying this story. I am glad for now that Legolas' journey is ended so maybe he can heal...and that Aragorn and he can formulate a plan. BTW, where is that pesky dragon? LOL

Author's Response: I'm happy you are enjoying the story. Yes, Legolas can rest now, and he and Aragorn will definitely need a plan. Treco will be showing up soon but perhaps not the way you think.
Date: Oct 26 2005
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight Reviewer: Pammie Signed
Another good part of the story. I love a mystery, and a mystery woman is even better! I have all the questions in my mind that Aragorn does, and hope to find out next chapter! Thanks for the excellent addition.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I like to keep my readers guessing. It will take several more chapters to answer all the questions, but they will come---eventually.
Date: Nov 03 2005
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine Reviewer: Pammie Signed
My first thought about the last paragraph was that Allaura isn't what she appears on the surface to be! Am I close? Does the jewelry change her? All in all, it was a good chapter, I am glad Leggy is healing and getting better, I think that to get out of their jam, it will take both Aragorn and Legolas to accomplish their escape. Please give us more soon!

Author's Response: You are correct. Allaura isn't what she seems. The jewelry doesn't change her exactly, but it is a factor in the story. Thank you. Escaping will be very hard for our boys. More will be coming.
Date: Nov 20 2005
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I don't know, but I am guessing that Allaura has a large creature making big noises in her castle! LOL! I hope that the reason that Aragorn has been brought out is to help her deal with the dragon...unless I am way off base! And I hope he bargains his and Legolas' freedom from the dungeon in exchange for his help.. Your descriptions are quite vivid, it's easy to imagine each setting as the story shifts from outside to inside, daylight to dark. Keep up the good work and please update soon!

Author's Response: The first part is correct. Sorry, but your next guesses are 'way off base', as you put it.. Keep trying, though. I love to hear what my readers are thinking. Thank you very much. I try hard to give everyone a vivd pictue of what's going on. I will update soon.
Date: Dec 04 2005
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven Reviewer: Pammie Signed
So glad you updated, and even tho Aragorn was taken and taken advantage of, I feel Allaura will have met her match when she tries for Legolas. Looking forward to more! Thanks for a good read.

Author's Response: You may be surprised what happens between Legolas and Allaura. More I cannot say at this time. :o) Thank you for liking the story and, of course, for reviewing.
Date: Dec 28 2005
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I wondered at all the big noise and shaking going on above the dungeon! And suspected the (or at least "A") dragon. I hope at last he can repay the kindness Legolas and Aragorn showed him in the wilderness! More soon, please!

Author's Response: Your suspicion was right on. Treco will make an appearance soon. Kindnesswill be repaid, but probably not the way you may think. More soon.
Date: Jan 08 2006
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen Reviewer: Pammie Signed
AW! What a cliffhanger! This is getting very exciting, I've been waiting for this showdown for a while now. Please update soon, so we can see if Legolas is indeed Allaura's match in wits and strength of character.

Author's Response: I'm glad you find it exciting. As for the showdown, I think you'll be a bit surprised at what happens in the next chapter. I don't think it will be what you're expecting. At least, I hope not. I don't like to be predictable. Soon.
Date: Jan 21 2006
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I find some measure of comfort in the fact that we now know that Treco is in the castle as well as Aragorn and Legolas. He is in the same predicament, taken against his will and held prisoner. Poor Legolas, I feel for him as Allaura works her evil on his sensitive soul. I also fear for whatever awaits him in between the times she uses him for whatever her purposes are. I hope there is some way for Aragorn to get in touch with the dragon, and join forces to save their elf friend. Looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response: I'm glad you find the presence of Treco conforting. I happen to agree with you. Yes, Legolas needs our sympathy. Allaura's evil has affected him quite badly, and it doesn't look like things will get better anytime soon. Perhaps the ranger and the dragon *can* get together and plot some kind of rescue. Then again, maybe not. :o) More soon.
Date: Feb 04 2006
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen Reviewer: Pammie Signed
At last we have the reason for Allaura's capture of Legolas and Aragorn, and a very fascinating story concerning the necklace. I am so glad that Legolas didn't succumb to Allaura's intentions for him. It was pleasing that she couldn't make the stone work on him like she expected. But she intends to wait him out, til he wakes up, so he's not out of danger yet. I think Treco DID hear Aragorn, and is not only trying to free himself, but now wants to help the man who helped him. I hope this is the beginning of the end of Allaura's cruel reign over man and elf and beast!

Author's Response: Glad you were fascinated by the necklace's story. Legolas reacted quite differently from what Allaura thought. She isn't too happy about it not to mention confused. It's never happened to her before. No, Legolas isn't out of danger yet, and only time will tell whether he can gain control or whether Allaura's will can prevail. Having Aragorn and Treco together is a good thing, but they have their own problems to solve first. We shall see how close we are to Allaura's downfall, if she falls at all. You never can tell how it will end.
Date: Feb 21 2006