Very nicely done! I think I might have to consider Haldir one of my favorites now... =]
I would definitely love to see more. Ali is a most intriguing character. It would be interesting to see where the familiarity they both felt came from.
Continue, continue! Tell me what you want, and I'll get it for you! =D
I like the colloquialisms argument. Nice touch. Can't wait to see more.
Props to you for pulling through...hope to see more of the story soon. I love Janessa.
I have to admit, I love the "commanding" Haldir. *drools* You write excellently. Amandra's connection to Aragorn is a nice twist. You have a good way with names in this fic...very Tolkienish. Keep up the good work!