Reviews by MrEnterprise
Summary: When Cory Blair is called into work in the middle of the night, she finds herself staring at the body of a man who looks like he bounced out of a Medieval Fair. And this time, he's alive.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Boromir, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft, Graphic Sex, Rape, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62601 Read Count: 14656
Published: 08/16/12 Updated: 09/21/15 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: An Unwanted Call Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
The progression from the other story I read to this one is evident. Much more sophisticated writing style, very well done.
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Wide Awake Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Great piece. Cory has heart.
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Nothing On This Guy Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
When Boromir tells his birthdate the second time, it should include 'of the Third Age' if he saw how bewildered cory was. Just a thought. But again. Dialog doesnt miss a beat.
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Gotta Love Family Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
The story of her fiancee and its effect on her really hits home, very believable.
And the both of them with the children, the connection is felt, a very touching moment.
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: TGIF, But It Ain't Friday Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Beth is a great character, the depth you put in this chapter is a great addition to the repetiore.
And again, with the kids. so damn cute.
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Why Cory Must Do Everything Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
The part about Cory's double personality is important. Cant say why.
But the Love Actually reference is deeply appreciated,
and i would /hate/ to be Boromir...
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Montpelier Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Holy Shnike. The stimulation of the dream, ending in the rage, leaving Cory slick and SOL...
Well done.
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: One Big Scary Spark Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Choice of movies is immactulate. Watching the relationship grow is pleasant. Good piece.
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Sick Form Of Foreplay Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
So romantic...
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Lost And Found, Then Lost Again Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Heartwrenching.
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Book Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
I was waiting for this moment.
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Reconciliation Is An Understatement Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Bout time.
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Case Re-Opened Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
The plot with the Donnelly case is a welcome change of pace. And its nice to know Cory is smiling.
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Let The Games Begin Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Thriller vibe is really hitting.
Date: 03/06/13
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: First Day At Beth's Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
The plot thickens.
Figures Boromir wouldnt know to wrap it up. And Cory was that desperate.
Date: 03/06/13
Summary: In my drama class we had to create a monologue on one aspect of our life. So I chose to link Lord of the Rings with the relationship I have with my dad.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 225 Read Count: 1064
Published: 09/05/12 Updated: 09/05/12 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Great emotion.
I can feel it, the pain.

Author's Response: Deep. Very deep, babe. I can see it, the cheese. XD
Date: 03/05/13
Three Arrows by ToriLee Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 3]
Summary: My Lord of the Rings Conspiracy Theory
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Boromir, Isildur
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 180 Read Count: 768
Published: 01/19/13 Updated: 01/19/13 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Three Arrows: Coincidence? Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed
Good lord. So much sense. o.o
Date: 03/05/13