I know I am new here but I read your story before I joined up.
I love this story, I just hope their will be sequel to it. Please?
Author's Response: I don't think there will be a sequel, but you never know. But I thank you for your review.
Hey sis! just liked to say hey! and yea. anyway talk to you later eh? love ya! Annie AKA LijLover. ;)
Guys leave her the HELL alone! she is GOING BY THE MOVIES! EVER THOUGHT OF THAT!?! NO! Sis keep on posting don't listen to these looseres! your story is WONDERFUL! and I hope my Story; Never Gone isn't like yours but anyway, keep on posting!
WONDERFUL job sis! jsut ignore her @$$! she doesn't know Sh!I!t! what your story is about, but keep it up, okay? Annie.
Thank you. but I am not finish with it yet, just need to find my plot then i will keep on writing til then I can't since I lost the paper...stupid me.
okay...But just WAIT until I get this STORY DONE! SHEEESH! and whatever!
I am getting it fixed don't worry about it. and thanks for reviewing.
"Is her name "Angel" on "Angle"? What's a "bar"? That would be a "bra", no?Also, I have never heard of an "Hour of Sing". I'm a bit confused on that one. "Wooden steal (would that be "steel" by any chance?) handle" is a little odd. It's either made from wood or steel. Which one is it? It's not "Los Angels" but "Los Angeles". Petty little mistakes like these make your stories impossible to read. If you need a beta, please e-mail me. Contrary to the popular belief I don't bite. " well she has lots of nicknames so it can be either one. but I have tried to fix them but can't sorry.
tell me what you people think of it. I know I spotted some errors but I am too tired to fix them. anyway just review and I will respond if their is any errors in the whole story.