Reviews by elven lily
Summary: The economy is down, so Aragorn starts a carnival to raise funds to keep Gondor rich. But everything seems to go wrong!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Frodo, Sam, Other
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 664 Read Count: 3378
Published: Sep 21 2004 Updated: Sep 21 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Gee, I wonder what'll happen in this chappie... Reviewer: elven lily Signed
This is sooo funny, when are you going to update?
Date: May 21 2007
Summary: Arwen is fed up with fanfiction. But what lengths is she willing to go to in order to restore Middle Earth to normal? Crossover-mania!
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65399 Read Count: 30409
Published: Dec 03 2004 Updated: Dec 08 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Problem is Diagnosed Reviewer: elven lily Signed
I really enjoyed this story! I have never seen The Mummy or Star Gate but I still had fun reading about the characters as yov portrayed them. Thanks for posting such a hilarious, enjoyable story!
Date: Apr 02 2008
Summary: All you ever needed (but perhaps didn't want) to know about GRÍMA WORMTONGUE! This Guide has been said to be more reliable than a Palantír!

Voted best Humor/Parody at the Flame of Anor Awards 2006.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Gríma
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1796 Read Count: 6418
Published: Dec 06 2004 Updated: Dec 06 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Owner's Guide Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Okay, just a question...who would want a Grima Wormtongue in the first place? He would definitly give me the creeps! Anyway, I loved it, very funny!
Date: Mar 24 2007
Summary: Gríma lets his inner poet loose...
Categories: Book-verse Characters:
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 224 Read Count: 1714
Published: Mar 26 2005 Updated: Mar 26 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Éowyn, my fair one Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow! I didn't know Grima had a poetic side! This is rather disturbing in a funny way...
Date: Jun 26 2007
Summary: Ebony Mor lives in a flat in London. She's a writer. Some of her best friends are from the cast of LOTR. This is about her life with them in it. Their will be appearances by her older sister Satiana Mor.
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Original Character
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4171 Read Count: 8272
Published: Aug 11 2005 Updated: Mar 16 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Very interesting idea for a story! It's a wonder they aren't all overweight with all that food they're eating!
Date: May 10 2007
Summary: On Christmas Eve, Santa pays a trip to Imladris in his sleigh. His intentions, however, are not elf-friendly.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Elrond, Maedhros, Maeglin, Maglor
Genres: Parody, Poetry
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 408 Read Count: 5013
Published: Dec 22 2005 Updated: Dec 22 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 'Twas The Night Before Christmas Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow, Santa is evil...I loved it when he called Elrond ''Rondy'' that was really funny!

Author's Response: Rondy suits Elrond, doesn\'t it! Hehehe. Thanks elven lily. Happy you enjoyed it so much. :)
Date: Mar 26 2007
Summary: What will happen when Jack Sparrow's daughter is sent to middle earthip or, will she help the fellow sh?ip or take the ring for herself
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Aragorn
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1549 Read Count: 3981
Published: Jan 18 2006 Updated: Jan 20 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: the storm Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Very interesting idea, I'm sure she will have a very interesting-if not rather strange- impact on Middle-Earth!
Date: Mar 26 2007
Summary: pippin is kidnaped by the halloween killer and it is up to merry,frodo and sam to save him
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Bilbo, Frodo, Merry, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1041 Read Count: 4446
Published: Jan 20 2006 Updated: Jun 30 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: the truth of halloween Reviewer: elven lily Signed
First of all, I think the idea is very interesting and funny, but it could be made a lot more enjoyable to read if you made a few simple changes.
It would really help if you capitalized names and beginning words in sentences. Also, adding a comma after parenthesis when followed by a ‘Bilbo said’ or something else would make it flow better. Furthermore, it would also help a great deal if you added correct punctuation at the end of sentences and quotes.
As far as spelling goes, siad is said, hidding is hiding, Bildo is Bilbo, hobits is hobbits, sudenly is suddenly, hade is had, shore is sure (unless you were intending for Merry to talk like a hillbilly), minits is minutes, vampiar is vampire, mistacks is mistakes, jusy is just, unfiar is unfair, stroming I believe is supposed to be stomping, piffing is puffing, Samin is supposed to be Sam in, russel is rustle, wander is wonder, quite is quiet, terrifide is terrified, road I think is supposed to be roared, typs is types, grabed is grabbed, disapered is disappeared, habbits is hobbits, stoped is stopped, ageed is agreed, wiating is waiting, sop is so, mistaks is mistakes, witch, in this context is which.
A few other things, when they are talking about who has the most lollipops, I think you meant we’re instead of were and there are a few other places where you forgot to add apostrophes in your contractions.
I really do not mean this in a rude way; I just think that a few easy things could be changed to make this more uncomplicated to read. I really do think that this is a very interesting story and I look forward to reading more!
P.S. Do you have spell check on your computer? It makes it a lot easier and also makes stories more grammatically accurate.


