Reviews For Mysterious Fate
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Title: I veleg lend ned i neled noss Reviewer: Aralinn Signed
We just had to have a cliff hanger didn't we?! right when hse was about to tell him! guess I'll have to read on to see what happened and see if my thoughts are correct.
Date: Aug 29 2013 12:53 pm [Report This]
Title: Forsaken Reviewer: Aralinn Signed
Im am glad that you did not make her a wonderful fighter in this battle like I have seen so many do. It is one thing growing up to learn it, but not in a months time. Her wekness was shown and thats a good thing to me. I cannot wait to keep reading.
Date: Aug 29 2013 12:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Hope would not be lost Reviewer: Aralinn Signed
Hmmm so we've got a little more, albeit small, but of her past. Obviously the injury causes her much pain, maybe it leads to her fear of daggers/knives? Hmmm much to wonder about. Ohh and the next battle is coming, what on earth will she do?
Date: Aug 29 2013 10:37 am [Report This]
Title: Troubled Souls Reviewer: Aralinn Signed
So I am interested in why it is she is so afraid of knives, and you mentioned past memories when boromir struck her. Makes me think something happened to her or she saw something in her own world to cause it, guess I have to wait and read more to find out!
Date: Aug 28 2013 08:51 pm [Report This]
Title: The Slaying in the Tomb of Balin Reviewer: Aralinn Signed
I must say I an intrigued by the story, it's one of the few girl falls into middle earth I've read but I'm wanting to I've it a shot and so far I like and I like your writing style! Can't wait to read more
Date: Aug 28 2013 05:12 pm [Report This]
Title: Stranger from Another Realm Reviewer: Jemmy Signed
OMG!!! This is amazing :D i cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: Mar 24 2012 09:30 pm [Report This]
Title: The truth be told... Reviewer: izzy blackburne Signed
Omg! this is so good!!! Please Please Please add a new chapter quickly! Dont leave me hanging!!!
Date: Mar 04 2012 02:37 am [Report This]
Title: The Loss Reviewer: Hauarie Signed
yaaaknow.. this.. IS JUST SO DAMN SAD! stupid not really death but still realistic enough to look like death! STUPID EMOTIONALL ME XDD even tough your oc does not know gandalf really well its still nice to see she cares..
Date: Jul 23 2011 04:36 pm [Report This]
Title: The Slaying in the Tomb of Balin Reviewer: Hauarie Signed
holy craps that was awesum XD
Date: Jul 23 2011 04:23 pm [Report This]
Title: The truth be told... Reviewer: Elenielwen Signed
I have read and followed the story so far.
Let me just tell you this:
It is a great story. You balance the concept of Tolkien's story versus your own, with your own character incredibly well.
I work as an author in my country and thererfore I can only say that with this talent of yours I am confident that you would earn money writing novels and perhaps even a book? Who's to say. There fore I place my hope on this fanfiction and will continue reading it. I hope next chapter comes out soon, as I am very much looking forward to it.
Date: May 18 2011 08:01 am [Report This]
Title: The truth be told... Reviewer: Ambray Signed
I see you haven't updated in 6 years. That's a real, real shame. This story is truly incredible. So much so I've been up all night reading it all the way through - it's now 6am! I do not know if you will get this, I hope you do. I don't know what made you stop writing, but I hope you are well. This story was a proper rollercoaster ride. When Kaitlyn was crying, I was crying. When her heart was racing, well I'll be damned, my heart wanted to break out of my chest! You're writing was so expressive that I felt EXACTLY what she was feeling. It was so amazing to read and experience that. This has to be the best LOTR fic I've read, if not one of the best FF's I've read. I hope one day you return, though I see that's doubtful with so many years that have passed.
I saw you mentioned earlier you had a FF account, so I'm going to search on there to see if you continued to update or not. I do hope so. :)
Thank you.
Date: Apr 27 2011 10:09 pm [Report This]
Title: Stranger from Another Realm Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
I see that you haven't updated in a while and you probably won't finish the story but I'd just like to say how wonderful this story is!!!

T^T Pleaseeeee even though it's been a long time, pleeeasseee update!!!

Kaitlyn and Legolas's romance is just so beautiful! It's so easy to love Kaitlyn too!!!

Date: May 06 2010 12:17 am [Report This]
Title: The truth be told... Reviewer: SilverElf Signed
*chant from the crowed*
We Want More!!!
We Want More!!!
Date: Jan 16 2010 02:18 am [Report This]
Title: Stranger from Another Realm Reviewer: Cluck Girl Signed
Seeing as you haven't updated in a while I assume you've left the site. However, I have some comments:

If it is possible, could you get rid of the extra lines in between parargraphs? They make the next harder and less enjoyable to read.

