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Interesting start. Very poetic. I like it.
iggybaby
Christie!!! Okay, I don't know how often you check your bloody reviews, but just talk to me about this when you get it! I want to be your poem-beta-person. You really need to work on the grammar, love. I know I could just have a little chat with you about it since we live in the same house, but what's the fun in that? Heh heh.
Loves yous!
~Bee~
Author's Response: my grammars fine why thank you.
Your just way too bored.
I love dark poetry...that's the main reason why I like Evanescence so much! This is a good poem...you just forgot an apostrophe on the second fairy's.
~Mel
Author's Response: Oh thanks!
I like evanesence too!
Wheee! It kicked a . . . er, butt! Write more, love.
Author's Response: Thx!
I will...glad someone liked it!
also your the lucky winner for being the first person to review! yaaaya~