Author's Response: i had redone the story a while ago but i had forgot about it, and then i found the new one so i changed it. hope its better
Date: Apr 23 2007
Summary: Legolas gives the LotR news studio a makeover!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Haldir
Genres: Drama, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1073 Read Count: 1329
Published: Feb 02 2006 Updated: Feb 02 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: One Reviewer: elven lily Signed
That was really, really funny! I hope you write more soon!
Date: May 29 2007
Summary: A young woman has been born with wings, something no one can possibly explain. She is cast out of her village and left to wander until she meets a wizard who can help her.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 650 Read Count: 2147
Published: Mar 21 2006 Updated: Mar 21 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow, that is so sad! please write more, I want to know what happends!
Date: May 22 2007
Summary: A poem about Hobbits
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36 Read Count: 1833
Published: Sep 05 2006 Updated: Sep 05 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
It's so sweet, and very true-I like it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you liked it!
Date: Apr 30 2007
Boromir's Journey by Merry Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A poem about Boromir
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Boromir
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206 Read Count: 1693
Published: Sep 07 2006 Updated: Sep 07 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Very sad, but it sums up Boromir's life very well, great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you liked it!
Date: Mar 26 2007
Sea Longing by Vanya Vasa Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A nameless elf's intense love of the sea.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148 Read Count: 1485
Published: Sep 07 2006 Updated: Sep 07 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Sea Longing Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow, that was really descriptive and beautiful!
Date: May 24 2007
Summary: A funny story including: blond hairs, tweezers, a dwarf, and an elf. Enjoy, and don't forget to review!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1013 Read Count: 1960
Published: Sep 20 2006 Updated: Sep 20 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
I love it! especially when Legolas starts screaming...amazing, I laughed really, really hard!
Date: Mar 20 2007
Summary: THis is a poem...obviously. Well, i think i'll change it a bit... the boy is Aragorn...
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 285 Read Count: 1432
Published: Sep 23 2006 Updated: Sep 23 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow, the ending is very powerful!

Author's Response: thanx. I\'ve always thought that the ending of a poem is the most important. it\'s what stays with the reader the longest.
Date: May 24 2007
Summary: Frodo has gone to Mordor with his friend, Samwise, but trying to say good-bye at the Grey Havens is not so easy as he thought!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Frodo, Sam
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185 Read Count: 1423
Published: Sep 25 2006 Updated: Sep 25 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow, very nice. I have a hard time at the end of the movies, the last scene, although I've seen it many times, still makes me cry!

Author's Response: I know that scene that your talking about, it makes me cry every time I watch. Anyway thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: Mar 29 2007
Summary: This story is about what happens during night and day.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71 Read Count: 3336
Published: Sep 26 2006 Updated: Sep 26 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Moon Tells Sun Reviewer: elven lily Signed
It's really sweet, and describes the process well, it sounds like it would make a beautiful bedtime story book!
Date: Apr 28 2007
Summary: A poem, about (surprise surprise) Love.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185 Read Count: 1438
Published: Nov 06 2006 Updated: Nov 06 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: I know you love me because Reviewer: elven lily Signed
You amaze me! Your poems are so consistently wonderful! Although, this poem didn't make me think of a boy/girl relationship, it actually reminded me of my relationship with Jesus and how much he really loves us. Keep up the lovely work!
Date: May 05 2007
Broken heart by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 9]
Summary: For every woman who has gone through this before

To every girl who is going through this,

To every one who is in danger of going through it.

