Reviews by sylc
Summary: Series Notes/Summary: This is the continuing saga of a 36 year old female soldier who finds herself in Middle Earth during The Return of the King. This is part two of a series which will follow the plot of J.R.R. Tolkien's The Lord of the Rings books. She is not a tenth walker and the events as written by Professor Tolkien will not be rewritten to accommodate her. Her part in the story and her interactions with the main characters will occur in places and times that Tolkien did not include in his writings.


I claim ownership of none of J.R.R. Tolkien's original plot or characters; however, Elaura and her story Typically Atypical are Copyrighted 2006.


Categories: Book-verse Characters: Celeborn, Galadriel, Gollum, Haldir, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Orophin, Other Canon Character, Rmil, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship, Treebeard
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, General, Horror, Humor, Mystery, Other, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Series: Typically Atypical
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37072 Read Count: 19665
Published: 23/10/06 Updated: 11/11/06 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Goodbye, Galadriel Reviewer: Susan Signed
Ah, the answer to the question that I keep on forgetting to ask, which was "What do you mean by Book 1, Book 2, etc.?" So there will be three books, then? And Book 1, 2, and 3 of this tale will cover the same time frame covered by Book 1, 2 and 3 of the LOTR trilogy respectively?

Wow, you're already on the second book! *APPLAUDS VIGOROUSLY* Congratulations!

And I better get cracking on writing my reviews for the last few chapters of Book One.

It strikes me as rather rude that Gandalf is reading your mind without your permission. I mean, it'd be a different story if he said "It's not my fault -- other people's thoughts intrude on my own", but actively reading? Or maybe that's what you meant. (?_?)

Author's Response: Yep! Although Book 1 didn\'t begin or end at exactly the same place because Elaura didn\'t come into the story until after the Hobbits and Strider left Bree and she didn\'t go with the Fellowship to Amon Hen.

Thanks! I was so excited when I finished Book 1 I went out and had a wondeful dinner to celebrate.

I\'ve missed your reviews, I hope whatever has kept you away has been good news. Believe me, I know how much life interferes with reading and writing.

I don\'t think Gandalf realizes yet that reading people\'s minds can be thought of as rude. He\'s still in a playful mood and I think he\'s stretching out his mind and his new powers in all directions. I think Elaura will have to talk to him about it at some point, but rest assured he doesn\'t mean anything by it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, it\'s good to see you again!

Date: 23/10/06
Summary: This is safe for those who don't like slash as this is just a discussion in which one brother attempts to persuade the other not to take male partners. I'm not suggesting anything about Faramir's preferred partners! Thanks to Shadow Ranger for giving me the concept for this idea!
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Boromir, Faramir
Genres: None
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 507 Read Count: 4853
Published: 19/11/06 Updated: 19/11/06 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Just Gender Reviewer: Susan Signed
I was reading this and then I suddenly got an image of David Wenham in drag in my brain. Unshakeable. XDXDXD Faralocks and the three cherry-loving Bobbits: Bippin, Berethor, and... um... *scratches head* ...Begolas! Oh, how they shall whip him with the cherry stalk when they find him... yes... kinky... etc. etc. *forces self to calm down* Hehe. As you can probably tell, I very much enjoyed this fic. Thank you very much. :D

Author's Response: Good thing the image side of my brain shut down a LONG time ago ¬_¬ Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 16/01/07
Summary: As stated in the title.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), None
Series: The 10 songs/dances etc That Would Confuse/Scare etc the LOTR Characters
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139 Read Count: 2195
Published: 22/12/06 Updated: 22/12/06 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Susan Signed
I don't know most of these songs, but YMCA and Macarena with movements? Gahahahahaha! That's awesome! I can imagine them doing that on the top of Caradhras, Gandalf waving his stick around!

"GANDALF, STOP IT! YOU'LL BRING DOWN THE MOUNTAIN!"

They should also do the can-can. *nods nods*

Author's Response: lol. That\'s awesome! I can soo see that! Thanks again for your great review! ^__^
Date: 06/03/07
Summary: Legolas finds himself testing the limits of his dignity in an effort to win the approval of the adorable daughter of Sam.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Elanor Gamgee, Frodo, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3452 Read Count: 1691
Published: 12/01/07 Updated: 12/01/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Fit for a Prince Reviewer: Susan Signed
I really enjoyed this: the flow, the understated deft descriptions, the characterisation (esp. for adorable Elanor and courteous Legolas), and the humorous (and visual) effect created was marvellous. Thank you very much for a very enjoyable read.

