Reviews For Healing Hands
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Reviewer: Elanor Fay Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/10 - 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 2, The Beginning

I gotta say, you have some unique ideas and a good sense of style. The main character seems developed and the concept of a Doctor in Middle-Earth is really pretty interesting.
A couple things I'd suggest is to slow the pace a bit and put some more realism into it. Events seem a little rushed, and Ellie's reaction to being kidnapped is a little mild considering the situation.
Oh, I forgot to mention, you also made me laugh quite a bit in the first chapter, when Ellie is describing her appearence. Nice job.
Anyway, keep writing. I want to see more of this. :)

-Fay

Reviewer: elfenears Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/10 - 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 2, The Beginning

I quite enjoyed these few chapters and am looking forward to more, i think the possibility of a doctor in middle earth is an intresting one. elronds healing rooms are calling. thanks for writing x elfenears

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