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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: callerofcrows Signed
Wow....that's really deep. Amazing job!

Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate it! Keep reading!
Date: Jan 10 2009 05:45 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bearer of Light Anonymous
I love this poem! It really explains how everyone feels like after or in a battle.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really surprised so many people have enjoyed this poem, to be honest. It was really just in the spur of the moment that I put it on here. Thanks for reviewing anyway, very glad you enjoyed it!
Date: Dec 12 2008 06:30 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
This is a great poem and potrays the thoughts and feelings of the soldier very well indeed. Brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanks, Calad. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your story too.
Date: Oct 06 2008 12:31 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed
This is a good poem. Having served in Vietnam, I know where you're coming from.

Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate your comments. I'm only 14 so I hope I have captured something of what war must be like.
Date: Sep 07 2008 03:46 pm [Report This]
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