Reviews For An Unexpected Fate
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Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/01/11 - 07:15 pm Title: A Life Changing Event

You have a suspenseful beginning for your story, that's for sure. I suggest that you add line breaks between quotes and paragraphs to make for easier reading.

Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 - 11:10 pm Title: A Life Changing Event

So this is your first fic. Not a bad start. It seemed like it was over before it started. Glad Legolas was there to hear her cries for help. I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

Author's Response: Thanks, I've always wanted to do a romantic about Legolas and one of my own characters. I've seen the movies of The Lord of the Rings a lot. I think Orlando Bloom was perfect as Legolas but, I also think that the real Legolas would look something like Orlando Bloom and Leonardo DiCaprio (when he was young) combined. Orli's hot and everything and I have nothing against him but, I just have a bigger imagination and I think Leo, in his younger days, looked very much like an elf would look like. If you combined Leo's looks with Orli's cheekbones, and English accent, you would probably get Legolas. I'm just putting it out there. Anyway, thank you I'll be working on the next chapter soon, after I do some research.

Reviewer: AnitaBrunette Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 - 11:59 am Title: A Life Changing Event

OK you've got me interested here. You managed to set a very descriptive scene with only a few words. Please update soon. My curiosity is peaked.

Author's Response: Thank you! So very much! This is my first fanfic and I'm really happy you liked it. I did't expect to get a response so quickly, thank you so much, I'll update VERY soon. :D <3 <3!

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