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The Last Wood Elf by L8Bleumr Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 66]
Summary: *COMPLETE* When Mirkwood is destroyed, there is only one survivor, an elfling named Legolas. He is the last of his kind, the last wood elf. Eventually he is brought to Rohan where King Théoden takes him into his home and raises him along with his son, Théodred and his nephew Eomer. The boys develop a strong bond and swear their loyalty to one another. Although Legolas is brought up in a world of men, he longs to someday return to his home and, along with his adopted brothers, cleanse it of the evil malice that dwells there and rebuild the elven city, even if he is the last. *Warning* Not your typical Legolas story. Legolas’ history is strictly AU while the rest loosely follows book/movie verse (mind you I said loosely.)
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Eomer, Eowyn, Gríma, Haldir, Legolas, Original Character, Théoden, Théodred
Genres: Action/Adventure, Friendship, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 269126 Read Count: 30961
Published: Jun 25 2012 Updated: Apr 07 2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Burning Of Mirkwood Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
As usual you have me up till all hours reading your story. Great story. Love how it's developing. Very believable.

My only complaint is that you don't give a chapter everyday :) I understand writing takes time though. Please keep writing can't wait to read the rest. You rock.

Author's Response: I see you are new here. Very nice to meet you. Hope you get some sleep though, lol. I'm so glad you like this story. Believe me, I wish I could post everyday, but I can only go as fast as my beta, but she does such a wonderful job helping me that it's worth the wait.
Date: Oct 01 2012
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Lothlorien Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Awesome. Thanks so much for the update. I an still really enjoying this story. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks. More on the way soon.
Date: Sep 26 2013
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Rohan's Redemption Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Awesome chapter! I'm loving the way this story is developing.

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!
Date: Sep 19 2013
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Written In Sand Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Wow, I was wondering when Legolas would learn of his true heritage. Can't wait to read more. Great chapter. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Hi Luvbukz. Yep, the cat's out of the bag. Finally!
Date: Sep 19 2013
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 A Horn Shall Sound Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Hi :) thank you so much for updating. As always I've enjoyed reading your update. I must mention your opening paragraph. Your description was amazing. I could actually taste the filthy, oily smell. Ha ha ha I actually coughed as if to clear my lungs of the stench. Great stuff. Great to have you back.

Author's Response: Hi there. As you can see, I'm finally back home and slowly getting back into writing. I had to read the last 5 or so chapters to familiarize myself with this story. It's been so long since I worked on it. Things seem to be going well for my folks, and I think I have them talked into moving to where I live so that I can take care of them. Anyways, I'm glad you liked the latest chapter and that it made you choke, lol. This really was a fun chp to write. Another one on the way soon. Thanks for sticking by.
Date: Jul 04 2013
Title: Chapter 1: The Burning Of Mirkwood Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
I'm really sorry to hear about your parents. I hope all goes well. Take care of what's important in your life and don't stress too much. Your readers will always be here. Thanks too for your dedication to your writing. We'll be here when you're ready again :)

Author's Response: I'll be home in just over a week and the first thing I'm doing is posting. Thanks bukz, for waiting.
Date: Jun 15 2013
Title: Chapter 1: The Burning Of Mirkwood Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Hi. Really missing your updates. Hope all is well. Looking forward to more of this story.

Author's Response: Sorry it's been a while. I promise I will get back to the story. Unfortunately, I've had a family emergency and I'm currently helping my elderly parents. My dad is my mom's only care giver and he ended up in the hospital for an absess on his foot. So I've been with them, taking care of my mom and visiting my dad in the rehab facility. Luckily, tomorrow he comes home, but I'm still here for another week and a half. I've got to get home care set up and things like that so I can finally go back home. So hang in there with me. I promise not to abandon this story. I've just hit a bump in the road. Thanks for asking Luvbukz. It's nice to know someone's out there.
Date: Jun 13 2013
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Without Words Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Hmmm, and the plot thickens. I love it. Can't wait to see where this development leads. Thanks for another chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for keeping the reviews coming. More on the way soon.
Date: May 06 2013
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 On Open Plains Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Thanks for the update. I'm still hooked :) I was wondering... Since this isn't a typical, follow the course of the books story, will Legolas be finding his way to Elrond and the fellowship or do you have something else in mind?

Author's Response: Sorry it took a little longer to update, but it was spring break at my house and that left me with very little time for writing. I'm back now, and hope to have another chp by the end of the week. Well, to answer your question, Legolas will not be going to Imladris. At this point in the story, the Council has already taken place and the fellowship has split up. However, Legolas will meet what's left of the fellowship, in my own twisted way, and he will eventually go to Lothlorien. That's about all I can say for now, since I haven't written most of it yet, and sometimes things change. But it's definitely Lorien, not Rivendell where Legolas will end up.
Date: Apr 09 2013
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Winter's Chill Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Oh thank you, thank you, thank you. You know I'm a sucker for a possible Legolas-Eowyn relationship so that kiss was most enjoyable to read about. I know they're just friends though and likely to stay that way.

