I gotta say, you have some unique ideas and a good sense of style. The main character seems developed and the concept of a Doctor in Middle-Earth is really pretty interesting.
A couple things I'd suggest is to slow the pace a bit and put some more realism into it. Events seem a little rushed, and Ellie's reaction to being kidnapped is a little mild considering the situation.
Oh, I forgot to mention, you also made me laugh quite a bit in the first chapter, when Ellie is describing her appearence. Nice job.
Anyway, keep writing. I want to see more of this. :)
Reviews For Healing Hands
Title: Chapter 2, The Beginning Reviewer: Elanor Fay Signed
Date: Dec 04 2010 02:30 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2, The Beginning Reviewer: elfenears Signed
I quite enjoyed these few chapters and am looking forward to more, i think the possibility of a doctor in middle earth is an intresting one. elronds healing rooms are calling. thanks for writing x elfenears
Date: Dec 03 2010 03:44 pm [Report This]