Reviews by Sweetie
Summary: A hapless fan fiction writer learns what it really means to join the Fellowship of the Ring.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 999 Read Count: 1587
Published: Feb 06 2005 Updated: Feb 06 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Enter An Irrate Tolkien Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
woot! this looks like fun! i'm on for the ride!
Date: Jan 25 2007
Summary: The heirless king of Rohan requests of his sister her firstborn son to succeed him on the throne of Meduseld.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Lothiriel, Original Character, Faramir, Gimli
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: The Green Knight
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 187438 Read Count: 28331
Published: Sep 26 2005 Updated: Jan 02 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Ill News Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
oh this is good, my only wish is that I would have found it sooner!


~*Sweetie*~
Date: Jan 16 2007
Summary: Complete! Aragorn loves his Ice Cream. But when the Terrible Trio arrives in Minas Tirith with an evil plot to steal the imperial Ice Cream, will he survive?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Haldir, Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: Obsessions
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3153 Read Count: 7718
Published: May 05 2006 Updated: Oct 31 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
Hahahah! That made me laugh, I hope Aragorns happy :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m always happy to make somebody laugh.
Date: Nov 01 2006
Summary: This is the continuing saga of a 36 year old female soldier who finds herself in Middle Earth during The Return of the King. This is part one of a series which will follow the plot of J.R.R. Tolkien's The Lord of the Rings books. She is not a tenth walker and the events as written by Professor Tolkien will not be rewritten to accommodate her. Her part in the story and her interactions with the main characters will occur in places and times that Tolkien did not include in his writings.


I claim ownership of none of J.R.R. Tolkien's original plot or characters; however, Elaura and her story Typically Atypical are Copyrighted © 2006.


Categories: Book-verse Characters: Arwen, Beorn, Bilbo, Celeborn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Galadriel, Glóin, Glorfindel, Gollum, Haldir, Lindir, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Orophin, Other Canon Character, Rúmil, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, General, Horror, Humor, Mystery, Other, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Series: Typically Atypical
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 157423 Read Count: 125960
Published: Sep 07 2006 Updated: Oct 21 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 37: Gandalf's Return Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
Wow!!!! I have been reading from the beginning, how can you write so well? it almost makes me want to give up! But I'm not that type of person. It's a truly cool story, keep writing PLEASE.


~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: A NEW REVIEWER!!!

NEVER NEVER NEVER give up! Writing is just taking reading one step farther. If reading can take you into another world, when you write you get to create another world. Finishing this book is up there in the top ten best feelings I\'ve ever had, well actually the top five. Stay with me and keep reading.

I love the feedback and I appreciate you.

Date: Oct 21 2006
Summary: Series Notes/Summary: This is the continuing saga of a 36 year old female soldier who finds herself in Middle Earth during The Return of the King. This is part two of a series which will follow the plot of J.R.R. Tolkien's The Lord of the Rings books. She is not a tenth walker and the events as written by Professor Tolkien will not be rewritten to accommodate her. Her part in the story and her interactions with the main characters will occur in places and times that Tolkien did not include in his writings.


I claim ownership of none of J.R.R. Tolkien's original plot or characters; however, Elaura and her story Typically Atypical are Copyrighted © 2006.


Categories: Book-verse Characters: Celeborn, Galadriel, Gollum, Haldir, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Orophin, Other Canon Character, Rúmil, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship, Treebeard
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, General, Horror, Humor, Mystery, Other, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Series: Typically Atypical
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37072 Read Count: 20688
Published: Oct 23 2006 Updated: Nov 11 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Meduseld Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
Go Elaura! I kept on imaging myself cheering on the sidelines :) I make a better cheer leader than warrior! Porr Legolas, He is really getting stressed out.

I love the poem, I learnt it when I was 10, I like the fact that it almost makes sense, but not quite.

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: It makes a whole lot more sense to Elaura than ever before. I think sometimes she expects to see the Cheshire cat.

Legolas will have to stay stressed out for a few more chapters, though he\'s not so worried about orcs . . . it\'s the men who follow Sauron and Saruman that bother him.

I think you\'re a great cheerleader! I enjoy reading your reviews, they help me stay motivated, thanks!

Date: Nov 06 2006
Title: Chapter 5: The Battle for the Deep Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
euhhh what a disgusting song! But the rest of the chapter was, great! She just had to hurt herself with that thing didn't she! Poor girl, I bet Legolas really freaked out then! And now I know a little more of what he saw in the mirror, the suspense continues... you better update soon! :)


~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: Sorry about the song, Elaura\'s personality tends to change when she fights. I think Galadriel was right when she said Elaura has some orc-blood in her. Oh well, we all have our demons.

