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Wow....that's really deep. Amazing job!
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate it! Keep reading!
I love this poem! It really explains how everyone feels like after or in a battle.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really surprised so many people have enjoyed this poem, to be honest. It was really just in the spur of the moment that I put it on here. Thanks for reviewing anyway, very glad you enjoyed it!
This is a great poem and potrays the thoughts and feelings of the soldier very well indeed. Brilliant!
Author's Response: Thanks, Calad. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your story too.
This is a good poem. Having served in Vietnam, I know where you're coming from.
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate your comments. I'm only 14 so I hope I have captured something of what war must be like.