And to the PHG’s (pure heart girls) who are saving themselves hours of pain

I’m not against love; I’m just against careless infatuation. J
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 368 Read Count: 1412
Published: Nov 08 2006 Updated: Nov 08 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A broken heart Reviewer: elven lily Signed
This is so true, I have never experienced this, and I hope not to, but I know that there are a TON of girls that go through this every day...it's so sad how obbsessed our culture is with bf/gf relationships! You wrote this in a very easy to read, beautiful way! Also, on your bio, I saw that you are homeschooled, I am too! it's so cool to know that I'm not the only one on the site that doesn't go to a public or private school! Loved it!
Date: May 04 2007
Summary: There are many diehard Tolkien fans that complain that either Peter Jackson's films destroyed their cherished images of Middle Earth or didn't capture the spirit of Middle Earth. My answer? It could have been a thousand times worse.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Arwen, Bilbo, Bill the Pony, Denethor, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Galadriel, Gollum, Gríma, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Other Canon Character, Sauron, The Fellowship, Théoden, Witch King
Genres: Horror, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27966 Read Count: 63381
Published: Nov 22 2006 Updated: Apr 19 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Power of Friendship Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow, I like the songs, but I'm having a hard time seeing Arwen in a bikini top and miniskirt...not to mention being in love with Frodo...lol

Author's Response: Yep; just be thankful Disney DIDN\'T make Lord of the Rings!
Date: Mar 20 2007
Summary: A poem about Elu and Melian in both Sindarin and English.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Melian, Other
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 205 Read Count: 1969
Published: Nov 23 2006 Updated: Nov 23 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Melian and Elu Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow! I really admire you for being able to write poetry in elvish! I don't think I could ever do that! Very beautiful and enchanting!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I\'m very flattered. But I think that you\'re under-estimating your own abilities. I\'m certain that you could write in Elvish if you had the tools that I used.
Date: Jun 26 2007
Summary: The LOTR characters all go to school and make two new friends. Parody. Also on fanfiction.net.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1486 Read Count: 7203
Published: Nov 24 2006 Updated: Mar 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Timetable Reviewer: elven lily Signed
I love the idea! But am I allowed to add more than one chapter?

Author's Response: If you have any ideas for it then yes. Thanks for the review.
Date: Mar 24 2007
Summary: A poem I had written originaly for a poetry contest but I never entered it. So, here it is.

Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124 Read Count: 1594
Published: Nov 26 2006 Updated: Nov 26 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow! if you had entered it in the contest, you would have won-it's beautiful, just like everything else you write!

Author's Response: Thank you! *blushes* I really appreciate that! iggybaby
Date: Apr 24 2007
Alone by Vanya Vasa Rated: G [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A simple off topic poem I wrote this summer. Its about something I love very much.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Other, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82 Read Count: 1692
Published: Dec 01 2006 Updated: Dec 01 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Alone Reviewer: elven lily Signed
That was really pretty, thinking...your thoughts on how it is to be alone? If so, I completely agree with you, sometimes it it wonderful to just tune out the outside world and be alone...
Date: May 24 2007
Summary:

After the end of the Third Age many thought that evil had been defeated forever from Middle-earth.Yet in the darkness of secrecy Sauron begot a son with one of the Eldar, one called Elenion Caunardhon, that ever sought to avenge the overthrow of his father.


 

As the days of Arda near their end and the situation worsens in our world, a young Tolkien fan is allowed by the Valar to be brought to Middle-earth and be part of a conflict to save Arda from destruction at the hand of Sauron's Son... and perhaps his own world...

This story covers a timeline that leads up to and includes the Dagor Dagorath...


Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arathorn, Aredhel, Arien, Arwen, Aule, Balrog, Barahir of Ithilien, Beleg, Beren, Bilbo, Blue Wizards, Boromir, Caranthir, Celeborn, Celebrían, Celebrimbor, Celegorm, Cirdan, Curufin, Dior, Earendil, Earwen, Eldarion, Elendil, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Elros, Elwing, Eomer, Eomund, Eonwe, Eorl, Eowyn, Erendis, Eru / Iluvatar, Faramir, Feanor, Finarfin, Fingolfin, Fingon, Finrod, Finwe, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gil-Galad, Gildor, Gimli, Glorfindel, Goldberry, Gwaihir, Huan, Idril, Indis, Ingwë, Irmo / Lorien, Isildur, Landroval, Legolas, Lúthien Tinúviel, Maedhros, Maglor, Manwe, Melian, Míriel, Morgoth / Melkor, Mouth of Sauron, Namo / Mandos
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 100 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146334 Read Count: 123130
Published: Dec 05 2006 Updated: Feb 05 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Old Stories made New Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Oh my word! do you have any idea how many times I have wanted to go to Middle-earth? Great idea, a few mistakes here and there, but overall, I like it, very awesome and intriguing story idea!

Author's Response: THANKS A LOT!! I love to write!! Please, tell me what are the mistakes that I may be able to improve the story. Thanks Again!! I think that you will love chapter 5!!
Date: May 12 2007