Hmmm, and the plot thickens. I love it. Can't wait to see where this development leads. Thanks for another chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for keeping the reviews coming. More on the way soon.

Oh thank you, thank you, thank you. You know I'm a sucker for a possible Legolas-Eowyn relationship so that kiss was most enjoyable to read about. I know they're just friends though and likely to stay that way.

Nice chapter. Sad, but nice. I'm blown away by how you described that kiss. It was beautiful. You are truly a talented writer. I was so drawn in I almost felt like I was there.

I'm really enjoying Legolas in this setting among humans and I'm also enjoying the humans themselves lol. Thanks for updating. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: So nice to hear from you. Thanks for your nice comments. You are right about Legs and Eowyn. They are just friends and that is all. But if your first kiss could be with an elf, wouldn't you make it happen? I think Eowyn and Faramir are definitely the best choice for each other ... eventually. I've got other plans for Legi though. I just need to write them. Thanks for sticking with me and I'll try to update a little faster.

Ah sorry for being gone so long. I was writing exams and had to practice great restraint. Super glad to be back though. Thanks for a great chapter, I enjoy reading about Legolas in love. Funny though I found my reaction to the part at the end between Legolas and Eowyn quite interesting. All of sudden I wanted that to be the beginning of something more. Lol I'm not sure why I feel that way.

By the way, it crossed my mind while reading, I'm not very knowledgable about all things elf so what happens if Legolas "does the deed" before his majority?

Thanks again and can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Legolas and Eowyn have a special kind of relationship, but they really are just friends. Neither one would want to do anything to damage that friendship. As far as your question about Legolas and his majority, I just have one thing to say ... fanfiction. Legolas' story is already much different than originally written so I'm not following any canon rules here. Had he been raised by elves, I'm sure things would be much different, but he's lived with humans longer than elves by now and has adopted their traditions, and that includes "doing the deed" lol. Right now his hormones are racing and he's not thinking about humans vs. elves, immortality vs. mortality. He's pretty much using Theodred and Eomer as examples, but don't worry. He'll still have some morals. ; - )

Ah it feels so good to be back. I've been unable to access this site for what seems like forever.

Oh, things are hotting up now. Looks like the ominous dark cloud will soon be releasing its showers of war and woe.

Though I enjoy reading about the elf's battle skills (very sexy), I'm glad Legolas gets to keep an eye on things at home which promises training for poor Eowyn so she can at least get some air now and then.

Hope all goes well for Rohan's princes yet I fear that I'll be saying goodbye to one of them soon.

Anyway, let me stop making assumptions and look forward to the next chapter.

Thank you for the update. (",)

Author's Response: Glad you're back. Yes, Legolas is back home, but there is a twist coming. Dark days are definitely falling upon them all.

Oh no Legolas... How could he allow that vile woman to trap him like that... And her... Has she not a shred of goodness in her that would not even think twice about hurting this wonderful elf. Super despise that worm right now and wish I could teach that woman the real meaning of pain for bringing Legolas' good and respectable name and into question. Oh, can't wait to see all the worm's plans and desires go up in flames.

Author's Response: Now you can see why Grima chose Rota to do the dirty deed. He knew she would be irresistable to Legolas, and she would get the job done.

Thank you for updating. Please continue to update. I think I'd die if you abandoned this story and I was left wanting... Again thanks.

Please don't think that I meant it in a bad way. I read your bio and that's how I know that English is not your first language. You are clearly a very intelligent person and I actually admire the fact that you are able to write as well as you do in a language that is not native to you. I only suggested it because I see that your story has alot of potential and having a "beta" I think its called could really help. It does take more time but its worth it in the end. Maybe you could even approach someone on this site if they're not too busy with their own stuff that could be great. Hope my review was helpful :) keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanks, Going to see if I can find one. I don't take that in the bad way. I like when people give me this knid of reviews, sens then i can know what i need to fix or do better.

I like how you started. The Wizard approaching the woman in the clearing, conversation and beginning of a quest that will likely turn to be harder and longer than imagined. It was a good introduction (reminiscant of the Shannara stories, to me anyway) . It really grabbed my attention so well done. Ok I'm gonna read your next chapters will review again.