Penname: ToriLee [Contact] Real name: Victoria Von Seeberg
Member Since: 06/08/12
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Why hello there avid readers and writers of fanfiction...

I am your host Tori. Just Tori. This is just a section of bits and bobs about me!

I'm an avid Potterhead and Tolkieneer. *Salutes you.*

I'd also like to point out, that I have a problem with people telling me what to write. My creations are my own, I hold them dear to me. Criticism is welcome though, but don't tell me what to type.

I also, don't give two shits about the whole Suethor or whatever it's called mumbo jumbo. Can't you just enjoy a great story for what it is. I like to create from the bottom up; characters that symbolize strength and who try to work their ways into others lives with passion and vigor. I don't care about Mary Sues. A good story, is a good story, labored over by an author who worked their ass off to see the next chapter done. You people can kiss my ass if you don't like it.

One reason I decided to join this site: I could write sexually explicit material. And I haaaaaate when other sites tell you that you can't because of whatever bullshit reason. I'm not telling you my status on the sex list, but that doesn't mean I don't like to write about it. it's part of life. Deal with it. If you don't want to read sex material, then go away. No one asked you to read this so just bugger off and don't chew the author a new one or delete their account, because that's so douchy.

ALSO! I love and support the gays, but that doesn't mean I want to read slash. I'll make that clear.

If you couldn't tell by my stories so far, I love Boromir. Not to say that I don't love EVERY character, but I have a particular soft spot for the Young Lord of Gondor. *dramatic sigh...*

Recently, I've begun to discover that I don't have the time to do as much writing as I'd like to. And that makes me sad.

Just know this, I am trying the best I can to update and create the best stories I can muster.

Also. If you're new to this site, most likely I'll give your story a read and review it. I know how it is to first start out.

Please, if you like what I do, contact me via my new email (strictly for writing purposes): onewriter.manyadventures@gmail.com

I also have stories on wattpad if you're interested.

I wish everyone on this site (except spammers) the best of luck.

Happy writing.

*Also, when you read my stories and see that I haven't updated in a while, please say something. Life gets in the way and I can't spend the time that I want to update everything. Comment on the story you love most and I will update as soon as I possible can.*
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Summary: Aragorn buys himself a fast-food joint. Hilarity ensues!
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Sam, Boromir, Faramir, Celeborn
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 706 Read Count: 1645
[Report This] Published: 21/08/04 Updated: 21/08/04
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 16/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: How It All Started

You really should update, this is hilarious

Summary: The Company's first night in Moria from Boromir's P.O.V.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Boromir
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1192 Read Count: 1316
[Report This] Published: 12/10/04 Updated: 12/10/04
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 18/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Black Pit of Moria

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THIS IS WONDERFUL! I'm raining all of my love down upon this. I know it's probably been published for a while, but it's magnificent.

Let's Be Us Again by viggomama Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Sean Bean and his 4th wife are divorcing. They remember their relationship in flashback. (mostly her 1st POV) A good number of the cast are mentioned in some way, Karl figures a bit more prominently.
Categories: Actor Fics
Characters: Orlando Bloom, Viggo Mortensen, Liv Tyler, Sean Bean, Original Character, David Wenham, Karl Urban
Genres: Romance, Drama, Angst, Erotica
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: Katie's Legacy
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27844 Read Count: 12232
[Report This] Published: 19/08/05 Updated: 25/09/05
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 26/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: part 1 (ch 1-2)

I have to say... that finding a GREAT Mighty Bean story is hard to come by. Wonderful job and happy writing!

Summary: A poem about the Sues of LOTR.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 844 Read Count: 1340
[Report This] Published: 09/11/07 Updated: 09/11/07
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 20/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your poem was pretty freakin hilarious. And the poor treatment of Boromir is just horrifying to me, only because I love him so much. I don't know why authors do that to him. Anyway, it's mostly true and it was highly entertaining. XD

You've Got Fanmail! by Melda Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 105]
Summary: The members of the Fellowship must learn to deal with one of the worst aspects of being famous...fanmail..written by the horror of horrors, fangirls.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn
Genres: None
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Challenges: Hilarious stories!!!
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35811 Read Count: 39345
[Report This] Published: 13/04/11 Updated: 24/07/11
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 11/08/12 Title: Chapter 2: The Sword and the Sue

I'm sorry. I've only read the first two chapter and I am rolling with laughter. This is just too awesome. I'm sad to say that I do not go without my love for Boromir. But this is amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it! Welcome to the YGF universe. There's a sequel to this one, as well, as soon as you finish.

Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 11/08/12 Title: Chapter 6: Hey..has anyone seen Gandalf?

XD the snozzberries taste like snozzberries!

Author's Response: Have you seen the 1971 movie? I loved it as a child (and today), and I have read both books, and have both movies. Roald Dahl was a genius!Thanks for your lovely reviews. It's such a nice surprise to see them.

Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 11/08/12 Title: Chapter 15: Dance Lessons from the Goblin King

OH MY FREAKIN GOD IT'S JARETH FROM LABYRINTH YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW AMAZINGLY AWESOME THAT IS AND I ALSO LOVE WHEN YOU INCLUDED HARRY POTTER YOU ARE SIMPLY AMAZING AND FUNNY!

Author's Response: You're a Labby-fan too?! Hardly anyone on here knew who he was! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 11/08/12 Title: Chapter 15: Dance Lessons from the Goblin King

you had me singing along to this XD

Author's Response: It's such a catchy song! I adore it! <3

Summary: Mae Govannen! This is a story that I have devoloped over many years of roleplay and my character. Uruviel is the daughter of Elrohir, and the granddaughter of Elrond. During pregnancy her mother Tamuril, was cursed along with the child she bore, which was Uruviel. Part One will describe the birth and effects after of Uruviel's life. She is darker than the average Elf due to the curse from Morgoth. Read and criticize! :D
Categories: Book Verse Slash
Characters: Celeborn, Elrohir, Elrond, Galadriel
Genres: Drama, Family, Fantasy, Mystery, Suspense
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1165 Read Count: 573
[Report This] Published: 27/11/11 Updated: 27/11/11
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 06/02/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Goheno Nin 'Forgive Me'

Heyyy. I see you haven't updated in a good while. I'd just like you to know that this story so far is very interesting. I love the fact that Uruviel isn't typical Mary Sue daughter of Elrond type. A few suggestions: watch your grammar and as few spelling issues as well as separating the dialogue so it flows easier for the reader. Other than that it's pretty well done. :)

Summary:

Once upon a time, there was an FBI agent who had given up on love; that is, until an expensive car showed up in front of her house. The next thing she knew, she was learning how to surf, meeting celebrities, and realizing that not everyone in the world needs to be put in handcuffs.


Categories: Actor Fics
Characters: Dominic Monaghan
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25861 Read Count: 5113
[Report This] Published: 21/03/12 Updated: 22/08/12
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 11/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: What's a Jaguar Doing on My Street?

Gah! I love and hate Andy at the same time. James just needs to go away. Poor Dom :( I can't wait to read more of this, I've got to say you have me on the edge of my seat with this one.

Summary:

Lane's story culminates as she and the remaining Fellowship follow their own paths to Gondor. Lane finally thinks she has a shot at the happiness she's never before experienced, but choices are yet to be made if she ever wants a taste of it. Will she be allowed to stay in Middle-earth, or will she even be given a choice?

To Honor


Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Beregond, Bergil, Denethor, Elladan, Elrohir, Eomer, Eowyn, Erkenbrand, Eru / Iluvatar, Faramir, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Halbarad, Imrahil, Ioreth, Legolas, Merry, Namo / Mandos, Nazgûl, Original Character, Pippin, Sauron, The Fellowship, Théoden, Vaire
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Graphic Sex, Rape, Torture, Violence
Series: Protect and Serve
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100730 Read Count: 11441
[Report This] Published: 27/06/12 Updated: 20/10/12
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 18/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Story of Who I Am

