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The Prophecy by Annielle Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 13]
Summary: The Lorien Marchwarden is at the center of a prophecy describing the rebirth of great elven heroes. Only its accomplishment will convince the elves to fight alongside Men and finally defeat Sauron. But a crucial player was not born in Middle Earth...
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Celeborn, Elrond, Galadriel, Haldir
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 157821 Read Count: 17867
[Report This] Published: 04/08/11 Updated: 23/04/12
Reviewer: aelfwine Signed
Date: 15/08/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Prophecy

In most of the places where Galadriel says she is "Formal" I think the word you wanted was "convinced". There are also some other english usage mistakes. I enjoy your story but you need to get someone to proof-read your work before you post.