What a sensual, delightful read. I especially enjoyed the discourse and build up of tension; Celeborn's interrogation, so to speak, of Haldir. Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Oh, I LIKE it! The mental images are tangible and hideous, especially the grosteque visual of the parasitic young feeding upon the rotting flesh of their "mothers". That I will remember. Great work; I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for the read.
Eee! I did so enjoy this story. It's just so damn cheeky! Thanks for putting a big grin on my face.
Oh, I did enjoy this fic. Deft and very humorous. Thank you for sharing it.
Oh, I adored this deftly written little gem. The interaction between Aragorn and Legolas is a pleasure to read. Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
Oh, that was wonderful. Just amazingly written; the handling and building of the tension was perfect. This is the sort of story that I crave to read in the erotic genre; it makes the genre worth reading. Thank you and Anestel for a wonderful read.
I am so, so happy that I found this story. It's just a gem. It's beautifully written, amazingly erotic, and just... wow. I hung on every word. The reading really added to the joy of my Christmas day. Thank you.
*chokes on laughter* I loved it! :D
I'm laughing so hard that I'm crying... this is fantastic!
*explodes with laughter*
*splutters* I think I'm gonna split a rib from laughter as well. Thanks for this fan fiction. *applauds* One of the best that I've ever read. \(^________^)/ I love it!
*laughs* I really enjoyed this fic. You have a beautiful, deft, and subtle writing style to which my adore-a-skim-read eyes need a little time to adjust, but I'm very happy I persevered. (^_^) Thank you very much for posting up this cheeky fic. Very very entertaining!
Author's Response: *bows* Thank you! Yeah, I probably wouldn\'t be terribly skimable - I don\'t read very fast myself and tend to savor each word - both while reading and writing. But I am pleased I caught you with this one. It was as much of a delight to write, believe me. :D
Oh, I love your way with language: your style is deft and concise and perceptive and beautiful all at the same time. I really enjoyed this chapter: the monochromatic colours just... wow, so good; they illustrated Golradir's disinterest so well. Poor Lindir. Thanks, Tinker Bell. :)
Oh. My gosh. I love this story so much - one of the best and the funniest I have ever read. Thank you so much for making me laugh so hard.
Oh, I enjoyed reading this story, Eni, especially the fight scene at the end, which was graceful. Have you written other fight scenes? I'd like to check them out if so. I also really like the cool interaction between Erestor and Elf One. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
Author's Response: Heh, thanks. I need to finish this fic! It's on my to-do list, just...rather far down the list.
Glad you enjoyed the fight scene. I like writing fight scenes now and again. As an occasional martial artist, I have various ideas of what elements I want in a fight scene so I try and write to fulfil that. You know what? I really cannot remember which of my fics contain fight scenes. Skimming through them now, I'm not sure there are any others that are posted. I think some of my WIPs do... After writing unfinished fics for years, I feel like I've written loads, but I guess most of them never make it to the posting stage!
Thanks for your review, and reminding me this ficcy exists! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm glad you like Erestor and Elf One antagonising one another. :)
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I love the ANDURILLL. Nice one. Thanks for posting and making me giggle out loud. :)
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What a cheeky story! I must say I do approve of the idea of characters turning the tables on fanfiction writers by writing humiliating things about them in turn. Thank you for an enjoyable read.