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Summary: The economy is down, so Aragorn starts a carnival to raise funds to keep Gondor rich. But everything seems to go wrong!
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Frodo, Sam, Other
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 664 Read Count: 2818
[Report This] Published: 21/09/04 Updated: 21/09/04
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 21/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Gee, I wonder what'll happen in this chappie...

This is sooo funny, when are you going to update?

Summary: Arwen is fed up with fanfiction. But what lengths is she willing to go to in order to restore Middle Earth to normal? Crossover-mania!
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65399 Read Count: 25264
[Report This] Published: 03/12/04 Updated: 08/12/04
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 02/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Problem is Diagnosed

I really enjoyed this story! I have never seen The Mummy or Star Gate but I still had fun reading about the characters as yov portrayed them. Thanks for posting such a hilarious, enjoyable story!

Summary: All you ever needed (but perhaps didn't want) to know about GRÍMA WORMTONGUE! This Guide has been said to be more reliable than a Palantír!

Voted best Humor/Parody at the Flame of Anor Awards 2006.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1796 Read Count: 5535
[Report This] Published: 06/12/04 Updated: 06/12/04
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 24/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Owner's Guide

Okay, just a question...who would want a Grima Wormtongue in the first place? He would definitly give me the creeps! Anyway, I loved it, very funny!

Summary: Gríma lets his inner poet loose...
Categories: Book-verse
Characters:
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 224 Read Count: 1476
[Report This] Published: 26/03/05 Updated: 26/03/05
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Date: 26/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Éowyn, my fair one

Wow! I didn't know Grima had a poetic side! This is rather disturbing in a funny way...

Summary: Ebony Mor lives in a flat in London. She's a writer. Some of her best friends are from the cast of LOTR. This is about her life with them in it. Their will be appearances by her older sister Satiana Mor.
Categories: Actor Fics
Characters: Original Character
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4171 Read Count: 7121
[Report This] Published: 12/08/05 Updated: 16/03/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Very interesting idea for a story! It's a wonder they aren't all overweight with all that food they're eating!

Summary: On Christmas Eve, Santa pays a trip to Imladris in his sleigh. His intentions, however, are not elf-friendly.
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Elrond, Maedhros, Maeglin, Maglor
Genres: Parody, Poetry
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 408 Read Count: 4193
[Report This] Published: 22/12/05 Updated: 22/12/05
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 26/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: 'Twas The Night Before Christmas

Wow, Santa is evil...I loved it when he called Elrond ''Rondy'' that was really funny!

Author's Response: Rondy suits Elrond, doesn\'t it! Hehehe. Thanks elven lily. Happy you enjoyed it so much. :)

Summary: What will happen when Jack Sparrow's daughter is sent to middle earthip or, will she help the fellow sh?ip or take the ring for herself
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Aragorn
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1549 Read Count: 3356
[Report This] Published: 18/01/06 Updated: 21/01/06
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 26/03/07 Title: Chapter 2: the storm

Very interesting idea, I'm sure she will have a very interesting-if not rather strange- impact on Middle-Earth!

Summary: pippin is kidnaped by the halloween killer and it is up to merry,frodo and sam to save him
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Bilbo, Frodo, Merry, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1041 Read Count: 3862
[Report This] Published: 20/01/06 Updated: 30/06/06
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 23/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: the truth of halloween

First of all, I think the idea is very interesting and funny, but it could be made a lot more enjoyable to read if you made a few simple changes.
It would really help if you capitalized names and beginning words in sentences. Also, adding a comma after parenthesis when followed by a ‘Bilbo said’ or something else would make it flow better. Furthermore, it would also help a great deal if you added correct punctuation at the end of sentences and quotes.
As far as spelling goes, siad is said, hidding is hiding, Bildo is Bilbo, hobits is hobbits, sudenly is suddenly, hade is had, shore is sure (unless you were intending for Merry to talk like a hillbilly), minits is minutes, vampiar is vampire, mistacks is mistakes, jusy is just, unfiar is unfair, stroming I believe is supposed to be stomping, piffing is puffing, Samin is supposed to be Sam in, russel is rustle, wander is wonder, quite is quiet, terrifide is terrified, road I think is supposed to be roared, typs is types, grabed is grabbed, disapered is disappeared, habbits is hobbits, stoped is stopped, ageed is agreed, wiating is waiting, sop is so, mistaks is mistakes, witch, in this context is which.
A few other things, when they are talking about who has the most lollipops, I think you meant we’re instead of were and there are a few other places where you forgot to add apostrophes in your contractions.
I really do not mean this in a rude way; I just think that a few easy things could be changed to make this more uncomplicated to read. I really do think that this is a very interesting story and I look forward to reading more!
P.S. Do you have spell check on your computer? It makes it a lot easier and also makes stories more grammatically accurate.


