A lovely AU twist to this tale. It begs to be continued. I love the fact that Feanaro is not portrayed as a murderous, insane person.
Author's Response: Bah, you know me! I could not write insane&murderous Feanaro if my life depended on it. Thank you for your kind words and for everything else. Hugs, hon!
This is very clear and intriguing. I would like to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you! I would like to know what happens next too. :) At any rate, it would be very different form the events in the Silmarillion.