Legolas has spent too many years caring for \"his people\" generically. It\'s a whole new thing for him to care about Aragorn, Gimli and Elaura especially. He seems to be learning how to love particular people, not just Nature in general.

I\'m writing as fast as I can. 8-) Thanks for the feedback.

Date: Nov 06 2006
Title: Chapter 1: Goodbye, Galadriel Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
Cool, you have started the next book! I can't wait to see the "three hunters" reaction! :) Keep on updating,and I will keep on R&R :)


~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: Thanks! I look forward to your update. I\'ll be writing more this weekend. I\'ve had a rough week. Thanks for the feedback!
Date: Oct 23 2006
Title: Chapter 3: Through Fangorn to Rohan Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
Finally, you have updated! Now i'm really curious, what did Legolas see in the mirror? Ahh! It's going to drive me nuts! And here's a big hug and some e-cofee (+Chocolate!) to make you feel better about your bad month!

God Bless

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: YUMMY! That helped more than you know. I love hugs and mocha coffee.

I really am sorry about the time lag. This army thing is really starting to get under my skin . . . but I\'m all better now. Thanks for the review and keep reading.

You know how that mirror goes, it\'s all in how you perceive it and it\'s ALWAYS a big hairy secret.

Date: Nov 01 2006
Title: Chapter 6: The Red Lady Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
YAY!! She finally got her coffee :)
*does a little dance*
I love it myself, but don't drink it that often. Good old Saruman, he prepared everything very well.

I loved the: "and you and Legolas thought the term "bull headed " was just an expression!" That was great!
Now she just has to deal with Saruman :)
Legolas is loosening up a bit too, I think he is accepting Elaura more.

The red lady huh? So we have a blue lady (Tuniviel) THREE white ladys (Eowyn, Galadriel and Elwing)
and now a red lady.....

If I was in ME I would be the pink lady :) or maybe the purple one....
*laughs at mental image*

Keep it up, I really enjoy your story, its a highlight of my day.

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: Mmm, coffee. I think I need some right now. Elaura is going to wait until she can lay her hands on some sugar and cream before she shares her bounty with her friends . . . after all she wants them to LIKE it and it takes a while to develop a taste for black coffee.

Elaura doesn\'t really want to deal with Saruman, but she won\'t have a choice. She and Gimli definitely have a stubborn streak in common, but she isn\'t as interested in seeing Saruman as Gimli is.

I can picture you in ME dressed all in pink and purple. Very royal!

Thanks for the review!

Date: Nov 07 2006
Title: Chapter 7: Middle Earth Barbie Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
You have finished it! Book two is done :) PARTY!!!

You did well with the Saruman/Elaura confrontation, better than having her stare him down!

Does Elaura get to tell the fellowship about Fanfic? That would be a hilrious conversation :) lol:)

I liked that song, I learnt it in german once, it's so sweet.

CONGRATS

~*Sweetie*~






Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ve been in Korea for a few days, but I\'m planning to get back to writing ASAP. I don\'t think I\'m going to have her try to explain fanfiction . . . the idea of her even mentioning slash would probably get Elaura tarred and feathered. LOL! Thanks for the review!
Date: Nov 11 2006
A Calling by Anuradha Rated: R [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Alan and Sarah lead normal lives. Well, as normal as you could when you are two orphans trying to make ends meet. They have no clue where they come from, or who there family is. But all that is about to change. A car crash and a spell sends then hurdling back to Middle Earth, four years before Frodo and the other hobbits leave for Rivendell. Now they must figure out what they are, and what to make of this new life. Please Read and Review!
Categories: Movie-verse, Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Arwen, Bilbo, Elrond, Legolas, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Slash (same sex pairing), Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17984 Read Count: 14478
Published: Oct 28 2006 Updated: Mar 20 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Crash Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
Hey this is really well written (in my humble opinion LOL) who cares if there is heaps of stories like it! Just write what you love, it shows. Never think you have to apoligise for what you write, just don't expect everyone to love it. I love it so far though!

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: thanks for the advice, i\'ll try to remeber it!!!
Date: Oct 28 2006
Summary: In the forest of Mirkwood, a fierce battle rages between the Wood-Elves who dwell there, and the invading orcs from the mountains. All is confusion and chaos, and nobody knows who to trust.