Okay. Here comes the lament. I've tried to refrain from doing a review for your series, because I felt like it would be weird to make a comment SO early on that I barely knew the characters. It's been an itch I've really been meaning to scratch and I can finally say, I absolutely adore every single moment of it. Your knowledge of Middle Earth as a whole is amazing let alone the superb character creation and further development of EACH ones feelings. In the first installment, your weaving of Boromir's untimely fate, made me want to crawl inside the story and just hug him because let's face it, it made me want to shout "NO DAMMIT!" Then again, I was so anxious to click to the next page BECAUSE I was so determined to find out what you were plotting next. Like I said, I had serious anxiety when it came to trying to read the series in one night THEN make a review. I must say my dear, your way with words is enthralling and I was so eager to learn from it and use that wisdom in my OWN stories, because just the amount of detail is enough to ensnare any reader of LOTR. I laughed my ass off when I saw "James Earl Jones" come into the picture, and even more so at the innuendos thrown out casually by Lane. I also have to try and relay this to you: Lane is by far the best developed character I've read in ANY fanfiction. You can just tell that she's really been there and seen it all, and that's what I love. Your adding in the Fae's by the way, I loved it, only because it shows the "real world" as also a place of enchantment, and you managed to do that without making it cheesy, and that's hard to do. Yes, I realize I'm rambling, but; every author needs to know when they've done a fine job at story-telling, and you my friend are a master of the craft. Job well done.

Author's Response:

Wow! Thanks for the wonderful review, my dear! I appreciate you taking the time to review and let me know what you thought.

I must admit, James Earl Jones I think was one of the funest ideas I came up with. And it was fun to write. 

 

But thanks again, it's one of the nicest reviews I've received!

 

And check out the new chapter!

 

Lasarina

Summary: This is basically 100 oneshot fanfics all based on a certain theme, from No. 1 Beginnings to No. 100 Endings. There are a lot of characters involved from both the books and the films and there are cross-overs of Lord of the Rings and other things I really really like such as Zelda, Repo! The Genetic Opera and even Greek myths and legends. So hopefully you'll read them all, but if not, browse the chapters and if a specific theme grasps your attention just read that. Because there are so many stories there are a lot of categories, characters and genres ^^.
None of the chapters are related to each other.
Categories: Other Movies, Book-verse, Book Verse Slash, Movie-verse, Lord of the Rings Slash, Crossovers
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Beregond, Boromir, Celeborn, Denethor, Elboron, Eldarion, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Ents, Eomer, Eowyn, Erestor, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Glorfindel, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Morgoth / Melkor, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Other Canon Character, Pippin, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship, Théoden, Théodred, Thranduil, Treebeard
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, General, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Other, Romance, Suspense, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Incest, Kink, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78666 Read Count: 13229
[Report This] Published: 28/06/12 Updated: 03/11/12
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 07/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: No. 1 Beginnings

Aww. That's so cute!

Author's Response: Thanks so much ^^

Summary: Legolas and Ireth are engaged. Ann has lost Boromir, but has been told that there is still someone out there searching for her. Rachel and her lover Merry and their best friend Pippin have been captured by the Uruk-hai. Will Ireth and friends be able to save them? And what of the Ring Bearer. He is being hunted.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Legolas
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17061 Read Count: 10564
[Report This] Published: 18/07/12 Updated: 04/11/12
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 07/08/12 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Hey person. I'm really digging the vibe of this story so far. I feel so bad for Ann because I myself am a total Boromir fan. But I love Ireth too. Love the creativity with names and I can't wait to read more. :3

Author's Response: I know right? I am a Legolas fan but Boromir is like an awsome friend like person.

Summary: Whilst on the road to Moria, Pippin discovers a most unexpected cure for boredom: the alphabet game.
Competition soon ensues, and things become more than a little heated...

A response to 100 Prompts by wind rider- #35: Let's Play a Game.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: 100 Prompts
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 765 Read Count: 318
[Report This] Published: 11/08/12 Updated: 11/08/12
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 11/08/12 Title: Chapter 1: To Pass the Time

Great Story. Made me laugh alot. I freakin love Pippin. I hope to read more from you. Peace.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's the first proper comical fanfiction I've ever written, so it's nice to have a positive review!

