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Reviewer: Faoiltierna Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/07/09 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter 6: The Evercold Part 1: The Offer

I am interested in where your story is going...though I'd really appreciate it if you would put in some paragraph breaks! :-)

Author's Response:

*wince* Uh-oh... Did I give no paragraph breaks in all chapters? *groan* I'll check things out after posting Chapter 7. Hopefully you won't be discouraged to read by the pesky trouble.

Reviewer: Faoiltierna Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/07/09 - 05:05 am Title: Chapter 3: Substitution

I am enjoying reading this story...the beginning is quite promising! :-) (But chapter three has no paragraph breaks...it is a bit difficult to read!)

Author's Response:

Sorry! I often have that kind of trouble with italicised things... I will try another tactic with the italicised blocks. I hope you'll still enjoy the story, though. I did have paragraph breaks (a lot), but this thing happens from time to time... Meh. I appreciate your telling me that you were enjoying reading the story, and I hope you will find the next chapters entertaining. :)

 

 

- Rey

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