Reviews For Black Water
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Dae Signed
This is a good story. And it promises an interesting continuation. Maybe you should develop the characters you've created?
Date: 01/18/08 01:39 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Well, it seems like a very good plot. But seriously Yun, get a beta reader. You have such brilliant ideas; it's such a shame to see them spoiled with grammar and spelling mistakes. I think you've even said yourself (on your profile at ff.net, at least) that grammar isn't your forte. So find somebody who is good with grammar, and your fics would be truly brilliant. I know betas are hard to come by, but it's worth it. I can even do it, if you can't find anybody (I'm an experienced beta reader). Please don't take this as an insult, it isn't meant to be offensive at all. I am just trying to be helpful, as you could be a fantastic author if there were less grammar errors in your story. Aside from all the technical glitches, this was a really interesting story. I hope you will continue to write, and I hope you'll take my advice. Good luck =)
Date: 11/05/06 01:25 am [Report This]