Nice chapter. Sad, but nice. I'm blown away by how you described that kiss. It was beautiful. You are truly a talented writer. I was so drawn in I almost felt like I was there.

I'm really enjoying Legolas in this setting among humans and I'm also enjoying the humans themselves lol. Thanks for updating. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: So nice to hear from you. Thanks for your nice comments. You are right about Legs and Eowyn. They are just friends and that is all. But if your first kiss could be with an elf, wouldn't you make it happen? I think Eowyn and Faramir are definitely the best choice for each other ... eventually. I've got other plans for Legi though. I just need to write them. Thanks for sticking with me and I'll try to update a little faster.
Date: Jan 16 2013
Title: Chapter 1: The Burning Of Mirkwood Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Ah... Makes sense. Think my brain was still a bit fried from exams. Thanks :)
Date: Oct 28 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Seeking Advice Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Ah sorry for being gone so long. I was writing exams and had to practice great restraint. Super glad to be back though. Thanks for a great chapter, I enjoy reading about Legolas in love. Funny though I found my reaction to the part at the end between Legolas and Eowyn quite interesting. All of sudden I wanted that to be the beginning of something more. Lol I'm not sure why I feel that way.

By the way, it crossed my mind while reading, I'm not very knowledgable about all things elf so what happens if Legolas "does the deed" before his majority?

Thanks again and can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Legolas and Eowyn have a special kind of relationship, but they really are just friends. Neither one would want to do anything to damage that friendship. As far as your question about Legolas and his majority, I just have one thing to say ... fanfiction. Legolas' story is already much different than originally written so I'm not following any canon rules here. Had he been raised by elves, I'm sure things would be much different, but he's lived with humans longer than elves by now and has adopted their traditions, and that includes "doing the deed" lol. Right now his hormones are racing and he's not thinking about humans vs. elves, immortality vs. mortality. He's pretty much using Theodred and Eomer as examples, but don't worry. He'll still have some morals. ; - )
Date: Oct 24 2012
Title: Chapter 1: The Burning Of Mirkwood Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
I think you're right, it hasn't been explained anywhere and for that I thank you for all the liberties taken :) It makes for a good read and is very convincing.

I'm glad Legolas has tipped the guys off about that creepy worm's obsession with poor Eowyn lol it gives me hope. As for Legolas and his love... Poor thing... I'm biting my nails wondering what comes next.

Thanks for another well written chapter. Your story telling abilities are exceptional. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: And thank you for another review! I'm happy to know you are enjoying this story. As for Legolas, he'll not take Luta's news too well, but he will redirect his anger. Grima better look over his shoulder.
Date: Dec 05 2012
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Keeping House Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Ah it feels so good to be back. I've been unable to access this site for what seems like forever.

Oh, things are hotting up now. Looks like the ominous dark cloud will soon be releasing its showers of war and woe.

Though I enjoy reading about the elf's battle skills (very sexy), I'm glad Legolas gets to keep an eye on things at home which promises training for poor Eowyn so she can at least get some air now and then.

Hope all goes well for Rohan's princes yet I fear that I'll be saying goodbye to one of them soon.

Anyway, let me stop making assumptions and look forward to the next chapter.

Thank you for the update. (",)

Author's Response: Glad you're back. Yes, Legolas is back home, but there is a twist coming. Dark days are definitely falling upon them all.
Date: Jan 29 2013
Title: Chapter 1: The Burning Of Mirkwood Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Been reading The Two Towers, again, and got to the part when the three hunters meet Eomer and his riders. As he spoke of himself and HIS eored I was immediately taken back to the scene in your story when he spoke to his men and formed a bond with them securing their allegience.
It struck me then that not only are you a talent writer but you also see things in stories that others might miss. Myself for one.

Whether intentional or not, its a lovely filler. It give me a new or deeper understanding of the love and loyalty between Eomer and the people of Rohan. It makes total sense now why they could follow him so easily as if he were always meant to be King.

Thanks for that.

Author's Response: I cannot tell you what a great feeling you've given me. I've always liked Eomer's character. What a strong, honorable, and confident man he must have been. And yes, I intentionally wanted to show that bonding with his men, as well as his love for his people and country. I've always thought that the Rohirrim were the most proud people. They are a young and growing country compared to other places. They have a lot to prove and need strong leaders. I'm so happy I could spark something with my writing. What a huge compliment you've given me. Thank you so much ; - )
Date: Feb 12 2013
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 The Blacksmith Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Oh no Legolas... How could he allow that vile woman to trap him like that... And her... Has she not a shred of goodness in her that would not even think twice about hurting this wonderful elf. Super despise that worm right now and wish I could teach that woman the real meaning of pain for bringing Legolas' good and respectable name and into question. Oh, can't wait to see all the worm's plans and desires go up in flames.