Author's Response: It delights me to know you enjoyed the story so much. Thanks for your feedback. It was very encouraging. :)
Date: 12/03/07
You by Aerlinniel Rated: G [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A song about someone who looks to another for help, but they are denying them that help.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146 Read Count: 2179
Published: 25/01/07 Updated: 25/01/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Susan Signed
This really moved me. Great work and thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: Oooh! Thank you so much! ~Mel
Date: 08/02/07
Summary: King Elessar marvels at his two-year-old son's ability to ask questions he cannot answer.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 197 Read Count: 1492
Published: 27/01/07 Updated: 27/01/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Susan Signed
Awww. So sweet and adorable. Thanks for giving me a big smile. :)

Author's Response: oooh, thank you and you\'re welcome =D
Date: 06/03/07
Counting Sheep by Zhie Rated: R [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Glorfindel is restless, so Erestor makes a few suggestions.
Categories: Book-verse, Book Verse Slash Characters: Erestor, Glorfindel
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: PPB-AU
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 211 Read Count: 2462
Published: 02/02/07 Updated: 02/02/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Complete Story Reviewer: sylc Signed
*grins* Nicely done, and nicely twisted at the end. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks, Zhie.
Date: 09/09/09
Summary: Glorfindel/Aredhel -- The proud white lady of Gondolin finds herself bested in a horserace, but her defeat does not mean that all is lost. (no sex, just sassiness)

Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aredhel, Ecthelion, Erestor, Glorfindel, Turgon
Genres: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28 Read Count: 3124
Published: 04/02/07 Updated: 04/02/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Complete Story Reviewer: Susan Signed
I really enjoyed reading this, Zhie. I found it playful, lively, sexy, suspenseful, and very rewarding (I love the end). A delight to read. Thank you very much.
Date: 02/05/07
Summary: Need I say more?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: The 10 songs/dances etc That Would Confuse/Scare etc the LOTR Characters
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 135 Read Count: 3994
Published: 12/02/07 Updated: 12/02/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 10 Fun things Reviewer: Susan Signed
Mmm. Legolas licking fingers clean of pizza sauce and cheese. *___*

And peanut butter. Ooh! Even better - get Legolas to give a practical demonstration! Peanut butter covered elf! Yum!

Gah! Thanks for giving me a big dreamy grin. xD

Author's Response: lol. I\'m glad you like it. Thanks for your review! ^__^
Date: 06/03/07
by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: Into the West
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: Susan Signed
*laughs* So CUTE! And so clever. Thanks for sharing and giving me a big grin. =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m really glad you enjoyed it and thank you for reading! xxx
Date: 06/03/07
by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: Into the West
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: Susan Signed
Please format your story correctly as a courtesy to your readers. ~Admin
Date: 03/04/07
Summary: The other vignette. Estel wants to marry his ada. If Glorfindel and Erestor could get married, why can't Estel and Elrond? Estel wants to know, and ends up learning the facts of life as well. Slash is mentioned, which is why the rating is PG.
Categories: Book Verse Slash Characters: Aragorn, Elrond
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: The Estel Predicaments
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 291 Read Count: 2359
Published: 02/03/07 Updated: 02/03/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Susan Signed
*squeals delightedly* Eeee! I inspired someone! xD You're welcome, sweetie.

Author's Response: of course you inspired me! you\'re awesome! like. you\'re my idol. haha. but seriously. =)
Date: 04/03/07
Coming of Age by Gemini_Elf Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: One shot femslash. Was challenged by Shadow Ranger to do this.