Author's Response: i had redone the story a while ago but i had forgot about it, and then i found the new one so i changed it. hope its better

Summary: Legolas gives the LotR news studio a makeover!
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Haldir
Genres: Drama, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1073 Read Count: 1150
[Report This] Published: 03/02/06 Updated: 03/02/06
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 29/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: One

That was really, really funny! I hope you write more soon!

Summary: A young woman has been born with wings, something no one can possibly explain. She is cast out of her village and left to wander until she meets a wizard who can help her.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 650 Read Count: 1866
[Report This] Published: 21/03/06 Updated: 21/03/06
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 22/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, that is so sad! please write more, I want to know what happends!

Summary: A poem about Hobbits
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36 Read Count: 1618
[Report This] Published: 05/09/06 Updated: 05/09/06
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's so sweet, and very true-I like it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you liked it!

Boromir's Journey by Merry Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A poem about Boromir
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Boromir
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206 Read Count: 1517
[Report This] Published: 07/09/06 Updated: 07/09/06
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 26/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very sad, but it sums up Boromir's life very well, great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you liked it!

Sea Longing by Vanya Vasa Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A nameless elf's intense love of the sea.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148 Read Count: 1298
[Report This] Published: 07/09/06 Updated: 07/09/06
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 24/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Sea Longing

Wow, that was really descriptive and beautiful!

Summary: A funny story including: blond hairs, tweezers, a dwarf, and an elf. Enjoy, and don't forget to review!
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1013 Read Count: 1682
[Report This] Published: 20/09/06 Updated: 20/09/06
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 20/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it! especially when Legolas starts screaming...amazing, I laughed really, really hard!

Summary: THis is a poem...obviously. Well, i think i'll change it a bit... the boy is Aragorn...
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 285 Read Count: 1244
[Report This] Published: 23/09/06 Updated: 23/09/06
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 24/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, the ending is very powerful!

Author's Response: thanx. I\'ve always thought that the ending of a poem is the most important. it\'s what stays with the reader the longest.

Summary: Frodo has gone to Mordor with his friend, Samwise, but trying to say good-bye at the Grey Havens is not so easy as he thought!
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Frodo, Sam
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185 Read Count: 1254
[Report This] Published: 25/09/06 Updated: 25/09/06
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 29/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, very nice. I have a hard time at the end of the movies, the last scene, although I've seen it many times, still makes me cry!

Author's Response: I know that scene that your talking about, it makes me cry every time I watch. Anyway thanks for reading and reviewing.

Summary: This story is about what happens during night and day.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71 Read Count: 2637
[Report This] Published: 26/09/06 Updated: 26/09/06
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 28/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Moon Tells Sun

It's really sweet, and describes the process well, it sounds like it would make a beautiful bedtime story book!

Summary: A poem, about (surprise surprise) Love.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185 Read Count: 1225
[Report This] Published: 07/11/06 Updated: 07/11/06
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 05/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: I know you love me because

You amaze me! Your poems are so consistently wonderful! Although, this poem didn't make me think of a boy/girl relationship, it actually reminded me of my relationship with Jesus and how much he really loves us. Keep up the lovely work!

Broken heart by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 9]
Summary: For every woman who has gone through this before

To every girl who is going through this,

To every one who is in danger of going through it.

And to the PHG’s (pure heart girls) who are saving themselves hours of pain

I’m not against love; I’m just against careless infatuation. J
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 368 Read Count: 1244
[Report This] Published: 08/11/06 Updated: 08/11/06
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 04/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: A broken heart

This is so true, I have never experienced this, and I hope not to, but I know that there are a TON of girls that go through this every day...it's so sad how obbsessed our culture is with bf/gf relationships! You wrote this in a very easy to read, beautiful way! Also, on your bio, I saw that you are homeschooled, I am too! it's so cool to know that I'm not the only one on the site that doesn't go to a public or private school! Loved it!

Summary: There are many diehard Tolkien fans that complain that either Peter Jackson's films destroyed their cherished images of Middle Earth or didn't capture the spirit of Middle Earth. My answer? It could have been a thousand times worse.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Arwen, Bilbo, Bill the Pony, Denethor, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Galadriel, Gollum, Gríma, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Other Canon Character, Sauron, The Fellowship, Théoden, Witch King
Genres: Horror, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27966 Read Count: 46572
[Report This] Published: 22/11/06 Updated: 19/04/08
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 20/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Power of Friendship

Wow, I like the songs, but I'm having a hard time seeing Arwen in a bikini top and miniskirt...not to mention being in love with Frodo...lol

Author's Response: Yep; just be thankful Disney DIDN\'T make Lord of the Rings!