I just read this chapter for the first time and I just wanted to say that I really like this beginning. Unfortunately, it looks like it hasn't been updated in months. I hope you are able to come back to this soon!
Its been a loooong time since you've updated. I hope things calm down in RL and you are able to update again soon. This is such a good story, it would be a shame for it to remain unfinished. I hope things get better for you soon (and not just so you can update).
This is such a good story, but you left us with a cliffhanger! I hope you are able to update soon, I can't wait to find out what Erestor has found out about Kestrel!
Yay! I'm so glad your updating agan. This is such a good story!
Ouch! Poor Alexandria. Good beginning, I hope you update soon!