Disclaimer: I do not own LOTR and I do not make any profit from writing this work of fiction.
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Arwen, Elrohir
Genres: Erotica
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: The Darker side of the Gemini
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1083 Read Count: 3945

Published: 04/03/07 Updated: 04/03/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Coming of Age Reviewer: Susan Signed
Eeeeeeeeee! This fic made me so happy. It's so rare to find a femslash LOTR fic and a cheerful one at that! Thanks, Gemini. I really enjoyed it and it put a big smile on my face. *hugs*

Author's Response: Really glad you enjoyed it! :D XD
Date: 04/03/07
Evil Elrond by greywing Rated: PG [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Written for the March Prompt: E-- like an Evil Elrond. Mistreatment of Glorfindel by his lord. Not what it seems, really.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel
Genres: Horror, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 300 Read Count: 1573
Published: 06/03/07 Updated: 06/03/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Susan Signed
Anything but the paperwork.
Mwahahahahaha! Oh, that's great! That's brilliant.

Thanks for sharing and making me laugh. xD

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I\'m glad it made you laugh!
Date: 06/03/07
Chilled by LadyAna Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Aragorn is cold!
Categories: Movie-verse, Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 738 Read Count: 1765
Published: 10/03/07 Updated: 10/03/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: complete Reviewer: sylc Signed
This story made me smile. It may be short, but it's deftly written, palpable and gently moving. Thank you for an enjoyable read.

Author's Response: ...sorry it took me so long to get back to you. THANK YOU for the feedback! It makes my day. I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Date: 02/01/10
Summary: I wrote this at 11:30 last night, literally in tears. The rest of it is self-explanatory.
Categories: Other Movies Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Poetry, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 250 Read Count: 1581
Published: 12/03/07 Updated: 12/03/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Susan Signed
*hugs* What was qui-gonline.org?

Author's Response: it was a completely fabulous star wars fanfic site that got me through a lot of hard times a couple years ago. a bit like this 1 in that it had a LOT in it, all different genres, so there was always exactly what I was looking for. if you\'re at all a star wars fan, I recommend giving it a glance, because when it goes offline, a truly great archive will have passed away into the Netherworld.
Date: 12/03/07
Summary: Another school assignment. This time I compared the book versions of Aragorn, Arwen, Eowyn, and Faramir with the movie versions.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Eowyn, Faramir
Genres: Essay, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 944 Read Count: 1915
Published: 14/03/07 Updated: 14/03/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Susan Signed
Nice spots.

Have you considered leaving white space between your paragraphs? I find a blank line between paragraphs greatly increases the readability of a page viewed online.

Author's Response: I\'m not sure what you mean by nice spots. Sorry if it\'s something really obvious I\'ve missed. I don\'t know how to put a blank line between the paragraphs on this website. When i turn things into my teachers they are double spaced.
Date: 14/03/07
Fire and Snow by Ria Rated: PG [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Gandalf meets an old acquaintaince, in the fourth version of the "Disrobed" challenge. I'm cheating ever so slightly, since he's a Maia rather than an elf. Enjoy it anyway.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Balrog, Gandalf / Olorin
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Challenges: A Wizard's Family
Series: Elves in the Elements, The Affairs of Wizards, A Challenging Face, But What a View!
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1115 Read Count: 2337
Published: 16/03/07 Updated: 16/03/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Fire and Snow Reviewer: Susan Signed
Oh my goodness! Wow, what an idea to have them as lovers. I like it!

On a lighter note I must say I don't think much of their chances of getting back together. Homicide is never a good start to reconciliation. Hee.

Author's Response: Maybe with couples counseling? But no, probably not. They do say that similar values are vital to a successful relationship.
Date: 17/03/07
Bachelors by Zhie Rated: PG [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A conversation between a dear old hobbit and a dear old elf.


Categories: Book-verse, Book Verse Slash Characters: Bilbo, Elrond, Glorfindel
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: PPB-AU
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271 Read Count: 2800
Published: 17/03/07 Updated: 17/03/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: -complete story- Reviewer: sylc Signed
Oh, I like this short piece, though I would dearly like to see a sister story about happy female bachelorettes. A witty and engaging twist on the original version. Thanks for making me grin, Zhie.
Date: 09/09/09
Unexpected Blessing by Zhie Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Glorfindel/Erestor; Elrond/Celebrian. Erestor has trouble admitting that sometimes he is in over his head.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Book Verse Slash, Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Erestor, Glorfindel, Lindir, Melpomaen
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1825 Read Count: 2069
Published: 17/03/07 Updated: 17/03/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: -complete story- Reviewer: sylc Signed
*laughs* Oh, this is a cute, funny and sad story. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing it, Zhie.
Date: 14/09/09