Summary:

Now complete. Autheil is the daughter of an elvish king, Master assassin and skilled thief, destined to save her race from sauron's ever firm grip. Only the princess of thieves has plans of her own, Involving lord Elrond's son Elladan and her childhood friend.The more she falls for him, the more she begins to realise it is impossible to escape fate, and fate has a nasty taste of revenge for those who try and escape.


Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Series: The Prophacy
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16557 Read Count: 4906
[Report This] Published: 24/08/12 Updated: 27/09/12
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 26/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: Autheil

Hello there! I absolutely love this story! It's officially added to my favorites. Wonderful song choice by the way, I love Annie Lennox. :3 Such a different concept with Elladan, Elrohir, and Glorfindel. Utterly divine. Keep it up ad I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, im glad you likeed it. The portrayalof ready made charicters is some times hars,especally whrn they arre not in the films and only in the books, i was very nervous about my portrayalof these characters so it is a releif thatthey went down well. Thank you for reeading, i hope you enjoy the rest!!!

Summary: They watched her flying from one spot to the next, dancing a frightening waltz of death. Quickly her eyes flashed to their motionless figures, "Run… get away from here fast…" Legalos didn't help her, he wasn't able to. How did it happen, he had lost her.

Strange happenings are occurring in Middle Earth, with the council gathering and everyone preparing for war, what impact would three not so foreign figures have? Let us follow the adventures of Emma, Jane and Luminour as they are faced with problems, far greater then what they have erev experienced before.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Boromir, Elrond, Frodo, Frodo Gamgee, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gollum, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship, Treebeard
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, General
Warnings: Character Death, None, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3401 Read Count: 836
[Report This] Published: 09/09/12 Updated: 30/01/14
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 10/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: Preface

Allow me to be the first review. I must say I'm liking the vibe of this story so far. Keep on writing. And welcome to the Tolkein Community!

Summary: A woman from a long forgotten realm joins the fellowship. Not only to destroy The One Ring, but the kill another enemy of her own. Will she succeed or will she fail? (I suck at summaries. Rated M just in case.)
Categories: Book Verse Slash, Movie-verse
Characters: Legolas
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40896 Read Count: 3613
[Report This] Published: 22/03/13 Updated: 01/02/14
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 01/08/13 Title: Chapter 0: Who are you?

This story is very interesting from the start. I like the w ay you wrote the beginning.
Might I suggest that you put spaces more often between your paragraphs.
But anyway. like Luvbukz suggested, find a beta, there are some really awesome people out there (try and seek out EnchantessM)
Anyway. Your ideas are really good, and it's very entertaining to read. :)
I hope this helped.
-ToriLee

Summary: A new high school has recently been constructed in the town of Spring Lake, North Carolina called ME High School. It has a wide variety of teachers including a wizard, a short guy with a ring, a few elves,and a ranger who is supposedly a king of someplace. This all sounds terribly familiar. What does ME stand for again...?
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2384 Read Count: 1201
[Report This] Published: 05/06/13 Updated: 12/08/13
Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Date: 01/08/13 Title: Chapter 1: Here Comes High School

Hey there, fellow writer of fanfiction! Your idea of putting ME characters in a high school (of all places) is a very interesting idea. I myself have been writing a close-to-but-not-really-similar-story. (TOUFA-that's just abbreviated because the name's too freakin long)
Anyway.
If you desire for your chapters to be shorter, might I suggest that you put a little more detail as to how the school looks, it will give the readers a better idea of what you envision.
And I read that you'd like some character ideas, well I'm not sure what you already have in mind, but here's a few spitballs: Perhaps have Samwise and Rosie hold a Home Economics class, or have Boromir teach Gym. Just a few ideas.
Oh. And I would totally freak the hell out if I knew Boromir was even near me. ;)
Happy writing, I hope this helped.
-ToriLee

Author's Response: Thank you for your feed back! I guess I probably should describe how the school looks. And your ideas for Home Economics I just might use! Thank you!