Author's Response: Now you can see why Grima chose Rota to do the dirty deed. He knew she would be irresistable to Legolas, and she would get the job done.
Date: Feb 13 2013
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 What Lies Beneath Edoras Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Oh my... It truely pains me to read about Legolas in such a degrading, unforgiving and altogether wretched place. Poor elf. That the devious worm seems to be getting his way (for now at least) really grates my gall. I know things will get better though so I'm hanging in there with you as always :). Looking forward to your next installment. Can't wait to see where this is headed and what's in store for our tortured elf. Thanks for the update and thanks for not deserting your readers. We deeply appreciate it.

Author's Response: Things are always darkest before the dawn, you could say. And Grima will get his sooner or later, probably later. I'm glad to see you're still hanging with me. And no worries about desertion. I never leave a story unfinished. I hate that kind of thing myself and know how disappointing it is to never know what happened. More on the way soon. Always good to see you Luvbukz.
Date: Mar 08 2013
Life Unknown by smende83 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Ithilwen is lost, orphaned, and alone. After being chased by Orcs and found by a small group of elves, this woman of Gondor must learn her true identify and past to be able to figure out her future. Her journey will take her with the fellowship as they fight to destroy the One Ring and also into the arms of an elf. Tenth Member Story. Rated NC-17 for future chapters.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Boromir, Celeborn, Denethor, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Family, Friendship, General, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: Life Series
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55303 Read Count: 13294
Published: Dec 14 2012 Updated: Jun 23 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Awesome! That was an interesting end to part 1 of your story. I'll be keeping an eye out for part 2. Can't wait to see how Ithilwen comes into it. I'm hungry for more. Can't wait.
Date: Jun 26 2013
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Oh I hope this doesn't affect their relationship. I hope she can rationalise this and realise that by turning away from Legolas she is giving Sauron what he wants. Can't wait for more. Thanks for the update.
Date: Jun 20 2013
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Thank you for updating I thoroughly enjoyed reading the chapters. I was slightly disappointed that our love birds couldn't do the dance of love but I also understand that they've come a long way already. Can't wait for more. Thanks
Date: Jun 09 2013
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Hi :) Ah feels good to be back. I've been swamped with work and haven't had a chance to read. Thanks so much for the update. I enjoyed reading Ithilwen's internal monologue and she considered her growing relationship with Legolas. It felt very real. Its just like a woman lol. I also enjoyed this last chapter. I always get sad when I read about Gandalf's fall but am looking forward to peeing what Lorien has in store for our little Ithilwen. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm a chapter behind on this site than I am on the other, but I'm about to update it for everyone here so I can be up to date. Thank you again for the review. I greatly appreciate it. It makes me want to keep writing. :)
Date: Jun 05 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Dear Elbragol

Thanks for the history lesson though I'm not sure if it was asked for. I'm speaking (or rather typing) under correction but I think that part of fanfiction is allowing the authors to take liberties with the "set in stone" facts of the novel/s that the fiction takes its ideas from. This is true for more then 90% of the fanfiction on this and other sites. It is my opinion that the twist of the half elf having powers was a good one and adds to the development of the story. I am enjoying reading this story and while I have no right to ask or tell you what to do, I humbly ask that you not put the author off as I would be highly frustrated if this story were to be abandoned. Please remember that you are not obliged to read this particular story if its contents offend you.

Thank you.

Dear Author

Please update soon. I can't wait to read on.

Author's Response: Thank for you that review. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I look forward to seeing what else you thought while reading. Thanks!!!
Date: May 28 2013
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Thank you for updating. Please continue to update. I think I'd die if you abandoned this story and I was left wanting... Again thanks.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying it. It is still very weird for me to see people saying stuff about my story and how they're enjoying it. I hope I can continue to give you good chapters. I just added chapter 10 for everyone to read. I hope it's something you enjoy. Thanks again!!
Date: May 23 2013
Summary: Drabble/Fic: First meeting (Prompt)
Plot: We find out why Haldir doesn’t like to drink too much with Glorfindel
Characters: Glorfindel and Haldir
Word Count: 1137
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Glorfindel, Haldir
Genres: Friendship, General, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1148 Read Count: 839
Published: Feb 04 2013 Updated: Feb 04 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
This was enjoyable to read. Thanks. Please, keep writing.
Date: Apr 16 2013
Summary: A woman from a long forgotten realm joins the fellowship. Not only to destroy The One Ring, but the kill another enemy of her own. Will she succeed or will she fail? (I suck at summaries. Rated M just in case.)
Categories: Book Verse Slash, Movie-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40896 Read Count: 6969
Published: Mar 22 2013 Updated: Feb 01 2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 0: Who are you? Reviewer: Luvbukz Signed
Please don't think that I meant it in a bad way. I read your bio and that's how I know that English is not your first language. You are clearly a very intelligent person and I actually admire the fact that you are able to write as well as you do in a language that is not native to you. I only suggested it because I see that your story has alot of potential and having a "beta" I think its called could really help. It does take more time but its worth it in the end. Maybe you could even approach someone on this site if they're not too busy with their own stuff that could be great. Hope my review was helpful :) keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanks, Going to see if I can find one. I don't take that in the bad way. I like when people give me this knid of reviews, sens then i can know what i need to fix or do better.
Date: Apr 24 2013