I really like this story. (Yeah, fail of a comment, but whatever)
Date: Jan 04 2010 09:41 am [Report This]
Title: The truth be told... Reviewer: Lolita-gee Signed
It seems as though you aren't going to continue the story which makes me sad T^T I love this story so much! I love how Kaitlyn is so real and not so mary sue-ish hehe
I got left in such a cliff will they end up together?!!!
Date: Oct 19 2009 02:40 am [Report This]
Title: The truth be told... Reviewer: maybe Signed
Hello there.

As you haven't updated since 2005 I will say only this,

Wherever you are I hope you are well, and I thank you for writing an amazing piece of fiction.

Date: Aug 06 2009 12:19 am [Report This]
Title: The truth be told... Reviewer: Liliesshadow Signed
nyah!!! continue plz!!!
Date: May 21 2009 02:41 pm [Report This]
Title: An unexpected Discovery Reviewer: Liliesshadow Signed
so every time someone touches an elfs ear like that...they can have a orgasm?
Date: May 20 2009 05:05 pm [Report This]
Title: The truth be told... Reviewer: ArticFox Signed
I just sat down and read this whole story, from beginning to end, or to the point it is now. All I have to say is WOW!!! The way this is wrote, I can picture it clearly as if I'm standing there watching it in real life. I love the whole story line and I can't wait until the next chapter comes out.
Date: Jan 31 2009 02:43 pm [Report This]
Title: Stranger from Another Realm Reviewer: zib0226 Signed
Has this story been abandoned? Please update soon!
Date: Sep 02 2008 08:50 pm [Report This]
Title: The Slaying in the Tomb of Balin Reviewer: Utopia Signed
Oh dear, ‘What are orcs?’ isn’t a very good sign... though it shows sh has been relatively safe and not met any yet.

Ah... the OC has a detailed past; I do love depth in a tale!

One of my most favourite moments of FOTR was Sam smacking the orcs with his frying pans! Resourceful to the end!

Brilliant descriptions of the film scenes, it is often hard to write down what you and others have seen!
Date: Jun 10 2008 04:00 pm [Report This]
Title: Introductions Reviewer: Utopia Signed
Her name, I think, is Gaelic – the spelling is quite old and her name should fit in nicely with Middle Earth. Perhaps it could be tweaked to Kaitwen, as ‘wen’ is a general female suffix for female in Middle Earth. It doesn’t stand out like many Mary Sue names.

I have an amusing thought of your OC calling Gandalf Dumbledore, and Legolas being called Lucius! *and I’m not going to go there any further, lol*.

Ah, a modern women dropped into a world where men rule. I love such dynamics! Though, the Biologist in her (and the Biologist in me) will know that everyone starts off Female, and (I think) 6 weeks after conception, a Y chromosome re-programs everything!

Don’t fret, you’re not really repeating what’s gone before! You’re setting a scene! Realistically, *every* fanfic tells you what’s gone before – we use characters created by someone else! I adore the films, I adore the books – and I have absolutely NO complaint about you setting the scene! If it aint broke, don’t fix it – you’re just doing a brilliant job of slipping a new character into a well-loved environment!
Date: Jun 10 2008 03:52 pm [Report This]
Title: Stranger from Another Realm Reviewer: Utopia Signed
I have chosen to read this story because it is on the top 10 most favourite list – so many others cannot be wrong! My reviews tend to be lengthy, I hope you don’t mind!

Wow! You open so quickly! Instantly the reader is thrust into the scene! It is almost like a curtain coming up at the theatre! Gandalf’s staff lights up and it’s go go go! Fantastic plot device! A hook with a nice big juicy worm on it to get a reader to bite!

Your hobbit description is perfect! Large feet and large hearts describes them to a T! The second paragraph just shows what a mish-mash of people have come together to fight against evil; the clashing of cultures and range of heights and abilities! I think a reader often forgets how different they all are – it’s nice to be reminded of the characters’ uniqueness!

You have to love the youngest hobbit and his knack of stating the obvious!

Spock! Lol!

Is fate the woman who spoke to her? Is fate a synonym for one of the valar?

I can see why so many love this – you bring in the 10th walker easily, it isn’t so fake or cliche as many I’ve seen.
Date: Jun 10 2008 03:39 pm [Report This]
Title: The truth be told... Reviewer: ardeth Signed
please update,I cant live without knowing!!!
Date: May 01 2008 08:44 pm [Report This]
Title: The truth be told... Reviewer: ardeth Signed
please update,I cant live without knowing!!!
Date: May 01 2008 08:41 pm [Report This]
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