I don't mean to be rude or anything, but this isn't sad or funny. You should maybe get a beta for this too, your grammar and some of your spelling is very good. I suppose i feel kinda the same as ArwenUndomiel, i read the reviews for this first, i tend to do that when i'm looking for something to read. I really don't mean to be rude but yeah. Sorry if i offended you by this - Li
I'm not trying to be rude, but I actually found this story quite offensive. I sort of see what you're trying to do, but the way you have done it is very inconsiderate to other people's feelings. I was really depressed for years, struggled with self-harm, and for a while I seriously considered taking me own life. Even now, after I have recovered, I can still remember what it was like and I assure you, there is nothing at all funny about depression. I don't think anybody has the right to talk about people with depression as though they are stupid, and make their problems seem silly and melodramatic like you have done here. I don't find anything remotely funny about suicide, and maybe if you had suffered from suicidal feelings or known someone who commited suicide, you would see that. I'm sorry again if this review seems rude, I am not trying to flame you or anything. That story just really upset and offended me, and I think you should give a little more thought to people's feelings before you write more stories trying to make suicide funny.
I am not emo and certainly not a fan of emos, but if you are going to write a story about them you might try to be a bit more mature about it. As in, at least have good punctuation, and refrain from saying the same thing over and over. Unless this isn't a story, and just a rant.