In Rivendell, life is slow and peaceful. Fifteen-year-old Estel, forbidden by his foster father to join the war in Mirkwood, grows bored and restless in the Elven sanctuary.

When a strange Elf is brought, wounded and broken, to Rivendell, the two worlds collide and Estel's life is thrown into confusion as he seeks to befriend the Elf. But first, Legolas must learn to trust again.
Categories: Movie-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Legolas, Thranduil, Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, General, Action/Adventure, Angst, General
Warnings: Torture, Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4238 Read Count: 6646
Published: Oct 30 2006 Updated: Nov 28 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
WoW! That was awesome! You described the characters very well,
I like the 'bored' Estel :) Elladan and Elrohir were also portrayed well.
Just one little thing, do you think Estel would have called Lord Elrond father? Maybe he would have, I just never thought of it quite like that before. Keep on writing :)

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m really glad you enjoyed it. I just can\'t help thinking that any fifteen year old boy living in Imladris would get pretty bored after a while. And I\'ve always loved the idea of Elrond and Estel having a close, father-son relationship. That\'s just my little indulgence there. Anyway thanks for reviewing! =)
Date: Oct 30 2006
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
"If we die, I'll kill you" haha!! I like that line :) You describe emotions and settings extremly well! And you have a good vocab. I liked the fact that Estel said he liked the evenings, 'cause Arwen's the evening star :)

well done :)

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Heehee...I admit I was giggling to myself while I wrote that line. Yes, I laugh at my own jokes. Doesn\'t everybody, though? It\'s the sort of thing one of my friends would say, so I couldn\'t help thinking of her while I wrote it. Oh, I\'m stupid, I didn\'t even pick up on the Evenstar thing! It was just pure coincidence. I guess I\'m modelling a lot of Estel\'s personality traits off myself...he\'s very reckless, can\'t wait to grow up, is definately not a morning person, etc. Anyway, I am glad you liked this. Thanks!
Date: Nov 29 2006
Invisible by Aerlinniel Rated: PG [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A song about being invisible.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107 Read Count: 1219
Published: Nov 08 2006 Updated: Nov 08 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
Well, that is one of the down things about school! I am homeschooled, so even if I was invisible, no one would see me anyway! LOL. (Mum doesn't count :)) I have friends though. I think you missed out a y. the poem read

"the stopped the time"
instead of "they stopped the time"

It was a good poem though.

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I\'ll have to fix that! Glad you found that for me! I have never been homeschooled, but I guess that it has it\'s advantages eh? ~Mel
Date: Nov 08 2006
Summary: A song I wrote about a classmate.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76 Read Count: 2147
Published: Nov 08 2006 Updated: Nov 08 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
well, thats some people alright! I wouldn't get to close to that type!
Good song :)

There was only one thing. Be and Me, Kind and Mind rhyme, but the rest of the end words don't. I do not know whether this was intended or not.


~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: I try to stay away from them, but they follow me!!! And no, I didn\'t intend to make all of them rhyme. I just write it from the heart and don\'t bother making it rhyme. I suck at that anyways! Thanks for reviewing!!! ~Mel
Date: Nov 08 2006
Summary: A poem I wrote about the Call of the Sea. Please read and review!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116 Read Count: 1529
Published: Nov 10 2006 Updated: Nov 10 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
That was very, descriptive :) it really sounded like the seas call.
Well done

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: Thanks, I really tried to make it seem like that. And thank you so mush for the review. I really need the insperation!
Date: Nov 11 2006
Summary: Compulsery kit for any orc/ evil minion.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Orcs/Uruk-Hai
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4475 Read Count: 13456
Published: Nov 14 2006 Updated: Apr 09 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Advice Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
*clap clap clap* Sprouts are indeed inedible! VERY GOOD


~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: It\'s very true.
Date: Nov 15 2006
Summary:

This is the continuing saga of a 36 year old female soldier who finds herself in Middle Earth during The Return of the King. This is part three of a series which will follow the plot of J.R.R. Tolkien's Lord of the Rings books. She is not a tenth walker and the events as written by Professor Tolkien will not be rewritten to accommodate her. Her part in the story and her interactions with the main characters will occur in places and times that Tolkien did not include in his writings.


I claim ownership of none of J.R.R. Tolkien's original plot or characters; however, Elaura and her story Typically Atypical are Copyrighted © 2006.


