Hey girl ! Missing you and the story! Its been forever but I can relate to rl being difficult. I look forward to your update !
Author's Response: Allo, my name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father, prepare to die! Sorry, just watched The Princess Bride the other day and I've had that stuck in my head ever since. So, I'm not dead yet. Life has stunned me quite a bit recently, but I'm brushing myself off, figuratively speaking. Yes, the fact I'm answering my reviews again DOES mean something. I'm really just trying to figure out how to proceed. Chapter by chapter seems outdated nowadays. I'll keep it up until I can think of something better. Thanks, as always, for the review, aelfwine. I've definitely been thinking about my readers lately. The story is slowly coming back into focus. Take care!
In most of the places where Galadriel says she is "Formal" I think the word you wanted was "convinced". There are also some other english usage mistakes. I enjoy your story but you need to get someone to proof-read your work before you post.