You really should update, this is hilarious
THIS IS WONDERFUL! I'm raining all of my love down upon this. I know it's probably been published for a while, but it's magnificent.
I have to say... that finding a GREAT Mighty Bean story is hard to come by. Wonderful job and happy writing!
Your poem was pretty freakin hilarious. And the poor treatment of Boromir is just horrifying to me, only because I love him so much. I don't know why authors do that to him. Anyway, it's mostly true and it was highly entertaining. XD
I'm sorry. I've only read the first two chapter and I am rolling with laughter. This is just too awesome. I'm sad to say that I do not go without my love for Boromir. But this is amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it! Welcome to the YGF universe. There's a sequel to this one, as well, as soon as you finish.
XD the snozzberries taste like snozzberries!
Author's Response: Have you seen the 1971 movie? I loved it as a child (and today), and I have read both books, and have both movies. Roald Dahl was a genius!Thanks for your lovely reviews. It's such a nice surprise to see them.
OH MY FREAKIN GOD IT'S JARETH FROM LABYRINTH YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW AMAZINGLY AWESOME THAT IS AND I ALSO LOVE WHEN YOU INCLUDED HARRY POTTER YOU ARE SIMPLY AMAZING AND FUNNY!
Author's Response: You're a Labby-fan too?! Hardly anyone on here knew who he was! Thanks for reviewing!
you had me singing along to this XD
Author's Response: It's such a catchy song! I adore it! <3
Heyyy. I see you haven't updated in a good while. I'd just like you to know that this story so far is very interesting. I love the fact that Uruviel isn't typical Mary Sue daughter of Elrond type. A few suggestions: watch your grammar and as few spelling issues as well as separating the dialogue so it flows easier for the reader. Other than that it's pretty well done. :)
Once upon a time, there was an FBI agent who had given up on love; that is, until an expensive car showed up in front of her house. The next thing she knew, she was learning how to surf, meeting celebrities, and realizing that not everyone in the world needs to be put in handcuffs.
Gah! I love and hate Andy at the same time. James just needs to go away. Poor Dom :( I can't wait to read more of this, I've got to say you have me on the edge of my seat with this one.
Lane's story culminates as she and the remaining Fellowship follow their own paths to Gondor. Lane finally thinks she has a shot at the happiness she's never before experienced, but choices are yet to be made if she ever wants a taste of it. Will she be allowed to stay in Middle-earth, or will she even be given a choice?
Okay. Here comes the lament. I've tried to refrain from doing a review for your series, because I felt like it would be weird to make a comment SO early on that I barely knew the characters. It's been an itch I've really been meaning to scratch and I can finally say, I absolutely adore every single moment of it. Your knowledge of Middle Earth as a whole is amazing let alone the superb character creation and further development of EACH ones feelings. In the first installment, your weaving of Boromir's untimely fate, made me want to crawl inside the story and just hug him because let's face it, it made me want to shout "NO DAMMIT!" Then again, I was so anxious to click to the next page BECAUSE I was so determined to find out what you were plotting next. Like I said, I had serious anxiety when it came to trying to read the series in one night THEN make a review. I must say my dear, your way with words is enthralling and I was so eager to learn from it and use that wisdom in my OWN stories, because just the amount of detail is enough to ensnare any reader of LOTR. I laughed my ass off when I saw "James Earl Jones" come into the picture, and even more so at the innuendos thrown out casually by Lane. I also have to try and relay this to you: Lane is by far the best developed character I've read in ANY fanfiction. You can just tell that she's really been there and seen it all, and that's what I love. Your adding in the Fae's by the way, I loved it, only because it shows the "real world" as also a place of enchantment, and you managed to do that without making it cheesy, and that's hard to do. Yes, I realize I'm rambling, but; every author needs to know when they've done a fine job at story-telling, and you my friend are a master of the craft. Job well done.
Wow! Thanks for the wonderful review, my dear! I appreciate you taking the time to review and let me know what you thought.
I must admit, James Earl Jones I think was one of the funest ideas I came up with. And it was fun to write.
But thanks again, it's one of the nicest reviews I've received!
And check out the new chapter!
Aww. That's so cute!
Author's Response: Thanks so much ^^
Hey person. I'm really digging the vibe of this story so far. I feel so bad for Ann because I myself am a total Boromir fan. But I love Ireth too. Love the creativity with names and I can't wait to read more. :3
Author's Response: I know right? I am a Legolas fan but Boromir is like an awsome friend like person.
Great Story. Made me laugh alot. I freakin love Pippin. I hope to read more from you. Peace.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's the first proper comical fanfiction I've ever written, so it's nice to have a positive review!
Now complete. Autheil is the daughter of an elvish king, Master assassin and skilled thief, destined to save her race from sauron's ever firm grip. Only the princess of thieves has plans of her own, Involving lord Elrond's son Elladan and her childhood friend.The more she falls for him, the more she begins to realise it is impossible to escape fate, and fate has a nasty taste of revenge for those who try and escape.
Hello there! I absolutely love this story! It's officially added to my favorites. Wonderful song choice by the way, I love Annie Lennox. :3 Such a different concept with Elladan, Elrohir, and Glorfindel. Utterly divine. Keep it up ad I look forward to reading more.
Thank you so much, im glad you likeed it. The portrayalof ready made charicters is some times hars,especally whrn they arre not in the films and only in the books, i was very nervous about my portrayalof these characters so it is a releif thatthey went down well. Thank you for reeading, i hope you enjoy the rest!!!
Allow me to be the first review. I must say I'm liking the vibe of this story so far. Keep on writing. And welcome to the Tolkein Community!
This story is very interesting from the start. I like the w ay you wrote the beginning.
Might I suggest that you put spaces more often between your paragraphs.
But anyway. like Luvbukz suggested, find a beta, there are some really awesome people out there (try and seek out EnchantessM)
Anyway. Your ideas are really good, and it's very entertaining to read. :)
I hope this helped.
Hey there, fellow writer of fanfiction! Your idea of putting ME characters in a high school (of all places) is a very interesting idea. I myself have been writing a close-to-but-not-really-similar-story. (TOUFA-that's just abbreviated because the name's too freakin long)
If you desire for your chapters to be shorter, might I suggest that you put a little more detail as to how the school looks, it will give the readers a better idea of what you envision.
And I read that you'd like some character ideas, well I'm not sure what you already have in mind, but here's a few spitballs: Perhaps have Samwise and Rosie hold a Home Economics class, or have Boromir teach Gym. Just a few ideas.
Oh. And I would totally freak the hell out if I knew Boromir was even near me. ;)
Happy writing, I hope this helped.
Author's Response: Thank you for your feed back! I guess I probably should describe how the school looks. And your ideas for Home Economics I just might use! Thank you!