Categories: Book-verse Characters: Asfaloth, Aule, Beorn, Beregond, Bergil, Blue Wizards, Celeborn, Celebrían, Dain Ironfoot, Denethor, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Erestor, Faramir, Feanor, Galadriel, Glóin, Glorfindel, Gollum, Gríma, Gwaihir, Halbarad, Haldir, Imrahil, Ioreth, Landroval, Lindir, Lothiriel, Maglor, Manwe, Mouth of Sauron, Namo / Mandos, Nazgûl, Original Character, Oromë, Orophin, Other Canon Character, Radagast, Rúmil, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship, Théoden, Théodred, Thranduil, Treebeard, Vaire, Yavanna
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, General, Horror, Humor, Mystery, Other, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Series: Typically Atypical
Chapters: 127 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1589851 Read Count: 287725
Published: Nov 19 2006 Updated: Aug 24 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Mysteries of the Bloodstone Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
I was beginning to think you had gone!
good chapter (as usual) and I will comment on it more fully next time, my time is running out!

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: No, I\'ll keep writing. I\'m sorry I was away for a bit, but I won\'t stop until it\'s done! Thanks for the review!
Date: Nov 21 2006
Title: Chapter 2: The House of the Two Stallions Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
Wow that is so cool! she must be going to have a stress out soon, I would have a fit of hystrerics if anything like that happened to me!
Okay, maybe not...but still!!

~*Sweetie*~


Author's Response: Well, you know how it is. The weight of the world is easier to bear when you have friends to help you.

Sorry it\'s taken me so long to respond. I missed some reviews somehow and then I got caught up in my day job. Thanks for the review, I\'ll try to keep up in the future.

Date: Nov 26 2006
Title: Chapter 3: Questions and Reassurances Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
Love the picture, the horses are so sweet! (and they look pretty proud to) Legolas is way to good to be true, maybe you should hve him throwing a fit or something, nah I'm just kidding, but Elauras pretty lucky!

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: Isn\'t he just? Everytime I try to write something negative about him the voices in my head scream at me until I reconsider. They really are the most honorable bunch, aren\'t they?

I love those horses, too.

Thanks for the feedback!

Date: Nov 26 2006
Title: Chapter 4: Things That Go Bump in the Night Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
Creepy chapter!! I could almost feel the ghosts and the otherworldliness of it all! Which proves that a you are a great writer or b I have an overactive imagination. Okay it's both :) LOL.
Please update soon!!

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: You aren\'t the only person to tell me they were creeped out by this chapter. I\'m surprised really. Horror is harder to write than romance and fantasy/adventure. I hope there\'s more, it was fun.

Thanks again for the feedback!

Date: Nov 26 2006
Title: Chapter 5: Confessions in a Most Unlikely Place Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
ahh a nice long chapter! And now another plot twist, aghrh! I liked the bit where she took counsel with the ghosts, it was nice, I always did feel sorry for them. Gimli got pretty upset though,poor guy. But now you have me curious, who WAS outside the window, and why? The plot thickens...

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: I think I\'ve got that one figured out, unless it\'s not who I think it is. I never know from one moment to the next. I\'d like Elaura to have another little chat with the Dead King, but there may not be time. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Dec 05 2006
Title: Chapter 7: Dawn of the Dead Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
She's gonna have twins! Argh, what a handful! My Mum and Grandma were twins (mum to a boy and Nana to a girl) My Mum's Mums has some harrowing tales to tell :)

Cool song, I have never heard that one before. Hmm, I had often thought as Aragorn as a sort of a typification of Christ, cool you had the same idea.

You should have that song "this is my fathers world" in your fic somewhere, I really like that one!

great chapter as always, and I like "uncle Gimli" Lol

~*Sweetie*~


Author's Response: Wow! Sounds like there\'s a good chanceyou might have twins someday. I looked up \"This is My Father\'s World\" it\'s a good one, very appropriate. Maybe I can work it in somewhere.

Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.

Date: Dec 13 2006
Title: Chapter 6: Rabbit Food! Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
Hey! Great chapter! The expression blue blooded came from the nobilitys hands, they were clean and pale, so you could see their blue veins.Peasants on the other hand were always dirty and suntanned.

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: I did not know that! Thank you! Isn\'t the internet great? I love getting instant feedback as I write. Thanks again for the review. I\'m already halfway through chapter 7.
Date: Dec 10 2006
Title: Chapter 8: Islare Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
I went up and down and up and down emotionally in that chapter! (mind you I have been like that the last few days) The poor girl! It was such a sad scene, but you handled it well. Now this guy must get his just deserts!

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: It will get worse before it gets better, but it will get better, I promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: Dec 20 2006